KlausStarup

yea i saw that he would have 50% of his power and now you dole it down to 10% he also have essences that prevent manipulations and nerfs. so in essence what you have done is taken his ROB insurance essence and stripped it of him then made him5 times weaker, all you had to do to introduce him was to have put him as nr. 50 and claimed the invite was a glitch but since he was here ohh ok. uncool to memory supress him too that just totaly undid everything cool about this story. :(

I find the story to have potential, eccept for SUPER BETA mc. letting everyone walk right over him. with his power, it just feels both dumb and stupid. and half of it is playing house with worthless mortals. sorry have potential is Trash.

i like it so far, as for secondary class, hey if i were you and considering your in with ozpin, i would go with wizard apprentis, since oz, is a genuine wizard.

great story liked it untill expidition he have 10* stats of everyone else and on top of that its on each level, him beeing trashed like he was a lvl 5 noone with trash stats, just made the story wierd, really it means the stats are honestly worthless. he is no better than anyone else and he have same tras weekness and honestly he should on stats alone trash ANYthing no matter what kinda pathetic excuse you use, and then he wana become undeath lich, meaning absolutly 0 sexlife. wtf story turned 100% trash after that. was good with great potential untill you decided he was a lvl 1 noob despite having 50k more stats than ANYone,.

thanks

again honestly a good story, reason i mention his mutant powers is he were told and warned to train them, and that never happened, so according to storyline i waiting for him to be slapped down hard loose at least 1 wife and be totaly destroyed becourse he dident listen.

i really like the story but i have a question, so many skills and such were named but 1 thing never were. what is harrys mutation since we never were told we have no clue what it is, and as far as i can see its there untrained and unused. so what is it... ???

love your story well writen and fun actualy, you mentioned a last wife. for all that is holy and good about your story dont let it be yasaka or kuroka its done in every story and its tiering to see ppl only pick them for huge brests and nothing else. hera or amaterasu and to some extent luna lovegood, since she would become able to become like him and his 1st wife.

I would honestly sit her down after the labyrinth and say that he honestly thinks she is week becourse she refuses to control her instincts and that he feels like she is just like the ones in the labyrinth, and she should back off a little becourse he is honestly uncomfortable around her becourse of it.

Its getting better, but the Tione situation still bothers me lol, she is the same kind of rapist animal they just slaughtered in the 100s so Mc should honestly tell her she acts just like them and stay away from him, since they are all filthy scum, just course she havent succed yet dont change the fact that she think is her right to be a rapist animal.... ( Disgusting kind of ppl)