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....man its pretty obvious you were either forced to read it or were just not engaged enough in the story maybe or something to do with your mindset at that time.... or your circumstances ..., if that's the case just switch books as its pretty obvious by a few chapters that it will not be enjoyable for you ..... forcing will only spoil your own experience no matter how good the dish may actually be ...after all its relative so no point going over critical with your analysis [img=exp]

keep writing , your ideas are similar to me and my friends ...um philosophical debates 😅🤔

thats it keep the story going ~~~

The story is good especially if you carve both science and magic and want and see what happens if both worlds collide and fuse....💯full points from me .

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