"This place should be called hell instead"

.Seventeen Fanfic.

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Após as férias de verão, a vida de Haru volta ao normal, ela volta a morar no dormitório da escola e a passar os dias com sua melhor amiga Kari. No entanto, no primeiro dia de aula Haru reencontra um garoto que conheceu nas férias, e surpreendentemente, ele é o garoto mais popular de seu ano.
Se você está procurando por algo clichê, essa história não é pra você, coisas surpreendentes acontecem em Árgon!

Sorry for not uploading for the last couple of months. At the time I had gotten a second job so I was extremely busy. There was also the fact that I couldn't progress the story at the time due to the whole Seventeen nonsense. But I had gotten rid of that obstacle and even wrote like 10 chaps while rewriting the previous 2. I did progress on the story but felt discouraged to upload it since it had been a long time. People would've forgotten what even happened in this story. I'll be honest, I kind of lost motivation writing this fanfic as well. I don't think it's a good story but it was my first ever fanfic so I really tried to improve.

But recently I have picked up writing again since I quit my second job a short while ago. I like writing since it's fun for me. But now, I don't know what to do?

Should I upload those 10 chapters and have slow updates? Or should I just leave it as it is?

I have recently started another fanfic that I would like to focus more time on, but then again I still have a job IRL. 

I know I said I wouldn't drop it or put it on hiatus but I was naive then since writing takes so much time and I don't like to half-ass things.

This is also a hobby of mine and I can't set aside my priorities.

I will still write my other fanfic but do let me know, what do you want me to do with this one? I could continue it, but as I said, it will be difficult and you shouldn't expect much of it.

But if you do decide that you want this story to continue, I won't half-ass it and give up on it since what would be the point of picking it back up again? I also still know how I want the plot to continue so it wouldn't be that hard picking it back up, but the stability of chapters will be the main problem.












MC will transmigrated as Yang Chen. My first fanfic so constructive criticism is welcome. This novel Isn't serious ,I'm just bored and doing this for fun. By the way the cover does not belong to me.

I'll be pausing this novel because i feel that though this novel was an original idea i've had for a while it was poorly executed and i really like this idea and don't want to ruin it with bad writing. So i'll make other stories and get more experience with them before i resume writing this novel though that doesn't mean i'll give up on writing dragon ball fanfics all together. 
I'll be writing a dragonball gt fanfic called dragonball gt revised i'll be using the same villains and including the same characters has in dragon ball gt because i believe that gt had a lot of potential but failed to live up to it i mean dragon ball gt could have made the super seventeen arc easily one of the best arcs in dragon ball history and with good fresh characters like uub/majuub, teen goten and trunks, super android 17, pan and bulla  has well has interesting concepts like super saiyan 4 and shadow dragons it easily could have been one if not the best dragon ball related anime out there plus it also used movie related concepts like dragon fist. so yea i'll be writing a dragon ball gt fanfic in which i'll try to bring out the best of each arc's potential first chapters coming out today or tomorrow.

ever so often a genius is born one that surpasses the rest someone that represents major change in the dynamic of the world. rijen is one such genius who studies in many fields With biology has the field he's best at after a strange man offers him something that he can't refuse. read to find out how he will change the world. Don't own the picture or dragon ball z and any other things mentioned in this fanfic expect for my original characters.

In the morning, Alina went to the newcomers' camp - alone. She stopped at the very outskirts of what seemed like their own makeshift town. Wooden, wall-less houses were haphazardly put together. The only things that didn't look like they were about to fall apart were the vehicles.
Four men aimed weapons at her, and she raised her hands in the air coolly, "Don't fuss, gentlemen. I'm only here to talk."
"Check her."
They pat her down and one said, "Clear. No weapons."
A voice came from behind them, "No weapons? Now that is quite stupid. Walking into enemy lines without even a knife."
"As I said: I'm only here to talk."
"Then talk we will. Walk with me."
Alina went the furthest into enemy lines she had ever been... and she wasn't afraid in the slightest.
"Now. What would a strong tribeswoman like yourself come, unarmed, to an enemy camp?"
"The chief sent me to negotiate terms."
"Terms, I assume, are more than just suggestions."
"From the chief, they are negotiable. From me, however, they are more warnings."
"Might I remind you that you are in my camp, and I won't allow some island girl make threats against me."
"Might I remind you that you are on my island, and I won't allow some outsider tell me how to speak."
He frowned and narrowed his eyes, but his expression softened a little. He nodded for her to speak.
"As you and your men so politely came ashore, I have a few things that you should know. Past the beach, there are unmapped land mines that you should heed. I don't know how many there are, so it's best you leave the rest of the island to us. We wouldn't want someone to lose a leg, now would we?" She smirked at the slightly agitated Englishman.
"If they are so unmapped, then how do you get around?"
"Unmapped by you, sir."
"Very well. The forest is off limits."
"Oh, but that's not all, sir. See, you killed seventeen tribesmen. That is something, I'm afraid, I cannot ignore."
"What do you suggest we do?" He was getting quite annoyed.
"Well, it's quite simple. Either you and your men leave this place within the coming week and never come back again, or you dispose of those dreadful vehicles that pollute this air more than that fire you started yesterday."
"I'm afraid those vehicles are necessities for us..."
"Oh, that's fine, I already took the liberty of disposing of two."
"That was you?! You killed five of my men! And many more with what your men did to them..."
"Well, excuse yourself, sir! You murdered SEVENTEEN of my men! So sorry if yours are weak-minded!"
A few soldiers approached the fuming tribeswoman, "Should we deal with her, sir?"
The general put a hand up, "No need. Be off."
Alina looked down at him, her tone seething with anger, "You have your choices, general. You best choose wisely."
She turned and left a red faced general. He didn't realize that he had been tense during the whole conversation. He felt confusingly relieved after she left.
Alina returned to the inner village and immediately went to her father's location. She lowered her hood and breathed out, "I have given them the terms. They have until next week to decide, or we teach them not to mess with Suoyou Fùqīn."
He gave a proud grin, "Excellent, Alina. Your mother would be as proud as I am now."
She hugged him and went out to look for Chan to tell him what happened. This better work.

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Hey there, readers! I hope you're enjoying this fanfic! Bear with me here because this story is just getting started. Tell me what you think of Alina's character and hit me up if you had any ideas!
. MKE .

Hey... Author here.

The past few days I don't really know what to do anymore.

I'm going to be honest with everyone here.

If you check my books. A lot of them share one common thing.

They reach a few dozen chapters. Then they stop.

Stop because of my stupidity.

Stop because my brain was apparently hardwired to say that. "Oh... This thing sucks. I could do better."

"You should re write it cause you fucked up."

Yeah... My brain keeps telling me that.

If I'm not satisfied with my work I tend to make plans on re writing it.

Being summoned isn't easy at all.

The Almighty Supporter.

Even my fanfic. (SL3 DXD ATG) The boy who leapt through the multiverse.

All of them... Kinda stop.

Stop due to me wanting to re write them and I hate it.

Why want to re write these books?

I...

Well I just keep doubting myself. Pessimism and all that. Every chapter I release I ask myself if I'm doing good. And every person who kinda... Read my novels And stay. Comment or give powerstone.

It warms me up that someone out there is having fun reading my trash. Yet it also pressures me a little. Telling myself that I should not fuck up or disappoint the readers.

At the same time. My stupid low self esteem personality tells me that what I'm writing is utter stupidity.

Three times man. Three times. Three novels...

Three times I made something alright. Only to be ruined by what I think and losing all motivation or heart. Making me want to re write things again.

I'm not looking for clout.

I don't want to be praised or something.

I just want to write a goddamn novel and complete it without feeling that I'm not good enough. And maybe get it adapted into a manga if I do good enough.

I just want to successfully...

Successfully create a world that people can get lost in.

A world that can serve as an escape from reality.

I know how shitty life can be despite being 17.

I just want to do that!

But i can't!

I admit. I suck at writing.

Yet I have high writing standards.

Chuchuhu chapter should be like this etc.

This should make reader cry chuchuchu....

Chuchchu you must make the reader get lost and immersed in the work.

Those things. Make it harder to write.

When I write... I'll reach up to 2k words for a chapter.

Then if I feel like the chapter isn't good enough.

I delete everything I've written. And start again. Rinse repeat. Rinse repeat. Sometimes it takes five restarts. Sometimes ten or more.

This adds up to my self disappointment.

I know my novel has potential and I know it has a good future. I've thought out the plot. ending and key moments.

Yet I suck at execution.

Goddangit. I don't know why I'm breaking down all of a sudden.

I don't know why I'm like this.

In my mind... Are hundreds of stories. Hundreds of unique settings. Scifi. Fantasy. Psychological Horror. Stuff like that.

The Almighty Supporter... I wanted it's main takeaway to be "you die a hero or live long enough to be the villain."

Being Summoned Isn't Easy at all. I wanted to show what makes a human. Human. And how a monster can be a human albeit being cold and ruthless. And how even a monster can be better than humanity itself.

I hate it! I hate myself.

Maybe I should just quit writing at this point.

A stupid seventeen year old boy who can't even form proper sentences shouldn't even dream of making something good.

I just feel so lost.

Sorry if you loved this novel.

Sorry for disappointing again.

At the end of the day. Once my brain finally settles on an answer.

It's either that this book gets re written or I pick up another book from my list of to re writes.

Or I may just quit.

I'll be gone for a few days. Even up to a month.

I'm just seventeen. I should be happy and play video games at home due to this stupid pandemic. I'm at home...

But this home...

Why does it feel like a cage?

Gosh Darn It Read The Tags before reading the book.

Update: I've re-written the book. It's name is now "Lord of Marionettes". Go search it or find it in my works if you still are interested in reading it.

Synopsis:

Reincarnation. Your typical wish that couldn't be fulfilled so easily.

But what would you do if you got reincarnated inside a game? A VRMMORPG to be exact?

Would you go around gathering women or aim to be the very best fighter like no one ever was? Or would the arcane arts interest you with a good old cup of Explosion!

Follow the journey of Dominic Remington. A 21 year old gamer and beta tester as he lives life as the hero's suppor-

"Stop! Cut the script! I didn't sign up for this! I was happy living life getting paid while playing games! I had an actual life you know?"

"And please explain how my new best friend suddenly changed? And why are women starting to flock towards me? I'm not ready to be a harem king!"

"I'm a buff dispenser? I didn't want this! Send me back!"


Reincarnated against his wishes and armed with a strange system. Dominic sets out on a journey to get stronger to survive and use his obsession with muscles and violence to defy the logic of "Reverie".

But fate seemed to have other plans as dark undercurrents threaten to turn his world upside down.

Welcome to Reverie... Your new life.

"Nooooooo!"


P.S: Chapters 1-10 are soon to be rewritten and edited one day.

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