Outline of a novel idea I want to test on the community. Please leave any questions, comments and concerns in the comment section. If you all like the outline I will upload 3 times a week or more at my availability. please and thank you for the read.

Author: 314 (Yang Chen)
 
After you confirm what genre and topic you wish to write about, it's now time for you as an author to design your settings and write the overall planned outline for your plot. As for why I'm putting these two elements together, that's because these two elements are deeply interconnected and inseparable.
 
When you're writing the overall outline, this is basically coming up with the story's plot. As you write the outline, what you're actually doing is fleshing out the details for your setting.
 
When you're writing a story, of course, you need to first consider where your story will happen, when it happens, who it happens to, and what type of person it happens to. As the story progresses, you also need to consider who the main character will meet in the story, what time and place he or she meets them at, along with who's stronger and who's weaker than the main character…
 
This is why by the time that you're finished with your overall outline, the world's background, various factions, levels, special abilities, treasures, all the important characters… and such settings will be naturally completed during the course of outlining.
 
The reverse is true as well. If you first work on designing the detailed settings instead, then you'll basically end up with an outline for the story's plot and how the main character grows over the story as well.
 
Of course, there's still some differences depending on which angle you start from. However, newcomer authors like you don't need to worry about this. You can simply create based on your personality and whatever you prefer. It doesn't matter whether you start from the settings or the outline. You can even do both at the same time.
 
For newcomer authors like you, there's only five points that are critically important for you to understand.
 
1.      Having an overall outline isn't absolutely necessary, but having one is always better than not having one
 
Theoretically speaking, even if you didn't prepare an overall outline, it might not affect the progress of you writing your novel at all. There are some authors out there that simply write whatever comes into their mind and go with the flow.
 
Of course, this is all just a best-case scenario in theory. For the great majority of authors out there, once your story's plot exceeds your planned outline... 

Your outline will help your story stay on track in the early stages, but once you reach the mid and late stages, all sorts of problems often appear, such as too many plotlines all at once, self-contradictory plotlines, or writer's block…
 
At such a time, authors will typically regret not creating a more detailed outline, but it's already too late now. Actually, overall outlines have more uses than you think.
 
Since webnovels are typically longer than normal novels, they take much longer to write as well. Typically, it takes an average author several months or even longer to finish writing everything in their overall outline. By the time that they're finish writing everything in their overall outline, most authors will have new ideas and insights into what they want to write. Once they combine their new ideas with their original outline, in a way, this gives them two sources of inspiration. It's basically the equivalent of two people working together, and on top of that, these two people know exactly what each other are thinking.
 
It's easy to see how this can be helpful in improving the quality of your novel.
 
Apart from this, while creating an overall outline, the author can also discover many topics or problems with the settings and correct them in time.
 
To give an extreme example, if you're having a great difficulty with writing your overall outline and don't know what to do with your own plot, this proves that there's a large problem with your plot. You should either make major changes, or delete this part of your plot entirely.
 
So, newcomer authors definitely shouldn't overlook the uses of having an overall outline. No matter if you have a good or bad outline, a simple or a detailed one, as long as you have one, that's good.
 
What needs to be noted is that only outlines that have been written out truly count as outlines.
 
Even if you as an author have a very detailed outline, and even if you've solidly memorized every single plot point in your outline, any outline that hasn't been written into your novel doesn't count as a true outline. That's because when you actually start writing, you'll discover that what you finally end up writing will always have differences from what you envisioned.
 
2.      You need to finish your outline, but it doesn't need to be complete
 
Thinking about your outline is equivalent to thinking about your novel's plot. You need to consider both the beginning and the end. You also need to think about everything that the main character experiences from the beginning to the end of the story.
 
If your outline isn't finished, but only half-finished, you won't even be able to predict the storylines that come later, which will cause you to have difficulties writing your plot once you finish the beginning stages. This is basically the same as not having an outline at all.
 
Still, there's no need for us to make the outline as detailed as possible from the very beginning, with so many specific scenarios for all your plots. The reason for this is quite simple—none of us know just how long our novels will turn out to be in the end.
 
A story that's written with the intent of becoming a commercial product needs to be sufficiently long enough right from the planning stage. The longer your potential story, the better. But actually, how many words it finally ends up with depends on how well your story performs.
 
If your story is incredibly popular and performs well in the market, then we can consider writing it for as long as possible. However, if your story obviously isn't popular with readers, then you can consider ending your story in a timely fashion at an appropriate point in the plot so that you can think of a new story instead. That would be a wiser decision if you wish to become a professional author.
 
Of course, when you're only in the outlining stage, it's impossible for you as a newcomer author to know how readers will react to your novel. Precisely because of this, you need to have a flexible writing plan. What this means is that you should have an outline that's detailed in the beginning and general near the end. For the beginning of your story, you should have as detailed an outline as possible, while for the middle and especially the later parts of your story, you only need some general ideas. All you need is to consider the overall development of the plot so that you know what direction to take your storyline in.
 
For example, maybe you planned that the beginning of your novel will be approximately 80,000 words, and you've prepared a 4,000-word outline for just the beginning. In that case, your outline for the next 80,000 words, the middle of your story, might only need 3000 words, and the meat of your story, another 240,000 words, might have an outline that's less than 1000 words.
 
Of course, as you continue writing your story, you should constantly update your outline as well. You should complete your outline for the next 80,000 words before you finish writing the first 80,000 words.
 
3.      Your settings need to be constantly updated

Just like writing an outline, you should first come up with the basic settings before you even begin writing, which includes your world background, main character's personality, power levels, and so on.
 
More specific settings, such as a powerful artifact that appears in the story, can be added as you write your story.
 
Unlike an outline, you don't need to fully plan out all of your settings at the very beginning. It's perfectly acceptable to think of new settings while you're writing.
 
However, newcomer authors need to note that while it's okay to come up with new settings as you write, you should write these settings down and add them to your outline or settings document as you write.
 
This is to help yourself check your own settings later in the future. Otherwise, a novel that reached over one million words and has lasted for one year or longer might cause you as an author to completely forget about something you wrote before in the past. It's even quite common to make a mistake when writing about the items that the main character possesses. Yet, there will always be a sharp-eyed reader or two that catches the author out in a misstep.
 
If you have a very detailed document on your settings, not only will you be able to greatly reduce your own plot continuity errors, you'll also be able to look through your settings whenever you have writer's block and find some inspiration in a side character that you have already forgotten about or some item that was mentioned before but never used again.
 
4.      It's better for your settings to be cliché
 
Here, this means the systems and names that you use for your settings. For example, the names and levels you use for a martial arts society.
 
Many newcomer authors will mistakenly think that using already existing well-known settings will make their novel seem too cliché, causing them to want to be as "unique" as possible. These authors will use their imaginations to come up with all sorts of fictional vocabulary words, which in their minds will make their novels "stand out." These newcomer authors don't realize that this is the worst possible way to write a novel. In the great majority of situations, this will have the opposite effect from intended.
 
A new original novel that you write should be a new interpretation or story about some specific genre or story type. How to make your novel stand out depends on the conflicts you create in your story and how the main character resolves them. As for coming up with new vocabulary words and names for your novel, even if you make them sound really cool, or make some modified slang words, it's almost never a good thing for you.
 
The reason for this can also be understood in my article about how to write the beginning of your story. By doing so, the author is placing more burden upon the readers to understand a larger amount of information.
 
There will always be other already existing words that you could have used, which are easily understood by all your readers. Instead, your readers now need to spend their time and effort on reading your explanations. Obviously, readers aren't here to read your technical manuals or info dumps. The more explanations that you have in your novel, the lower your novel's appeal and flow will become. But, if you don't add any explanations for your self-created words at all, the readers won't even understand what's going on.
 
This is why newcomer authors should avoid this useless type of "creativity" as much as possible. You should simply rely on settings that all readers are familiar with instead.
 
5.      The storyline should be pushed forward by using conflicts
 
Many newcomer authors will often develop writer's block when planning their outline or working on their novel.
 
Sometimes, this is because the author has made their storyline too messy. But most of the time, it's because the author feels like there's nothing to write about, or doesn't know what they should make the main character do. The author has no idea how to continue their own story.
 
In order to deal with writer's block, or in other words, how to push your storyline alone, the answer is actually incredibly simple.
 
You can answer this question using only one word – Conflicts!
 
Actually, the critical element of all webnovels can be summed up into one word – conflicts. For example, leveling is the desire or need of the main character to become stronger, which is a conflict between the main character and his or her own current weakness.
 
And since there is a conflict, you must resolve the conflict. And so, your main character wants to cultivate to become stronger, which means he needs to travel around the world in order to find cultivation methods…
 
All sorts of conflicts will both push forward your storyline as well as create numerous climaxes for your readers. It can be said that how you design your conflicts is the very foundation of writing any novel, not just a webnovel.
 
As for a more detailed analysis on how to design your story's conflicts, please read my intermediate-level article on the topic. For newcomer authors like you, you simply need to understand this concept, and know that you should keep coming up with new conflicts whenever you're having trouble keeping up with your own storyline. Try finding potential conflicts from plots, characters, and items you've already used, or forcefully introduce a new element into your story that creates a new conflict.
 
This can be said to be one of the most basic techniques of planning your storyline.

If you’re confused about how to write a popular webnovel, perhaps this book will be able to help you out. 

This book contains articles written by the best editors in the Chinese webnovel industry. There are introductory guides, intermediate guides, and assorted topics, with different numbers of guides in each type. Each week, we’ll be publishing three guides. If you believe that these guides are useful, please let us know by leaving your reviews. We can adjust the update rate based on your feedback.

Author introduction:

314 (Yang Chen): He is China Literature’s general manager, Xiaoxiang Academy’s general manager, Qidian’s head editor, China Webnovel Literature Committee member, Jiangsu Province Webnovel Author Committee vice-chairman, and a qualified expert on all internet literature. He has discovered many popular topics and greatly helped the industry to expand, along with having personally advised many top-tier authors. He is from the first generation of webnovel researchers. Yang Chen started working in the webnovel editing industry in 2005, and is highly skilled at summarizing and analyzing the business theories behind webnovel literature and is famed for his outstanding creativity in the industry.

 Small Team Leader（Zhou Binglin）：Small Team Leader is a high-ranked general manager for China Literature, as well as the head editor for chuangshi.qq.com. He is originally from Guilin, Guangxi.

Small Team Leader is a top-ranked editor for original novels as well as a veteran web novel expert. He has helped to discover countless popular topics as well as frameworks and has advised numerous platinum-ranked authors. He’s also one of the first generation of web novel reviewers as well as authors.

After talking to Jiang Huanqing, Yun Hua returned to her room. 
The first three chapters of the novel had already been written.
Yun Hua kept editing them over and over again.
The name of the book was 'Shocking Dream of Qing Palace,' and she was pretty satisfied with this name.
Actually, many online novels did not have a main storyline, let alone a detailed outline.
However, it was undeniable that a main storyline, a detailed outline, and even a chapter outline would definitely elevate the story's logical flow and narration. This could also allow the author to write more smoothly and avoid too many writer's blocks.
The first three chapters and even the first 30,000 words had to be refined in detail. After all, the introduction was the thing that attracted the readers' attention.
A shocking introduction could allow one to feel refreshed.
In 2006, when the time-traveling theme was still very novel, time-traveling because of a landslide was even more unique.
When Mo Lan woke up, she became the young princess of the Niohuru Hala family. Even though she was a medical student, she had watched Er Yuehe's Kangxi Dynasty. After she understood who she was and that she had traveled back in time into this identity, she realized that she had become Qianlong's mother.
Mo Lan felt that she was not intelligent enough. As a modern person, she also didn't like sharing her husband with other women, so she was prepared not to compete in the concubine selection from the start. She wanted to fight for the opportunity to marry a Han man in the future. With her current Manchu identity and status, it would not be too big of a problem to marry a Han man with good character. At most, she would just not get married.
However, things were always so coincidental. Mo Lan was very curious about the ancient world and finally found a chance to pray to the deities with her mother on the third of March. In the end, she coincidentally met a severely-injured man, who was barely alive, in a bamboo forest at the back of a temple.
The man was very good-looking. Coupled with Mo Lan's nature of saving the ill and her medical skills, she took care of the man's injury. Unexpectedly, this man was exactly the future Yongzheng and the current Fourth Prince—Yin Zhen.
The story flowed too well, and Yun Hua was writing very quickly.
One good thing about a web novel was that it had the highest expectations on the storyline.
One just had to write logically and smoothly, without extravagant vocabulary. As long as one could write clearly and more diligently, one would be able to write a web novel that readers loved.
Yun Hua had written so many novels in her previous life; Thus, she had long been able to combine her literary skills and the storyline, allowing her to tell the story's ups and downs in the most intricate and smoothest way possible.
After tidying up the novel's book title, synopsis, and the first three chapters, Yun Hua started working on the later chapters' detailed outlines.
She loved writing chapter outlines. They were detailed about the core content, containing every chapter's point and conclusion. She made sure that her conclusions had cliffhangers so that it attracted the readers to carry on reading. Having cliffhangers was an extremely important part of a novel.
At the same time, she also wanted to go through the story outline and list all the twists and turns of the story, to better arrange the later plotline.
For a novel with more than a million words, all this work was complicated but necessary.
Since Yun Hua had already written the novel, she was aiming for copyrights. She wanted to turn the novel into a movie, a game, and a comic; she would not simply earn a few bucks and stop there. 
Thus, she had to settle the important scenes, which would increase her workload. Of course, she would get an even bigger return in the future.
Once she started working, more than two hours had passed. Yun Hua stretched and hesitated for a while before standing up.
There were apples and bananas in the refrigerator. Should she give some fruits to that person?
When she went up to the attic, that man was still lying down and sleeping with his eyes closed.
Yun Hua immediately remembered the time he pretended to sleep.
She bit her lips and kicked his long legs sprawled on the floor. "Hey! Stop pretending to sleep."
However, to her surprise, he did not give any form of reaction.
Looking at his face again, she realized that he looked very sick.
Yun Hua instantly started panicking.


[Strong female lead, Revenge, One True Couple]
Her best friend becomes her sister, disfigures her, breaks her legs, steals her rich fiancé, plots the death of her mother, and sends her to a psychiatric hospital where she is tortured to death.
Reborn as her thirteen year old self with a vengeance, Yun Hua is going to make all of them pay in blood!
While planning her revenge, she meets Bo Siqing, a soldier that died in his twenties in her previous life, and their fates get intertwined in a very interesting manner.

AUTHOR HERE!!! 
Hello, so after my Work Immersion, I decided to make an outline of the story and tried reading other novels to get some ideas. After reading some novels(50+novels) in the last 5 months, I re-read my worked and found it quite dissatisfaying since my plot is overused and my sentence structure and grammars are not that great. 

Now, Ive decided that I will not continue this NOVEL "Monsters Within", it is not because I am not proud of this novel, but because I think I can do better than this, I can improve this, I could make something more than just a copycat. 

So, yeah, I will not continue this work but I wont delete it either. As Ive stated before, this is my very first novel for you all to read, and because of this novel, many people have given words of compliments and encouragement to me. And because of those people, I want to improve so that I could live to all of their expectations and make them be proud of me.

and one more thing, I was going to post the outline of my story, how it will go, and how it will end but I've decided that I'll omit those.
I'm thinking of using those outlines as a part of my next Novel, (which won't be discontinued like this one.) That novel will be the NOVEL that I will seriously try to put my all.

Anyway, a BIG THANK YOU!!  to those who read Monsters Within. 

BYE BYE

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Placed in a world with Cultivation and Monsters. 


A Half-Human and Half-Beast child, Chase. Being abandoned in the Crimson Forest, he is found and raised by a wandering Drunk Old Man that is a member of the Violet Family.

 Although he grew up as a healthy boy, Chase did not have the talent to Cultivate a simple technique that the Violet Family provides and has since then been the only Failure Child of the Family. 

But his life changed drastically when he was finally able to cultivate and integrated his soul with a Legion of Legendary Monsters.


Follow the Journey of a Young Boy that has been called as the Ultimate Failure become the Most Powerful Man in all of the 12 Worlds.


Release Rate: Unknown(Hiatus)

Author's Note: This is a plain cultivation Novel, please don't read it. If you ever read it, don't blame me if you get too absorbed on it. I don't have that much money to pay for your medical fees if you ever get sick reading this. 

Also, I am NOT an English Language Native, so you can expect some errors on my grammars and some little to no typos.

IMPORTANT NOTE: The story will get better as you read the next chapters.


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To readers who are rich, please click "Vote" to support this Novel of mine. I'm quite desperate. Teehee~

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The Book Cover is not mine. The credits all goes to the Creator.
If the owner wants me to take it down, then I will gladly do so.

Okay guys, time to tackle the elephant in the room. What the hell happened to this novel, why am I not updating it almost at all, and generally why have I turned into the sht author I always despised on this novel while somehow maintaining a proper rate on my other novels?
Let me explain everything points by point.
1st - Ending "Road to the Crown"
- This was the first instance that got me lazy with Battlesmut. I simply wanted to focus on the ending novel, so that once it would be over, I would have twice the time to write this one. Sadly, even after finishing the novel, I got so used to the relaxed days where I could actually do anything outside of writing, resulted in the first crack in my mostly spotless record of writing regularly (not fully, mostly...)
2nd - Sudden project falling on top of my head
- Don't misunderstand. This is something that I believe to be able to change my life, but over the last month, I was extremely absorbed with several things that are of utmost importance for me. As such, the time that I could spend writing (not to speak, the willingness to do so) were even smaller
3rd - Caught covid
- While I didn't really suffer from it that much (just some slight fever symptoms), the fact that I contracted it from my parents (who were tested positive) meant that for about the last two weeks (and quite honestly, still) I was insanely worried not about myself, but about my parents. While for some finding something one wants to do in life and actually doing it is a major step in reaching maturity as a person, I still love my parents very much and I can't imagine anything happening to them right now or anytime soon. That's just another reason why I wasn't very productive over the last few weeks.
4th - but by no means, the least important one. Here I will go on a little ramble, so bear with me or jump to the TL:DR at the bottom.
- From a long while, I had a problem with this novel. Partially it could be caused with my focus being diverted to other stories, partially it could be the responsibility of the situation I appeared and new ideas that I started adopting... But the truth is sadly quite obvious.
This novel is slowly nearing its end. This time, contrary to what I did in Road to the Crown novel of mine, I will be able to say that the entire story got perfectly fulfilled. The ending that is slowly (really slowly) approaching, is the one that I foreshadowed ever since the beginning, ever since I started treating this novel seriously. Obviously, it's adopted to my current ideas and all, but generally, this is the ending that this novel was supposed to end with. 
But.
Whenever someone writes like me, then outside of the general outline, they don't really need anything else. You just get the last even that happened, figure out its placement on the timeline, what is it supposed to be its aim, the ultimate goal etc...
And ever since I started wrecking my release, I was plagued with a single problem.
You cannot end the novel with a precise outline.
Not when it was built for so long and using so many deep ideas. You HAVE TO plan it out to give the ending its justice... But doing so, forces you to accept the fact that the novel is about to end. And I wasn't ready to do so for a long while.
For me, battlesmut is that bastardly but still loved child. It's beginning is awful, I always admitted it. It's a novel that allowed me to learn how to write. Although I'm not claiming I climbed that mountain all the way, I'm definitely far further than I was when I began. 
For me, battlesmut turns into this safe area of a huge project that came entirely from my head. With all its groundwork, character building, foreshadowing, I knew that I could always write about and based on something that only the readers of this novel are privy to. With the end of my second novel, it is my last novel where I managed to establish the world I created for it.
But the time where I would write the outline of everything until the end, had to come.
It happened a few days ago. I just sat down, decided to accept the fact that I will soon have to say goodbye to this child of mine... And I did it. I already know how will this novel end, what will happen behind it, what it will imply for the future... To a point I can even predict how some of you will react to the ending I have in store. All that's left for me to do is to sit down and write those last chapters, right?
Yeah, but as if it was that easy. 
Today, I made the first step to give the ending of this novel proper honours. I won't laze around anymore, I won't treat it as the story I can always come back to. I will respectfully bring the end of battlesmut to its fruition, and allow it to become a completed novel in the way I always envisioned it would. With daily releases and surrounded by loving readers. 
At this point, I also need to point out one thing - This novel still has a lot to go through before it will end. When speaking about nearing the finish, I meant it on the global scale, on the scale that the author needs to think in. In terms of the number of chapters... No, I won't give you that :D 
I can at least say, that while it will take a while, this novel will reach it endings properly, in due time and with respect it deserves for turning me from a random cashier in some local shop to a damned author of several novels who bounds his future entirely with writing.
TL:DR - I got emotional over the fact the novel is somewhat nearing its ending.
Thanks to everyone who stuck so far to read this rambling of mine. Thanks for the continuous support of this and other novels of mine, that allowed me to keep living the dream of being a full-time author. I hope that this time, I won't have to cover before myself for breaking my promises, instead properly fulfilling them and allowing this novel the lay the groundwork for the greatest and most insane project I ever could figure out, and that I already somewhat begun.
Cheers!
MotivatedSloth, signing off.


Did I reincarnate? Or was I transported to an Isekai cultivation world? To be honest, I have no clue!

What matters is that I turned from being useless, bullied, and trash, to fully-fledged garbage in my new cultivation world! 

But what is this strange bleep that keeps ringing in my ears? Is this some kind of system? Oh God! Did you gift me such a cliché, right at the start of my journey?

Wait, why are you trying to kill me? Did I do something to you? Stand back or I will be forced to use unstoppable Exhudia!

Tell me, what did she do for you to treat your significant other in this way? Let me show you how girlfriends should be taken care of!

Wait, everyone was always telling me that demons are bad, so why is this demonic queen trying to seduce me? Wait! KEEP YOUR HANDS AWAY FROM MY PRECIOUS SWORD!

I just came back from a mission and was promised at least a half a year of break. Why are you bothering me again with something as silly as subjugating a devil general?


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Hello, fuckers! Volume 1 has finished and I'm going to tell something y'all didn't know about my novel.
1. Margret wasn't supposed to exist:
Yes hon, she wasn't supposed to exist at all. She is a character that I put at the last minute. And this 'Angie' was supposed to be human and Scarlett's roommate. 
2. Diana wasn't supposed to be a witch:
Yeeeeeeeeeees I know. She was supposed to be the nice, human grandma but my brain. My brain's a bitch and won't listen to me.
3. I have an outline and this novel was not supposed to be like this:
Yes, bitch. It was supposed to end right now and Scarlett was supposed to be hit by a bus and go into a coma in the end. Don't worry, there was a happy ending.
4. Scarlett was supposed to be a Korean character:
Even I was in shock when my bitch of a brain told me to make her not Korean. If she was supposed to be Korean, her name would be Kwon Joo-hee.
5. Anastasia was supposed to be a greek minor goddess:
Anastasia was supposed to be Goddess Melinoe, the ghost queen. I mean no offense to Greeks out there, I was going to make Melinoe bi. But changed it last minute because I thought it'll be offensive. 
6. Anastasia and Scarlett were supposed to meet as classmates:
They really weren't supposed to have an ugly meet with Anastasia bleeding and Scarlett taking her to the hospital. 
7. Michael was supposed to have internal homophobia:
He wasn't supposed to be a happy person. The outline said even though he is gay he felt disgusted by himself. He was about to do suicide, that's when Manchu stopped him. So yeah, it was going to be kinda angsty. But I didn't want to make it so angsty because I hate angst myself.
8. Scarlett was supposed to have panphobia:
Panphobia is a fear of everything. But I forgot I don't know how to write panphobia is, so I left that thought.
That's it! Eight confessions! I have a feeling, my confessions would have made the novel better than this shitty version of it.
I would love it if you support my other novel Force of Fate! I used my version of Greek mythology in the introduction! Also, my side project would be on Tumblr and I haven't thought of the title for it! My account is bitchypersonachaos, I would love it if you support that too! I'll update it once a week.
Goodbye for now! Meet y'all after probably a week later!

This is a story of how an immortal and a mortal fell in love. But there wasn't a meet-cute. The mortal thought the other was dead. But hey, she's okay, it was just a prank! They were getting along well and being third wheels. 
But then the mortal had to go somewhere else for studies. They said bye-bye to each other. And bam! Did someone try to kill her friend? The immortal said: we are going there even if you don't like it! 
K bruh. 
But wait, who's the person trying to kill her?


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(I use a lot of swearing if you are not okay with swearing then..... meh peace out!)
Updating schedule: Sundays
The picture ain't mine, I edited it, that's all.
It will have some triggering contents, please skip those, I have given a warning before starting it. But they ain't that frequent.
Also, this is my first WIP so it'll be cringe at the start. I'll edit this after I finish this.
Also, follow me on Tumblr: shydestinykryptonite. Feed my ego rats!

This chapter isn't story related and only aims to give you some of my own thoughts on the novel so far. Feel free to skip this. Basically final notes for the end of the volume. Will probably do these at the end of every volume.
I do enjoy reading these in other, real light novels, showing a further plan or giving a few thankful words.
And so I want to thank you for getting this far. I'm well aware that this novel is far from the best, but I could see how much my writing has grown by now. At some point I might even rewrite the first couple chapters to bring them up to quality. But not right now, since I really need to get into a better flow for writing and it would also further cripple my already wacky release rate.
Working full time and procrastinating as much as I do hinders the novel a lot. I could probably release daily, if I manage to get my mind to do it. But it tends to wander around, preferring watching youtube videos over writing.
But despite all of that, we still got here. First volume finished with around 60k words and 54 chapters. It actually turned out way better than I first expected. I'm making up a lot of stuff along the way, but I do have a general outline to the novel. Especially for now, things are easier this way. If I would get more serious I would have to create a full detailed outline for the whole thing.
This novel is like my training wheels. I want my writing to grow with the story, with the characters. 
So please, feel free to criticize my writing as much as you like. I do prefer feedback because with that, I can see where I have to improve myself on. 
Since this is released on Webnovel and most female lead stories do have some romance in them, I do think I will tackle on that genre as well in later parts of the novel. For now I want to keep it mostly focused on fantasy elements and the general story.
I'm experimenting quite a bit with the story, so plans might change and some plot points mentioned may or may not be addressed along the way. 
 
The following flaws which I'm aware of are planned to be addressed in volume 2:
-More building to side characters, story was mostly focused on Yoru/Iris until now
-Better description for characters to give them a more vivid feel. I always imagine the characters in my head when reading a book, but I don't think I myself describe them enough to be easily visualized
-more improvement in my writing
-better release schedule, at least more consistent (thinking on at least 2 chaps a week, on weekends
-more references to other novels/anime
-a more unique style of storytelling
 
 
So thank you for your attention and please continue on enjoying my writing. What else will come up in this story leading to a full out war? Who exactly is the demon Meteora and what are her planes? What happened to the members of the group? Find out in the next volume…
(God that was too cliché, wasn't it?)

In a world, where countless wars between angels and demons have been fought, humanity finally had enough and decided to free themselves of the shackles put upon them by the other races. Together with hybrids, children of demons/angels, they aim to overpower both angels and demons to bring peace for humanity.

Living in such a place, the demon hybrid girl Yoru tries to survive and just wants a comfortable life. But things aren’t so easy for an orphan who has to attend military school, which trains these hybrid children like Yoru to fight the other races.

This novel tells the story of how Yoru manages to stand on her own feet in this cruel world.

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My first novel, so don’t expect too much and enjoy.I will use this novel to get used to writing and get better at English overall.
Feel free to leave any suggestions or criticism.

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<Shameless Promote!!>
I noticed that the first novel I wrote still had dozen of collection and pitied it slightly. To be honest, I wasn't thinking thoroughly when I wrote this novel, resulting in the forced plot.
Um...If you were interested in a novel like this one. You can check my latest work, Master Of Sorcery. It had the same setting as this novel and better. At least I found my writing skill did improve after 5 months of writing xd.
Then, is this novel dropped? Of course, it dropped since I didn't outline this work the first time I created it :/.

[DROPPED]
Instead of this, you can check my other novel which had similiar timeline and place like this "Master Of Sorcery"

==The cover photo isn't mine==
The cover Photo is from : https://www.zedge.net

Have you ever thought what form will you get during reincarnation? Kevin was a young talented sorcerer that have a bright future. But an accident occur and Kevin get killed. He then get reincarnated into a book. Will he still taking his revenge back, after knowing the truth behind his death? 

Clara Hall, was a daughter from a noble family. Her whole life was boring,she got treated like a caged bird. One day someone tried to assasinate her. In the middle of chased, Clara saw a book lying on the ground. For some reason she decided to pick it up without knowing that book will change her entire life..

Radiation Physics and Chemistry

Volume 47, Issue 3, March 1996, Pages 501-505

Effects of X- and UV-irradiation on proteins

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The radiation damage of several proteins has been investigated in aqueou solution, after preceding X- or UV-irradiation. In order to differentiate between different radiation effects, a series of physico-chemical and biochemical methods as well as novel evaluation and normalization procedures have been applied. Numerous changes of several molecular parameters characterizing functional ability and primary, secondary, tertiary and quaternary structure of proteins could be found. Modifications of radiation effects were achieved by a variety of measures and additives. The results are of interest for many fields of research using X-rays or UV light.Radiation Physics and Chemistry

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Effects of X- and UV-irradiation on proteins

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The radiation damage of several proteins has been investigated in aqueou solution, after preceding X- or UV-irradiation. In order to differentiate between different radiation effects, a series of physico-chemical and biochemical methods as well as novel evaluation and normalization procedures have been applied. Numerous changes of several molecular parameters characterizing functional ability and primary, secondary, tertiary and quaternary structure of proteins could be found. Modifications of radiation effects were achieved by a variety of measures and additives. The results are of interest for many fields of research using X-rays or UV light.

Tong City, Military Governor Mansion, in the office.
Da, da, da…
Yang Haodong's ten fingers flew past and he was typing fast just like a machine gun.
Although this was his first time writing a book, he could write 10,000 words per hour. In other words, if he didn't take a break, he could write three 3,000-word chapters in one hour.
"Chapter 256, Ruthless Means"
"In the quiet hall, everyone stared at the black-robed old man..."
The new chapter was quickly completed.
"I have written nearly 20,000 words today. It's time to take a break. In addition, I have no more outline. I have to find some time to ask father about the follow-up outline."
Leaning on the seat, Yang Haodong murmured, and at the same time opened the statistic of "Battle Through the Paradise" and looked at it. During this time, besides coding words, his biggest interest was to read the data of his book.
"The collection has reached more than 230,000."
"The total number of words is almost 700,000."
"Votes: 9.87 million."
"Reward: 19.56 million points."
"These data should still be okay. There are a lot of rewards, but I have to share it with the website. Should I write my address and bank account at the end of each chapter?"
After reading the data, Yang Haodong had a whim.
Ding!
At this moment, on his computer, the chat software suddenly sounded. If it had been before, he might have been eager to see who sent the message.
But now, he didn't look at it immediately. Instead, he glanced at the time on the desk and found that after six o'clock in the afternoon, several black lines appeared on his forehead involuntarily.
"That idiot, is there something wrong with his brain?! He changes his account every day and asks if I am here all the time? What a crazy bastard!" Yang Haodong cursed fiercely.
After he opened the chatbox, sure enough, it was still a message with one word: "Here."
The person who sent this was still called "Ranzhi".
"Fool! If you don't greet me properly, I won't care about you at all!"
Yang Haodong muttered, and without any hesitation, he decisively blocked the new account of this Ranzhi guy.
...
On the other side of the computer, Ranzhi sat in front of the computer. In just half a month, his whole person seemed to have aged more than ten years. The wrinkles on his face were about to come out.
"Battle Through the Paradise" had reached the top of the website's free new book list, the reward list, the vote list, and the weekly collection list. This book had refreshed the history of the most popular novel in the history of only novels. The record had even exceeded dozens of times.
Under normal conditions, such a popular book should have been signed and put on the shelves publicly long ago.
But even if the results got better and better, the book owner still didn't want to sign.
This also puzzled the bosses who ran Runningnovel website.
Every day, they would look for Ranzhi to ask what the situation was.
"I can't help it either! I have been unable to contact the author himself. The address he left on the website is not accurate. Messaging him has become my daily routine now, but he has never replied, not even once."
Every time Ranzhi was asked by his boss, he also explained with a gloomy expression.
The boss always scolded Ranzhi's mother in his heart, but he knew there was nothing he could do about it. He just guessed that the author might have realized that his book would become popular, so he deliberately refused to sign a contract. As it continued to become popular, he wanted to get a more lucrative contract.
"Continue to contact him. We have to chase after this novel. It completely breaks the conventional writing method. It is a brand-new subject. Although it looks like a novice book, the plot is much better than traditional martial arts novels. This may become a new trend in the online literature world."
"In addition, find some authors who like to follow the trend. Since the original author cannot be contacted, let those authors learn how to write like him."
This was the order that the boss gave to Ranzhi.
"It's really a pitfall. Doesn't this fellow know the reply at all? Or, his account is actually fake? But it shouldn't be. He has seen my chat and even blocked me several times. Even if it's his fake account, he should still reply, right?"
A godly book, a book that could change the pattern of online literature, was right in front of him. But as an editor, he couldn't even contact the author. If this was to spread later, wouldn't he be a joke in the industry?
"The word count is almost 700,000. I can't let this go on, if he is poached by other websites, I won't be able to raise my head up anymore."
Thinking of this, Ranzhi's original tired face regained some energy instantly.
"I used to message him three times a day. From now on, I will message him every hour. I don't believe that he will never reply."
Soon after that, he registered a new account, still named Ranzhi, and added Yang Haodong's account.
After adding, he immediately sent out a word without delay: "Here."
...
"Fool, this guy is insane! You want to change your strategy?"
Yang Haodong, who was planning to continue the code words, suddenly discovered that another person had added him. And the name was still 'Ranzhi', and as soon as it added his account, it sent him the "Here?" again. 
He started cursing directly. 
Boom, boom, boom…
At exactly this time, his office door rang. Subsequently, the door was pushed open.
"Father?"
After seeing that the person walking in was Yang Song, Yang Haodong quickly stood up and shouted with a bit of surprise. At the same time, he was shocked, "In the past few days, it seems that your vitality and blood have become stronger, and your body has become healthy too, right? Awesome, your current strength is the 2nd Tier Warrior martial artist, right?"
'2nd Tier Warrior?'
'Who are you looking down on?'
Yang Song glanced at his son: "Well, I'm almost there. By the way, what is the progress of your novel?"
Originally, there were countless questions in his heart, but after hearing this question, Yang Haodong's whole person immediately changed.
All the attention was focused on the novel in an instant.
"Father, your creativity is really amazing! Now the novel is very popular, countless people reward me every day. It has been ranked first on several lists on that website, and many places are talking about my novel! And when I write it, I feel very comfortable. I feel that I am invincible in this regard."
Yang Haodong kept talking.
Yang Song nodded: "That's fine! I'll send you the follow-up outline when the time comes... By the way, it's fine to use a pen name now, but after a while, when the novel is completely popular, you can find an opportunity to make your identity public."
"Ah?!"
Yang Haodong was a little dazed. Disclosing his identity? This made him a little confused.
What if his readers wanted to threaten him?
He wanted to leave the address he thought of before in case his readers wanted to send money or something, but he had planned to use a pseudonym instead of his real name!

After he crossed over, Yang Song thought that his life was a bit regretful.

He thought that after crossing over, with this system, he would soar into the heaven and enjoy the glory. But alas, even after so many years, there was no sign of activation at all.

This year, he was almost 100 years old.

Yang Song sighed gently, "It looks like I have no fate with this system in this life."

[Ding, congratulations to the host for successfully activating the Immortal Cultivation System.]

Hearing this prompt, Yang Song jumped up with a high spirit.

One year later, Yang Song couldn’t help but sigh, “Life’s really hard.” He was already over 100 years old but still had to cultivate immortality.

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Note: There is a slight LGBT scene in the early chapter, but farther away from that, there won’t be any of it anymore.

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