Plamler

Slogged through this one. Genuinely some of the dumbest writing and worst pacing

Nope, it’s been four years

The same thing again with the only unique part being the obstacle of being cripple which became extremely irrelevant after he gets divine sense around 100 pages.

What novel?

It turns into this? That is sad af. Why would the author make this worldly and humble MC that talks about how much of a shame it is that other People are not helping putThe struggles of the destitute, just to turn him into some ruthless secretive hypocrite.

Pretty decent story if you don’t mojd Gary Stu narratives. 50 chapters in and it seems like the MC is playing a singleplayer game, having him completely seperated from grouping due to his own fear of betryal is bad enough, But limiting him from Starting/being a part of a Guild is Just as strange. I think that the ultimate drawback for this novel is the choice of not expanding on the state that the MC was in prior to traveling back in time. As a neutral reader I couldn’t care less about his struggles if I know nothing about it. Also making him the Son of an Angel and then having him avoid the church like the plague is really wierd. Intially it would seem that he doesnt need to have a guild because he essentially is a high ranking member of the church by birthright. I am already assuming that the church is going to clichely turn out evil. I did think it might twist the plot in a way that shows him succeed in the game extraordinarily, while having him still have to live through the crumbling of his family regardless of their wealth. But it doesn’t seem like that anyways :/

Why are we in a new arc? The last one didn’t even finish. literally felt like we hit the midpoint.

Bruh, chapter was literally nothing :(

Uhh, sounds like he would murder her before she can transform into a dragon tbh

You have created a really lovable character, Thanks for making me smile every upload