Frozen_Shackle
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2017-09-27 JoinedAustralia
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10- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoCommented
The harem is expanding?
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoCommented
Plot armour
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoReplied to Electron
I’m at chapter 130. I like Oracle Paths and this. There are some early pacing issues that get sorted, but honestly OP had bigger pacing issues at the start.
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoCommented
Coach got the roids
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoCommented
She is interipting instant speed casting?
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoReplied to Sid3rite
Acute one
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoReplied to JoSauer
Not really on that front. The audience knows he’s somewhat strong, so they can try to arrange the timing to their doom.
- Frozen_Shackle4 years agoCommented
Tower is woke
- Frozen_Shackle5 years agoPosted
Review update - into previous review I said that the pacing was a little slow. I am happy to report these pacing issues are now gone and it is an excellent and consistent read. I’m actually not sure why this is not ranked higher as it is significantly better than MY Vampire System - which has some similar aspects.