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svedlr9mthCommentedlol as if u are the big deal
Shang only hoped that she realized all of this.- svedlr9mthCommented
Can over-explaining make this a good novel?
Additionally, Shang allowed her to rectify her earlier blunder. - svedlr1yrPosted
I rated it low because I'm disappointed of the story. It started good but it gets confusing as the story proceed. The character also is always nerfed, he has a strong will to survive but he'll not kill those who are a threat to his survival. And with his abnormal intelligence his logic is kinda weird and he don't have the killing mentality that is a prerequisite for surviving in that kind of world. I already invision the MC being strong but his enemy will be stronger and there are lots of them. In short its boring haha don't waste your time. There's no novel in webnovel that has logic
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The sheltered life created an indecisive and procrastinating mindset. He had no idea what he wanted to do with his life, as increasing pressure from other family members made him increasingly uncomfortable. Like many lonely and asocial nerds before him, he found a way out of reality by reading, binge-watching and playing video games. - svedlr1yrPosted
Brain Crystal Power Strengthening (Allows the gaining of the energy attribute points) does it add energy attributes if he consume brain crystals or consume the DNA of a thaid?? also how do people in that world become stronger? by consuming pills or something? or they just level up as they grow up? it's kinda confusing and the story is super slow.. his system is not use at its maximum.. like he can just go to the library and copy important knowledge or let the system dig in the internet information of anything that can make him stronger
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what do u expect loser wth man
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hayst what a loser.. with puppy eyes at that ha
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btw how do people in this world increases their mana????
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he's begging to be exploited.. again...
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it will save the MC's life for sure the thickest plot armor
[You have obtained the passive skill '?4E$%6!F42.6C45-20#4#26!C4?F6?F!4$4'.] - svedlr1yrCommented
garbage
'It'll have to wait until after I ascend, though.' - svedlr1yrCommented
u teach him to forge?? when? how? just a narcissist or pure delusional?
"To think I'd teach someone who'd forge a Common+ grade dagger on their first successful attempt… it definitely feels weird." As a smile continued to adorn his face, a screen opened up in front of Tristan, prompting him to interact with it before shifting his attention to Valyr. - svedlr1yrCommented
bs or nah?
"Surprisingly, once I got my spear from Damian, a thought appeared in my mind." - svedlr1yrCommented
MC's too slow for being a reincarnated soldier
Seeing as he had no other way to get those skills other than from that area, he made up his mind to talk to Damian about it sometime later. 'Well, I'd still have to do it either way if I want to ascend to that Rank 1 class. Any other method that comes to mind is currently far above my reach, after all.' - svedlr1yrReplied to TrueDawn
your portrayal of him in this "to be a blacksmith" arc is just .not okay. also with his experience in his last life i guess he can get even stronger than he is rn not the nerfed and stupid MC
As he listened to these words, Valyr could not help but nod in agreement, recalling the many other times he had heard these same words said to him in the past. Even though it seemed like such a piece of advice could come naturally to any person, this part was what eluded most amateur blacksmiths from becoming blacksmiths of their own right. In fact, it took Valyr a few months in his past life to fully understand this quote, committing mistakes in the hundreds before his mind finally got into the right mindset. - svedlr1yrCommented
I don't know why the MC still with the blacksmith is it because of the facilities? this whole blacksmith thing is stupid
"At the start, I thought I was onto something, so I kept at it," Valyr said sometime later, quickly coming up with an excuse for his gradually worsening performance. "Though, as time passed, I became more and more unsure if what I was doing was correct, so I tried correcting myself. Near the end, I didn't know if what I was doing was right anymore." - svedlr1yrCommented
he got nervous for what reason? this is just pure bs. do experienced people get nervous with this kind of situation? "no"
'In fact, I think he already is.' As he took a quick glance at Tristan, wondering if the latter was still in the process of tempering the blade he had forged, he instead saw Tristan staring at him intently, which could not help but make Valyr feel a little bit nervous. - svedlr1yrCommented
u teach what????
Now having grown from that phase, Tristan could not help but feel giddy that he was going to become the teacher of a natural blacksmith, letting his mind wander about as he wondered how renowned Valyr's name would be in the years to come. Though, as he thought about it, there was also another possibility Valyr could be aside from a natural blacksmith. Thinking about this other possibility, Tristan's eyes could not help but darken as he thought, 'Either he's a natural… or he's just hiding all of the past experience he actually has on blacksmithing before deciding to learn under me.'