LackOfLovelife

The thing is, the MC is a son of a Duke. No matter how trashy he is, he's got a strong background. But almost everyone is trying to humiliate him. What's the point of giving him that background if it's not even going to be used? Like, the hell? A Duke has a reputation, everyone below his status should be afraid of offending someone like that. No matter how useless the person is, that background should have provided him some solid advantage. This big of a plot hole makes me think that the Author is not socially adept. No sane person would like to risk their lives to offend someone with authority. The position of a Duke carries a lot. The author does not seem to be aware of that. The foundation of this novel is meh. Just that is enough for me to drop this. Bye.

EXCATLY MY THOUGHT

your story is great but the grammar is so bad!! hahaha it's just so meh haha

haha he should have named it "dat knee"

So I tried really hard to continue on, but the way it was written sounds so unlively in my mind. The way it was written does not give life to the characters is what puts me off it. It has potential but once you read it, the words, the sentence construction gives off an impression that the writer does not have English as their first language. They used some deep words in the wrong time and ways. It's just awkward in a sense that it's not enjoyable to read, because It's like you are reading bible with wrong grammars and horrible sentence construction, in others words, boring, lifeless and truly unremarkable.

i wish he could erase us all out.

it should be "aren't I?", not "isn't he"

it s not famous because it of the grammar. it became not appealing the moment the grammatical errors really really fast escalated from worse to worst.

y dont u create ur own story then put ur suggestion to ur story?

yes?