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huh?
it's not!! there's an announcement with the actor of Daniel and Jackie chanabout a new movie, so the two movies are in the same universe
dont tell the people your plot points
it's about write right, if you have your brain stunted for reading bad Chinese quality fiction its not my problem
please, for the love of god, separate in paragraphs who is talking
here is an example of what is wrong with your Mc that attitude is cringe inductive in general another thing, separate in different paragraphs who is talking, is confusing
inner monologue and his attitude in general with other people
that's leet shard, it literally hate him, because he is too cautious about everything, and the MC he already have a body that was triggered before he came to be and triggered a 2dn time, that really don't help him in the long run, I think that even if he don't need to sleep, it is messing up with his brain (even more)
that's the thing, they don't know, their powers seek conflict and if is possible it brainwash their host to make use of the power, the shard was created to see new forms of the use of powers
by his power
if you know about the story you would know that isn't the case, he is controlled by his power
she died en her first mission, I think So, there isn't a lot of lore, it gives a lot of room to play with the story
sorry, it wasn't that she run away because she's a hoe pr something like that?