The story was good and interesting author but it would be good if you could determine what point of view you want to use because it made me confused whose point of view you are using as I moved on the proceeding chapters, the most basic is use third person perspective or point of view, that way even f there are wrong spelling or grammar readers can easily understand the story... đ sorry if I talked too much but the story is good and interesting inspite of the confusing pov.. đ
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