salark is pregnant so that ranking needs to change :)

thank you :)

Quite a good point, thank you :)

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you've liked the story up to that point. I also appreciate the criticism and will keep it in mind for future chapters (30+) :)

Well i must say, I've seen many reincarnation stories so I was surprised to actually see such a good one. The writing is superb, hardly any notable flaws the vivid descriptions and the perfect narration make you feel you are watching a movie rather than reading a story the author also causes unimaginable pain with the suspense but a good kind :) I quite also enjoy the type of comedy that is used here. please write more :)

Thanks :)

The main idea of the story has potential and I believe there are many things that will be revealed in the future. A lot is also revealed about the world setting so you won’t be stuck in a mist like veil with almost every other character in the story knowing more than you. The narration is also quite unique, the over convoluted sentences that plague many other novels, making you skip paragraphs have little presence in this story. I don’t want to spoil so I’ll just say the first few chapters are full of surprises :)

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

😅 it's not like i put him through this just for the kick of it, there are reasons that you'll find out about in future chapters. though I can say he will go through alot, it won't happen with such intensity for a while :)

Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars. I thought of the core ideas of this novel a few years back and even tried writing it once but between studying and working I had to abandon it. While the situation is still the same, I am trying my best to fit this in my schedule. I’m trying my best to organize my thoughts and put them into words but I will need your comments and reviews to perform better. I’ll take your thoughts and reviews into consideration and try to improve (though there are some aspects of the story that I’m not willing to change). The story contains many r18 scenes like sex, gore and torture and most of them are either relevant to the plot, informative or impact the characters’ development. The pace of the story will be slow for a while since I want to introduce the different aspects of this world as realistically as possible without any info dump chapters. The story has a large world and I want to incorporate most of the races and places into the story. There are some important points that I will mention here. I don’t like overpowered Mc s that gain immense power suddenly or suddenly in very short durations so I’ll do my best to make the process make sense. Also I don’t like the obscure power levels/scales or usage of magic like in some novels. In this story, a mass of a person won’t change if they suddenly grow larger due to an ability or sth that defies the laws of physics. I’m more inclined toward powers like in the Supreme Magus novel (btw one of my favorites). There probably will be some grammatical mistakes since 1- English is not my first language and 2- I don’t have an editor. So, point out the errors you see and I’ll fix them myself. I appreciate if you could post reviews and comments; they will motivate me and help me improve. I would also appreciate it if you could use your power stones here (once it unlocks ofc). That’s all for now, ask me your questions if you have any ;D

well he is king, his job is manipulating people 😂

exp

oh nice

thank you and good luck in your interview

exp

thank you

thank you, cant wait to read another chapter

this book was o e of the top 5 on my list, I've been reading it since the beginning still w8ing for the next chapter 😭

Holy shit I did not see that twist coming .... GREAT JOB