Review Detail of Rushakh in A Deathly Life

Shameless author here giving myself 5 stars. I thought of the core ideas of this novel a few years back and even tried writing it once but between studying and working I had to abandon it. While the situation is still the same, I am trying my best to fit this in my schedule. I’m trying my best to organize my thoughts and put them into words but I will need your comments and reviews to perform better. I’ll take your thoughts and reviews into consideration and try to improve (though there are some aspects of the story that I’m not willing to change). The story contains many r18 scenes like sex, gore and torture and most of them are either relevant to the plot, informative or impact the characters’ development. The pace of the story will be slow for a while since I want to introduce the different aspects of this world as realistically as possible without any info dump chapters. The story has a large world and I want to incorporate most of the races and places into the story. There are some important points that I will mention here. I don’t like overpowered Mc s that gain immense power suddenly or suddenly in very short durations so I’ll do my best to make the process make sense. Also I don’t like the obscure power levels/scales or usage of magic like in some novels. In this story, a mass of a person won’t change if they suddenly grow larger due to an ability or sth that defies the laws of physics. I’m more inclined toward powers like in the Supreme Magus novel (btw one of my favorites). There probably will be some grammatical mistakes since 1- English is not my first language and 2- I don’t have an editor. So, point out the errors you see and I’ll fix them myself. I appreciate if you could post reviews and comments; they will motivate me and help me improve. I would also appreciate it if you could use your power stones here (once it unlocks ofc). That’s all for now, ask me your questions if you have any ;D