Meeks

I'm comment more about it. Take in chapter one, it gave an impression that she looked up to her brother and he took care of her, got it. You really let that impression show. Now, we all know hinata was kidnapped, props to you for interfering. We also know that Hiashi isn't the best dad aswell. In the confrontation, you brought out the chakra aura, which made us think something is going to happen. It didn't, it was such a let down. Thinking back to her big brother experience, if she had put paws on hiashi and was all like, 'I'm going to protect my sister, even from you' vibe. I would have sat up, that would have been gold tier. But from a 'genius' we only got a lacklaster, 'ill do better dad'. I 'm not telling you how to write your story or anything, im just saying, where is the drama, where is the plot twist.. give us something.

Hinoka feels so detached from the story, like everything is easy. Bam bam bam, she feels just like a sideliner. There is no emotion to thiss

Burn it down!

it's like taking candy from a baby-werewolf

Oh Oh Oh, ice training arc coming? is she in the territory of that ice dragon family?

The explanation was very welcome! im interested to see in Kats recovery and journey to get back, as much as im interested to see in retaliation and the period where they don't have Kat as an anchor and how they grow! Goody gimme more!

Love the development here by Jahi(hate that she was about to hit Leone), oooh so our favorite murder pup isnt in those stupid elves hands! *wipes imaginary sweat off*