Elzurdomaldito
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Elzurdomaldito20dReplied to Dini_Jimenezmaybe try to chance the style, try to insert different comamds, like draw instead of realistic, it gives some nice touch also, you can keep making new art even if you don't have any coins, you only have to press f5
BTW [Insert IMG of Sora] What do you guys think of anyone of those?- Elzurdomaldito26dReplied to Luft_Rauser
hahaha, that's a good one, going to steal this one xD
[Rotom Phone new functions- Live Streaming, Groupchat, Pokedex, Dexnav, Trading, connected to System Store] - Elzurdomaldito1mthReplied to Callmelight
no
[Rotom Phone new functions- Live Streaming, Groupchat, Pokedex, Dexnav, Trading, connected to System Store] - Elzurdomaldito1mthCommented
live streaming??? I'm gettin' out of here
[Rotom Phone new functions- Live Streaming, Groupchat, Pokedex, Dexnav, Trading, connected to System Store] - Elzurdomaldito1mthReplied to EroSpatula
ohh, thanks
Fortunately, she was still young, and her family hadn't had time to teach her too much about emotional matters. She didn't realize that she had unknowingly eaten a mouthful of dog food. - Elzurdomaldito2mthCommentedCh 37 Guys there are 140 stones left.
- Elzurdomaldito2mthCommented
huh?
Fortunately, she was still young, and her family hadn't had time to teach her too much about emotional matters. She didn't realize that she had unknowingly eaten a mouthful of dog food. - Elzurdomaldito4mthCommentedCh 212 CH_6.41 (212)
- Elzurdomaldito4mthReplied to Jay0Kay
it's not!! there's an announcement with the actor of Daniel and Jackie chanabout a new movie, so the two movies are in the same universe
Dre Parker: "[I'm going to China, bro. This is freaking crazy.]" - Elzurdomaldito7mthReplied to GJCaesar
dont tell the people your plot points
Though from what I remember the main group targeting me would be the best to work with, they have shown time and time again in the various media that they are the good guys; and let's face it, Black Widow is very easy on the eyes so there's that. - Elzurdomaldito9mthReplied to Kwetzal_Lag
it's about write right, if you have your brain stunted for reading bad Chinese quality fiction its not my problem
"If it's not too much trouble I'd really appreciate the help." Birch said with an honest smile. "It's no trouble at all since Gaia can easily break up this layer of rock and stir the soil nice and deep , you'll need a good bit of fertilizer though before you can really use the earth for planting berries but for grasses and trees it should be fine." I said while tapping into my farming skill knowledge. "How much fertilizer do you think I'll need?" Birch asked seriously to get an idea of what he's looking at.- - Elzurdomaldito9mthCommented
please, for the love of god, separate in paragraphs who is talking
"If it's not too much trouble I'd really appreciate the help." Birch said with an honest smile. "It's no trouble at all since Gaia can easily break up this layer of rock and stir the soil nice and deep , you'll need a good bit of fertilizer though before you can really use the earth for planting berries but for grasses and trees it should be fine." I said while tapping into my farming skill knowledge. "How much fertilizer do you think I'll need?" Birch asked seriously to get an idea of what he's looking at.- - Elzurdomaldito9mthCommented
here is an example of what is wrong with your Mc that attitude is cringe inductive in general another thing, separate in different paragraphs who is talking, is confusing
"You aren't by chance single are you?" Lily asked and May choked on her mouthful of food. "MOM!" she exclaimed with a bright red face. Lily scoffed at her though "Don't mom me! Alex here seems like a great trainer , he's fairly well mannered , handsome and can cook! It would be a shame to miss out on such a good match for you." she said reducing May to a blushing mess. "I'm flattered but I am not a fan of getting tied down to any one woman." I said honestly with a smile.- - Elzurdomaldito9mthCommented
inner monologue and his attitude in general with other people
A/N: There have been a few things brought up that I feel need to be addressed. First is that I don't get to pick and choose what pokemon gets trained , I use a legitimate roulette wheel for that. The only exception to this was Vulcan and that was merely because so very few pokemon fics allow the MC to have a legendary at all and none that I can think of showed the legendary growing strong after being weaker which was a huge pity in my opinion. Second was that a few people are wondering about how friendly he was behaving despite his recovering apathy. The answer to this is that he is a VERY good actor , which had been mentioned previously. His attitude hasn't changed or anything all that much but he is merely really good at faking it. Third is more of a personal gripe of mine but why is everyone saying "cringe" on the interaction between Alex and Emas mom? Like he's not flirting with her or anything of the sort but everyone seems to be thinking deeper than that for some reason I just don't get. - Elzurdomaldito9mthCommented"A bit delayed but welcome to Littleroot Mister ?" she starts but awkwardly realized that I hadn't introduced myself yet. "Alexander drake , but I go by Alex" I say with a smile. "Mister Alex then welcome to the village! I am Emily Vine , but little May over there calls me aunty V." Emily says with a friendly smile. She was an older woman with a few wrinkles starting to appear but otherwise was fairly attractive. On her finger was a wedding ring however that told me she was off the market and thus I spoke in a friendly but neutral manner.-
- Elzurdomaldito9mthReplied to ScientistXxXx
that's leet shard, it literally hate him, because he is too cautious about everything, and the MC he already have a body that was triggered before he came to be and triggered a 2dn time, that really don't help him in the long run, I think that even if he don't need to sleep, it is messing up with his brain (even more)
Why did I do this to myself? - Elzurdomaldito9mthReplied to ScientistXxXx
that's the thing, they don't know, their powers seek conflict and if is possible it brainwash their host to make use of the power, the shard was created to see new forms of the use of powers
Why did I do this to myself? - Elzurdomaldito9mthReplied to Experienced_weeb
by his power
Why did I do this to myself? - Elzurdomaldito9mthReplied to ScientistXxXx
if you know about the story you would know that isn't the case, he is controlled by his power
Why did I do this to myself? - Elzurdomaldito9mthCommentedYou are currently logged in, Guitar_Boy69