what i dont want happenning is him going back to his original world

seriously how long until the next chapter? this better not be another bs author is taking a long break then never comes back

what kind of translation is this? i sort of understand it

do you still have the old chapters ?

the whole thing with mommy needs to stop. if the mc was 10 years old ok fine but he's not.

im guessing this novel is forgotten or dropped. some notice would have been nice. oh well. all i can do is keep it in my libary.

so freaking what he has a lot on his mind. it's not like being in relationship with klea would make him weaker they are both working towards the same goal. seriously how much longer is this going to go on. I swear if they don't end up together you will be smited by a heavenly tribulation. as for Morgana she got what she deserved. considering what she did to those pups she should have died.

how long will the child arc last

its the mc's fault for acting out of the ordinary. someone as perceptive as medaka is going to pick up on it when are we going to see the next chapter

i wont be surprised if he drops this completely .no news or updates within a year totally irresponsible of him too. it was such a novel too. it had come from such an author too well thats life

i read your other fan fic, frankly im dissappointed. this novel had potential too. even though you kinda copied the idea from the other kuroko novel on here thats on hiatus u could have made it to a longer one but oh well

maybe he is stock piling 50 chapters. ?

I really hope Gwen is not the only lover he takes

how many characters from other worlds are u planning on introducing . are they going to have their memories from another life too cause if not someone else already did this in another fan fic in the same world too

Aside from your lack of updates, Im not thrilled you rewrote this. your original version was much better though you made the jump from the naruto world to dbz too quickly and choosing the GT world may have not been the best solution either. If you start updating again then i would go back to the original spend some more time on it in the naruto world and choose dragon ball super instead.

so are going to stockpile another 90 chapters then before releasing more?

she turning out to be the other hinata from the menma universe

so is this dead.

just what WB needed a hajime no ippo fan fic. its about time. so far im loving the story keep up the good work

so im guessing this is a sequel of blue phoenix right?