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I mean you now have a chapter that is called pokemon. There you can see all the pokemon Ace has an their information. I think it’s also a good idea to make that for the characters in the novel. For example: Name: Ace Gender: Man Age: 15 Looks: Place image here Personality: Playfull, serious. Something like this.

Keep up the good work. Just a suggestion: maybe get a chapter with people in it. You did it for Ace pokemon but not for him and the rest of the important people.

Mel is really beautifull. Just saying if it won’t be Caitlyn it should be Mel.

Yeah I now that now😂😂😂. In the future this will be adressed. I don’t want a loli for Callum.

Ehm I think you meant to upload an other chapter because this is part 2 according to you’re chapter title.

Get Jinx as familia member.

Maybe for next member is Serena from Skyrim. Maybe also get something for the MC so he has a stronger body like body cultivation or super serum etc.

No need. Stuff happens. Keep up the good work. For mind cultivation douluo Dalu 2 should give you some inspiration.

Hé Will become the holy god of the undead.

Nice novel. Keep up the good work. Hope he also is going to get a body cultivation method.