this is machine translated or written by someone who isn't proficient in English. try translating through AI, and it would come out better

No story here, move on. it's just an MC that levels way too fast and gets his ego stroked by side characters with no personality. The only interesting thing is how the author turns the MC's master into a really ancient master that looks 30 into an actual 27 year old that the MC has wet dreams about

shifty translation, meh story....idk why I read it but this novel is pretty bad. they don't even proofread and so many times person A looks at person A. Seriously not even a competent translation and the story is lackluster

interesting world but needs a lot of editing. Author is probably not fluent in English with so many errors on usage of words and some are spelled phonetically or something close (ie. reviled instead of revealed, of instead of off, integrated instead of interrogated.) If you don't mind trying to interpret as you read it's okay but what bugs me the most is how the chapters seems really short which really slows the progression of the story. Character wise, not much development or uniqueness. Side characters seems to have similar traits that they act out of character or have exactly the same character of someone already introduced in the story. (ie. instructors comes to rescue the children but one of them who is supposed to be experienced is asking why they have a backup portal/exit, they should already know this all and I believe that this is just to fill the word count).

...was expecting something good but I guess ill dial it down

story is kinda crappy so far.. chapters are basically info dump ot fillers or just too short that the story hardly progresses.