Aside from your lack of updates, Im not thrilled you rewrote this. your original version was much better though you made the jump from the naruto world to dbz too quickly and choosing the GT world may have not been the best solution either. If you start updating again then i would go back to the original spend some more time on it in the naruto world and choose dragon ball super instead.
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