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Frustrating how the same trope used in the original terror infinity is being used here. Hope Sarah dies and fast. Had rare nitpickings with this fanfic so far but her relationship with Alex take the cake.

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Though I really enjoyed your fma arc even if it was short. I would like if you re-visited it.

I'll leave it to the author. I trust in your work more than my decision.

A very pleasant surprise!! Welcome back, great to see you are in better health.

The author’s note is completely unnecessary. You’ve started off with Zero notes but now half the chapters consist of you explaining your writing. Those that complain won’t even care about it, they are just bored and want someone to troll. I am mentioning this because it’s frustrating to see the redundant A/N and since other newbie authors gave up due to this.

I would prefer if you went with - Baki universe It’s top fighter level are not as high as the kenichi but the characters and fights are better developed. Likewise the martial arts exploration is much better.

Damn I am heartbroken💔. No worries I hope you find the other site more accommodating. Best of luck. Sincere fan.

There was no need for the racist dialogue within the chapter. Also plz add a brief background summary of the team as an index, I am having difficulty remembering the players. On another note, I like that you’ve taken full advantage of the first two mission worlds. One aspect that I think should be improved is the skill description and reason for purchase. Although I like the cultivation addition, I have difficulty appreciating it since you’ve yet to mention the benefits to any of the realms he’s broken through.

Starting to regret discovering this novel early. I’ve become way too addicted and always anticipating new releases. Feeling awful! A sign of a good author is when the readers feel a 5k chapter as 1k. Congrats because that’s what I feel.