Hi guys! I’m making this novel because there aren’t any interesting novels to read. I’m gonna make this fanfic because I’ll be needing reader reviews to continue and also gonna add parts from different novels. Primarily this novel will have system, time reversal, harem and some mild R-18. Thanks for reading.

Hello Fellow Reader

This Novel is exist only for reader who want cultivate their rank became level 6 or level 7 with gathering exp in the comment section and review.

note:

fellow reader when you review this novel you can rate it whatever you want even 1 star is okay, as long as you still get exp from webnovel.

BISA DI SKIP (HANYA BERISI INFO SS & GEMBOK)

Hallo reader...

Disini author mau jelasin tentang pergembokan dan masalah SS yang banyak bermunculan di kolom komen.

Reader pasti sudah tau kan kalau beberapa minggu terakhir banyak novel tetangga yang di gembok / dikunci itu karena novel tersebut sudah di kontrak oleh Webnovel (WN). Keuntungan dari novel yang sudah di kontrak:

1. Bagi Reader(Pembaca) : Reader akan bisa lebih sering dan baca banyak update secara teratur, karena disini author punya target.

2. Bagi Author(Penulis) : Author bisa lebih fokus menulis karena dapat income dr WN. Kalau selama ini kan author nulis hanya pada waktu luang diantara kesibukan yang menumpuk tapi kalau sudah di kontrak author jadi menyiapkan waktu khusus untuk menulis.

Nah, kalau novel sudah di kontrak dan masuk premium maka akan di gembok. Untuk membukanya diperlukan Spirit Stone (SS). 

Peraturannya :
200kata = 1ss
Jika satu bab berisi 1200kata = 6ss untuk membuka.
Semakin banyak ss yg dibutuhkan untuk membuka berarti reader akan membaca lebih banyak..
Tidak mahal kan 5ss untuk 1 bab? Apalagi sekarang WN lagi ada diskon 50% jadi reader bisa baca 1 bab berisi 1200kata hanya dengan 3ss, reader bisa hemat 3ss bisa untuk baca novel lain juga. Ingat jumlah kata tiap 1 bab belum tentu sama, maka dari itu kadang ss yang dibutuhkan juga berbeda.

Cara mendapatkan SS :
1. SS gratis bisa di dapat dengan cara masuk ke WN setiap hari, mengerjakan tugas harian, tugas membaca,dll reader kira2 dapat 20-30ss per hari belum lagi kalau undang teman untuk masuk WN itu reader akan dapat 50ss setiap 1 org yang diundang ke app WN. Wah.. dengan ss segitu reader bisa tetap baca banyak novel. Tapi SS gratis ada masa kadaluarsanya yaitu 30hari. Jadi saat reader dapat pemberitahuan ss akan kadaluarsa mending ss segera buat download novel tergembok dan bisa di baca lain waktu atau digunakan untuk memberi gift kepada author. Ehm...author pasti seneng banget dapat dukungan seperti itu dari reader 😄. Kalau aku biasanya ss yang sudah mau kadaluarsa aku gunain buat baca novel sesama penulis indonesia atau kasih gift ke mereka, yah.. itung itung saling bantu temen dari pada ss hilang mubazir 😅🤗

2.SS berbayar. Jika SS gratis masih kurang, reader bisa beli ss melalui fitur yang sudah disediakan oleh WN dan cara pembayarannya juga mudah bisa dengan pulsa atau ada pilihan lain disana, silakan dilihat. Bagusnya SS berbayar yaitu tidak ada masa kadaluarsanya. Dan untuk lebih support author, reader bisa tolong bantu memakai SS yg berbayar, karena income yang didapat oleh author berdasarkan banyaknya SS berbayar yang diberikan reader untuk buka gembok atau kasih gift ke author. Dengan seperti ini author bisa hidup 100% dari menjadi penulis. Sebagai contoh, jika saya nulis sambil kerja otomatis saya tidak bisa berkarya secara maksimal sebab waktu dan pikiran saya terbagi. Sampai disini saya harap para reader faham 🙏.

Gimana, mudah dan menyenangkan bukan? Reader dan author sama sama senang 😄.
Mari reader dan author bekerjasama untuk memajukan Webnovel, dukung para penulis indonesia.

Ohya satu lagi, berkat dukungan para pembaca melalui komen, review dan power stone, novel Detak Jantung Cinta Kita ditawari kontrak oleh WN. Jadi nanti kalau tiba-tiba novel ini di gembok jangan kaget, mulai sekarang reader bisa mulai menabung ss untuk buka gembok jika nanti novel ini sudah menjadi premium.

Jika ada pertanyaan tentang gembok, spirit stone (ss) dan novel ini silakan komen di bawah atau bisa juga add facebok webnovel indonesia. Terima kasih atas waktunya...

Salam hangat Author 😄😙

Dari detak jantung jadi cinta. Hati yang hancur, dapatkah diperbaiki? 

Winda seorang perawat merasakan perihnya patah hati ketika memergoki kekasihnya sedang bercumbu dengan wanita lain. 

Pepatah berkata cinta baru memulihkan luka lama. Luis, sang pasien di tempat kerja Winda menjadi 'obat' yang hadir menyembuhkan luka hati Winda. 

Kisah cinta bersemi hingga mereka memutuskan untuk mengikat cintanya dalam satu janji suci.

Namun takdir berkat lain, Luis mengalami kecelakaan. Harapan hidup kecil, ia akhirnya memutuskan untuk mendonorkan jantungnya untuk seseorang yang ia pilih.

Mampukah Winda melepaskan kepergian Luis dan melanjutkan hidupnya? 

Bertekad menutup hatinya tapi sekali lagi seorang lelaki yang ternyata penerima donor jantung Luis masuk dalam hidupnya. 

Mampukah dia membuat Winda melupakan Luis? Detak jantung orang yang sama di tubuh yang berbeda. Dua lelaki satu jantung. Hemmm ...

Cerita ini hanya karangan author, maaf jika ada kesamaan nama karakter atau kemiripan kisah.

Jangan lupa masukkan novel ini kedalam library/ daftar baca kalian ...

Untuk mendapatkan info tentang novel hasil karya dari author, silakan kunjungi :

Fb : Pena_aQuina

Ig : @pena_aquina

Hallo reader...
Disini author mau jelasin tentang pergembokan dan masalah SS yang banyak bermunculan di kolom komen.

Reader pasti sudah tau kan kalau beberapa minggu terakhir banyak novel tetangga yang di gembok / dikunci itu karena novel tersebut sudah di kontrak oleh Webnovel (WN). Keuntungan dari novel yang sudah di kontrak:

1. Bagi Reader(Pembaca) : Reader akan bisa lebih sering dan baca banyak update secara teratur, karena disini author punya target.

2. Bagi Author(Penulis) : Author bisa lebih fokus menulis karena dapat income dr WN. Kalau selama ini kan author nulis hanya pada waktu luang diantara kesibukan yang menumpuk tapi kalau sudah di kontrak author jadi menyiapkan waktu khusus untuk menulis.

Nah, kalau novel sudah di kontrak dan masuk premium maka akan di gembok. Untuk membukanya diperlukan Spirit Stone (SS). 

Peraturannya :
200kata = 1ss
Jika satu bab berisi 1200kata = 6ss untuk membuka.
Semakin banyak ss yg dibutuhkan untuk membuka berarti reader akan membaca lebih banyak..
Tidak mahal kan 5ss untuk 1 bab? Apalagi sekarang WN lagi ada diskon 50% jadi reader bisa baca 1 bab berisi 1200kata hanya dengan 3ss, reader bisa hemat 3ss bisa untuk baca novel lain juga. Ingat jumlah kata tiap 1 bab belum tentu sama, maka dari itu kadang ss yang dibutuhkan juga berbeda.

Cara mendapatkan SS :
1. SS gratis bisa di dapat dengan cara masuk ke WN setiap hari, mengerjakan tugas harian, tugas membaca,dll reader kira2 dapat 20-30ss per hari belum lagi kalau undang teman untuk masuk WN itu reader akan dapat 50ss setiap 1 org yang diundang ke app WN. Wah.. dengan ss segitu reader bisa tetap baca banyak novel. Tapi SS gratis ada masa kadaluarsanya yaitu 30hari. Jadi saat reader dapat pemberitahuan ss akan kadaluarsa mending ss segera buat download novel tergembok dan bisa di baca lain waktu atau digunakan untuk memberi gift kepada author. Ehm...author pasti seneng banget dapat dukungan seperti itu dari reader 😄. Kalau aku biasanya ss yang sudah mau kadaluarsa aku gunain buat baca novel sesama penulis indonesia atau kasih gift ke mereka, yah.. itung itung saling bantu temen dari pada ss hilang mubazir 😅🤗

2.SS berbayar. Jika SS gratis masih kurang, reader bisa beli ss melalui fitur yang sudah disediakan oleh WN dan cara pembayarannya juga mudah bisa dengan pulsa atau ada pilihan lain disana, silakan dilihat. Bagusnya SS berbayar yaitu tidak ada masa kadaluarsanya. Dan untuk lebih support author, reader bisa tolong bantu memakai SS yg berbayar, karena income yang didapat oleh author berdasarkan banyaknya SS berbayar yang diberikan reader untuk buka gembok atau kasih gift ke author. Dengan seperti ini author bisa hidup 100% dari menjadi penulis. Sebagai contoh, jika saya nulis sambil kerja otomatis saya tidak bisa berkarya secara maksimal sebab waktu dan pikiran saya terbagi. Sampai disini saya harap para reader faham 🙏.

Gimana, mudah dan menyenangkan bukan? Reader dan author sama sama senang 😄.
Mari reader dan author bekerjasama untuk memajukan Webnovel, dukung para penulis indonesia.

Ohya satu lagi, berkat dukungan para pembaca melalui komen, review dan power stone, novel Detak Jantung Cinta Kita ditawari kontrak oleh WN. Jadi nanti kalau tiba-tiba novel ini di gembok jangan kaget, mulai sekarang reader bisa mulai menabung ss untuk buka gembok jika nanti novel ini sudah menjadi premium.

Jika ada pertanyaan tentang gembok, spirit stone (ss) dan novel ini silakan komen di bawah atau bisa juga add facebook webnovel indonesia. Terima kasih atas waktunya...

Salam hangat Author 😄😙

Jung soo jung adalah seorang dokter di salah satu rumah sakit di korea.Dia adalah seorang gadis yang pintar dan juga cantik sehingga banyak pemuda yang jatuh cinta padanya namun tak satupun dari mereka yang berhasil memenangkan hatinya hingga pada suatu hari dia bertemu dengan Pemuda itu.

Terimakasih buat teman-teman reader yang selalu menantikan setiap chapter yang akan author update 🙏🙏🙏...

Ini adalah novel karya pertama ku. Karena para reader saya bisa menyelesaikan novel ini dalam 50 chapter sebanyak 49,84 K kata.

Saya sangat menghargai setiap komentar yang di berikan oleh para reader pada setiap chapter yang telah saya update.
Terimakasih buat RennaQ, Niko_Gaming, corneliasuardi9, Nopi_Suswati, Rahma_Wati_7217, Mitha_Mahar, Rami_Rami, Puspa_Indah 9913, Suji_Aa, Ana_Azry_Asna, Sri 453, Endangmarinta, Sry_Rahayu masdin, Saya berterimakasih karena sudah sempat meninggalkan jejak komentar teman-teman pada novel saya.

Terlebih-lebih lagi pada kak Supri_Yatin, Yeni sinadia, Berkah_Tauge, Kristin_Abuth, Dwi_Oktaviani, Lizz_Kurniawan, Vitri_Na, Wonbin, Linie_Fradika, my name is_allie, Daoist225082, kepada kak Zei_no_Zei_no, saya sangat berterimakasih atas komentar"nya yang membuat author tambah semangat dalam menulis ☺️

Saya juga berterimakasih dengan sangat kepada para reader yang belum sempat saya tuliskan namanya. Akan tetapi, novel ini bisa ada karena kalian semua para reader. ☺️

Berkat dukungan para reader saya boleh mendapatkan inspirasi untuk terus menulis.

Saya juga berterimakasih bagi para reader yang mau menyempatkan diri mengisi ulasan (Review) terhadap novel ini, dengan berbagai komentar yang membangun.

Saya banyak belajar dari review yang di berikan para pembaca yang mencintai karya novel ini. Terimakasih sebesar-besarnya kepada teman-teman sekalian. 🥰🥰🙏🙏


Senin, 27 Juli 2020
Author, Pom_Pong

Catatan : 21+ 


Gairah atau cinta manakah yang benar kamu rasakan terhadap ku?

ketika muda, nafsu keingintahuan begitu meluap-luap. Apakah pertemuan yang kusesali ataukah rasa ini yang menyakitkan! 

Entahlah, semuanya terjadi begitu saja. Cerita ini berkisah mengenai
cinta diantara Andre dan Ana yang telah menjalin hubungan selama 8 tahun, namun harus mengalami masalah ketika hendak menikah.

Bagaimana akhir kisah mereka, akan tertuang dalam novel ini.

Berharap kalian menikmati cerita kisah ini dalam menemani waktu luang kalian.

This is just, maybe even more important than finding motivation. The main reason many novels get dropped is because the author had failed to create an outline.

I don't like to ramble on and go off topic so let's get straight to the point. 

Create a world background. Is it Earth? Or is it a fantasy world? No matter what it may be, you must have a clear image of where and when this novel is taking place. This allows the reader to imagine and create their own image on their take of the novel and enjoy their experience reading so much more and, also improving your performance as a writer.  You cannot explain the world in one or two chapters. Building the world background takes time and cramming it inside the readers head is a big no. 

Include: World name, the continents name. The countries name and what's so special about this country that separates it from the others? City, is it big or small? What year is this novel taking place? 

Create the plot: When you're making your novel, don't expect everything to stay the way you thought it would. From beginning to end, you must have a clear idea about how the novel is going to begin and how it's going to end. Readers love to suggest ideas. Some are good, others are bad. Don't hesitate to take the good ideas, that's why the reader suggested it!

List down key turning points in the novel: Has the protagonist suffered an injury that causes their body to mutate or suffer in some way? Did someone important in the novel die to further the plot? For the most part, these key turning points should remain unchanged through the entire novel.

Character Sheet: Create your characters! Name, looks, personality, hobbies, all that good stuff. Make the protagonist down to earth! What makes a good protagonist is one that the reader can connect to. If their to good at what they do and never face failure, then you haven't made a good protagonist. Make sure that the protagonist's ability comes to have an equal downfall. Take Spiderman for example. Why do we love him so much? It's because he's a funny crime-fighting teenage superhero! But that isn't all, he's also a kid who has his own problems that he has to deal with every day. Keeping his identity a secret from his close friends and family, dealing with his love life without it screwing up, you know. The same thing applies to every important character in the novel. NO ONE IS PERFECT.

Important details: Make a quick list of important things in the novel such as weapons, artifacts, companies. Stuff that will directly involve the main cast or impact the world.

I really can't stress this enough. I've noticed that many authors tend to rush things from plot to character relationships. DON'T rush them! If you rush the plot then the story will fall apart, plot holes will open. If you rush relationships then the reader will not feel a connection between the two or however many people. You must understand that readers have been exposed to your novel for the first time when they read the first chapter so they don't have that same bond you have with the characters at first. Make the reader fall in love with the relationship. Building relationships can take anywhere from 50-100 chapters. Some extremely well-executed relationships can be done in 25.

Some tips I highly advise you take before you start writing :)

hai guys
i just want to say something
well i get a comment that my grammar/writing/novel is shit
let me tell all once more

1.I write this novel only for me to released some stress 

2.i dont get paid by webnovel as i dont has contract with them

3.even if my grammar is worse, atleast you guys can use imagination to read my novel(well be a creative person

4.if you dont like my novel/writing/grammar...just dont read my novel and dont scold/cursed at me just because my low level writing

5. Skepparn is the one that said my novel is shit...if you read his profile..you can see he said "just a casual reader"....
the hell casual reader casualy said other novel is shit and also he also said in his moment that the author of I'm Voldemort(MCU Xover) is stupid....
well that novel is one of my fav novel...
so i am going to say this to you Skepparn

"if you dislike my novel,just dont read it okay?,also dont just mocked other novel,as not every author can take your shit words,and just change your profile,dont use just a casual reader as you basicly is casual Fucker that cursed every novel that dont meet your taste,and also think you need to say sorry to every author that their novel has you mocked/cursed/critic as i dont know how many author that dropped their novel just because your word


okay that all guys
damn here i am was going to school tomorrow and this Skepparn just ruin my mood.....

thank you for reading guy

#Shit-word-go-away
#No-more-Skepparn

okay i already update this novel at novel type...damn i alipped my hand and here i nees to repost here on fanfiction type
so i invite every +80K reader to read from here from now on

Prologue

[The path to achieving immortality is a long one. One has to have a sheer will and enormous talent. I don't know if you will able to reach it but you don't have anything to lose right. So, why not give it a try?]

I stared at my screen as I read those words. Those were the words the Immortal Spirit has said to Tang Xu when he had first met him.

I was reading a novel called [The Immortal Cultivator]. It was a modern day fantasy novel which I have been reading for some time.

It was a typical novel in which a ordinary boy finds a old dusty ring by chance which has a Immortal Spirit in it and embarks on the path of cultivation.

It was like those clich wuxia novel and the only difference would be its setting which was in modern world instead of a cultivation world.

It was not the best novel I had read but I personally liked it very much. I don't know why but I just can't stop reading it. 

But this novel is going to be discontinued by its author. I don't know why but the author has decided to discontinued the novel but I was sad when I heard that it was going to be discontinued as I personally liked the novel very much.

I scrolled through the latest chapter and decided to write a comment.

There were already some dozen comments on it.

[Why you had to drop this novel author?]

[I was waiting to read the new chapter everyday. Sad to know that you are discontinuing it]

[Will you release a sequel or a remake?]

[Hope you come back soon!]

[I wish you didn't discontinued the novel]

Those were some comments written by the readers. Although it wasn't like that the novel was in top stops in the rankings but it had its own popularity and there were many people who liked to read this novel.

I started writing my own comment. I had been writing a comment for every chapter and this would be my last comment for this novel.

I wrote and deleted it several times as I wanted to write a perfect final comment.

[It was a really good read and I really enjoyed it. I don't know why you have decided to discontinued this novel but you must have your own reasons. I just wanted to say that I love your novel and hope to see you writing more great novels]

I wanted to write more but I couldn't find words to write, so I just decided to post it as it was.

Anyway those were my sincere words. I have reading this novel for 2 years and I have enjoyed every moment of it.

I have found this novel when I was casually browsing through the website and it has really intrigued me.

As I was going to close the website, I noticed that I had received a notification that a 'message has arrived'.

I clicked on it and a message appeared.

—GX07 : Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it.

—Me : Are you the author?

No matter how much I tried to remember but the only person I know who has that username is the author of [The Immortal Cultivator]. So, I suspected it was him.

It was a slight unusual username to have, so I clearly remember it.

—GX07 : Yes,  I am the author of the [The Immortal Cultivator]. Thank you for your comments till now.

It was really the author. I excitedly started typing my keyboard as it was my first time talking with a author.

—Me : No, no it was your novel that was good. I really enjoyed it.

—GX07 : Thank you for reading it till now. By the way, I want you to do something for me.

—Me : You want me to do something for you? Tell me author. If I can do it, I will surely help you.

—GX07 : It isn't something major. I just want you to answer some casual questions for me. It's like a survey.

—Me : Questions! Sure I will answer them.

—GX07 : Thank you. Here's the link.

I noticed that he had sent me a link. As I was about to click on it, another message arrived.

—GX07 : By the way, if your answers passes the minimum requirements, I have a gift for you.

I was confused by that message. Passing! Minimum requirements! Will I also be graded for my answers?

I didn't think much of it as my eyes went on the gift part. I don't know what type of gift the author is talking about but I was looking forward to it.

It's been so long since I had received a gift from someone.

Anyone will like it when they received gifts. He also likes when someone give him a gift.

He clicked on the link and some questions appeared. There are five questions and they have some space to write answers for them. 

Q. What do you think is a good novel?

A.  A good novel is a novel in which the reader can visualize the scenes and the characters. It should have a good plot and there should be interesting storylines to make the readers engrossed.

He didn't know how to write a proper answer for that question and just wrote what he think. He wasn't a author, so he can only write his answer as a reader.

He didn't waste time thinking about it and skipped to the next question.

Q. What do you think is a good main character?

A. A good main character is a character which the reader can relate with. If the reader and the main character didn't relate with each other, then the reader wouldn't like to read the novel.

Again, he wrote what he thought would be the answer and moved to the next question.

Q. Do you think that the MC having multiple girls make sense when the story is in the modern world?

A. No, I didn't think that the MC having multiple girls make sense especially in a modern world. It literally breaks the common sense of the world. I can approve the MC having multiple girls if it is a fantasy world but in a modern world where the society is monogamous, it didn't make sense.

For him, it was a tricky question. At first, when he had started reading novels, he loved novels with the main character having multiple girls but as he started reading more novels, he found out that it didn't make sense for the main character to have multiple girls. Most of the time it only brings trouble for the main character and many authors only decide to go with a harem because they wanted to show the masculine side of the main character but it only helps in ruining the love side of the novel. He had seen many novels getting ruined because of the harem.

Those were only his personal thoughts of the harem. It wasn't like he hates that genre but he only likes it when it makes sense for the main character to have a harem. He didn't like protagonist who were dense and didn't know that the girls around him had already fallen in love with him. 

Well, moving on the next question.

Q. What will you do if you have the chance to enter the novel you like? Will you like to enter it or not?

It was more like a Yes/No question unlike the previous ones and there were two options, Yes or No to choose. Honestly, it was a rather easy question to answer especially for a reader. I mean, which reader didn't want to get transported in a novel of his liking.

I immediately clicked on the Yes option and moved on the next and the last question.

Q. Imagine if you got a chance to know the ending of a novel you liked which was discontinued or never finished. Will you like to know the ending or not? State your reasons?

The last question was a interesting one. I started thinking what will I do if I really found myself in that kind of situation. 

The question reminded me of the [The Immortal Cultivator] which was discontinued today. I wonder if I will be able to know its ending someday.

I decided to write my answer after some time.

A. If I really can read a discontinued novel which I like, then surely I would want to read it as anybody would want to know the ending of a novel they are reading and couldn't read because the novel was discontinued.

I finally wrote all the answers to the questions and clicked on the submit button. After he clicked on the submit button, the site asked for his e-mail to send him the results.

He filled his e-mail address and exited the site.

I wonder whether I will win or not. There's also the gift from the author if I passed the minimum requirements. I wonder what gift he will give me if I really passed.

Well, he didn't mind even if the author didn't give him a gift. He had only agreed to help the author answer the question because his novel was a fun read and it was free, means he was able to read the novel without any cost.

That's why he had decided to help the author, it was not for the gift.

Well, it wouldn't hurt if he really give me a gift. But I will only receive the gift if I passed the minimum requirements after all.

I was thinking naively back then, I didn't know that the Q/A session will change my whole life upside down.

A ordinary guy founds himself in a weird situation.

He was in novel, a story that he read for 2 years.

He had become a character with no destiny, a Mob.

In this world of Cultivators, Warriors and Mages. How can he a Mob become someone great.

Let's see, how he a Mob can change the story completely.

Hello every reader,

This is an important chapter for all readers,
In this chapter, 
I would like to explain about my novel. 
So that all readers could make their decision to read this or not. Or How to read this.
I don't want to waste a reader time as there were too many novels for them to read out there.

I have read many books since young, especially Chinese martial art novels and fantasy novels that make me see their own new creations.

But from my surrounding told me that I am wasting my time reading nonsense books.
To reply that, I wrote my novel as in Eastern fantasy martial novels.

This novel is written on many purpose. 
So,
It talks, ….. a lot in a first book.
In there, it explain what and why, the MC think and do, 
The MC thinking is very different from most other people thought.
MC thinking would be changing time to time depend on coming situation. 
So, if any reader saw, something is very different from the reader thought, 
Please wait and read later chapter, there would be another different situation and MC would think different.

In real life time, some people thought, they were wrong, 
But there is a question,
"Did you really do wrong back then?"

….

The MC in there is flexible, 
So, it is not good for someone, who holding firm something and thought,
 
"This is definitely right, and never wrong" they are not good for to read this novel.

Easy Example, 
"Money"
Some people thought,
"More Money More Good, Never Wrong with More Money."
If a reader really holding firm that kind of things and read this novel would only make the reader angry.
So, I suggested please don't be angry.

And The MC said these were bad things mean he is pointed to ME (Zmp) as I am bad, I lie, I kill, I scam, 
So, these all were not pointed at to any other, so don't angry if you found something making you angry.

Most of the things were written with reason but still there were some have no reason or reason hidden.

I have created many things, 
Power, it's levels and others things. 
'Most of all would be explained in logic but still some were not in logic.'

But I would not explain this until Book No.2,
From starting from Book No.2. 
I would write like other novel but still different. 

I have hidden many things, and it would be explain later chapter.

...….

I am not good in English, so there would be many mistakes.
If anyone found something is really wrong, and that make all reader could not understand.

'Please tell me, so that I could correct it,'

There were many mistakes, 
I leave it like that, as I thought many readers could understand and skip it.

....
"I wrote this novel in English
But that does not mean,
I am writing an English."
...…..

This is a walkthrough of a MC,
And wrote it from MC point of view,
So, the usage of the words would change as MC felt it.
 Please read it as a reader in the MC mind and felt what MC felt,
I wanted all my reader think deep inside of thing what MC did and said.

Thank
Zmp.

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(Disclaimer:  All characters, organizations, places, cases and incidents in this novel are fictitious.)

Copy Right: I don't give my copy right to any.
This is a novel that I created, the more creations would come later and everything related is mine alone. I could not write all my creations now as this novel nature is in long serial. I don't give permission to anyone who try to use my idea for them profit and as their own.

Everyone who copy, translate or using my novel in other place without my approval mean: they all agreed to pay me 1 million USD per month. 

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A short story for all who read my messages.
A short story I just created and it could be expanded to long and more detail.
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There were raining heavily,
A man with a gun walking around and check the surrounding area for food.
At the surrounding area, there was a big water dam.
At that time man who was looking for food, found something that shook him,
What he found was at the dam, and he knew everything about dam.
This dam would definitely collapse if he don't repair it. 
But he could not do it alone. 
So, he look at down toward the water dam, and he knew there were a village there. There were a military camp future down.
If the dam break and all the villagers and soldiers from that village, military camp and all living things surrounding area would die.
He could not wait until the dam collapse, and he don't have too much time.
He needed the help from villagers from that village to repair the dam So he rush down toward the village.
But there were some problem,
That villager lives were not his responsibility, because the man and these villagers were not from same country.
More over, they both were enemies countries, just a few days ago these villagers try to chase him and kill him. 
The soldiers from military camp were his enemies.
Even if he has a gun and villagers did not have gun. He did not want to kill them, so he run away.
That why he knew there were a village. 
If the dam collapsed and that was good for the man country. 
Now he was doing is betraying his mother country.
When he arrived to village, he got many injuries from rushing down there and he is so tired from rushing down.
And he hasn't eat for a few days. But he could not care.
When he got there the villagers were trying to attack him. But now he used his gun and quite down.
He tried to explain about dam but every stupid villagers don't care.
And someone tried to kill him with sneak attack while he was trying to explain.
And the man has to shot that man down as a defence. 
As the man don't have time, he threaten all villagers to follow his words.
And now all villagers follow his words.
They all tried to repair the dam in struggle but finally the dam was repaired.
Everyone so tired, especially the man.
As the dam was nothing happen, every stupid villagers thought the man with the gun was just torture them.
The man with the gun was so tired, that why he put down the gun and tried to rest.
And another man sneak attacked him strike him with rock many times on his head and face and kill the man who save them.
The man got suffer pain from his attacker, and too tired, all his body was cover with blood and his face was destroyed from rock smash.
He was in really pain and he know, he will die soon.
But at that time he saw a group of children they were staying a bit far from them.
He smile,
Finally he die while smiling,
But the story not end yet.
After he die,
The villager man who kill the man with gun become a hero reward by his country, as he who understand the responsibility to save his village people without caring his life.
And the man with gun was name as a devil, who used his gun to threaten, kill and torture all the villagers including children.
Even when that man die, he smile like a devil. 
And his mother county, name his as betrayer and kill his family. All his family curse him before they die.
Both countries leading people knew, the man with the gun save many people lives but this is what the counties do in reality.
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"The Real Hero is someone who don't understand his responsibility but sacrifice everything, his life, his family, everything including his name as a devil or demon to save all other living things."
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"I, Zmp, alone here salute all the real hero who sacrifice everything and die as a devil."
...…..

There were many people worship Bob Dylan,
I like his sound and some word too. 
But because of this should I close my eyes? 
For the first time, I saw a quotes what Bob Dylan said what was posted on Inkstone. I thought that these words were good.
But I felt something was missing I did not know what.
So I read it again and again, finally found two words,
Freedom: but that not too much problem.
But
Responsibility: to who, to what, what was a deep meaning inside of it?
A short story and 'responsibility' is a hint for everyone to think what was deep inside down there.
I don't think hero should not be like that.
14/10/2019
...…...

I here request to Webnovel site to change the words,

Bob Dylan said: I think of a hero as someone who understands the degree of responsibility that come with his or her freedom.

The degree of responsibility and responsibility is different.

Bob Dylan said that: Some people feel the rain. Other just get wet.

Thank
14/10/2019

There were people who try to run before they walk.
.
Who did not know, what is ABCD and trying to write eassy in English.
.
Without foundation, building a Skyscraper.
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Who did not know, what is Magic and trying to used Nine Sun magical fist.
.
There is one Question,
What is magic?
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Action start from Vol. 2, 
Skip for action, 
Read Vol.1, history later.

Notice: This is just a side story and does not relate any way in the main story so you can ignore this if you want. 

"I am finally here." A person said. "Huh, who are you and where is the author." The Reader asked with a confused face. "Me, you ask? I am the great alter ego." Alter ego replied. "Oh! But why are you here?" Reader asked.

"Well, I am here to save the character from the sadistic author." Alter ego replied while laughing. "Huh, What do you mean by that, and how will you save the character?" Reader asked with a confused face. "Well, that's a good question, but I can't answer you." Alter ego replied, shaking his head.

"Huh, is it that secretive and important," Reader asked with an excited face. "Nope, not at all, it's just I want to build up the tension." Alter ego replied with pride. "Ah! Okay, then but can you tell me how are you here or you going build-up that so-called tension." The Reader asked. "Haha you are learning from me, and yes I will not tell you." Alter ego replied, laughing. "So, how are you going to save the character." Reader asked. "Well, for that, I will show you so I can increase the word count." Alter ego replied. "Aren't you ashamed?" Reader asked. "Nope, not at all and let me increase my word count." Alter ego said and started the story.

Just as William punched Karol, Ellie didn't stop him and kept hitting him, and after a while, he finally stopped breathing. "Heh! Never talk s**t about her." William said, laughing. 

"Wait, Wait, Wait, what are you doing?" Reader suddenly interfered. "What do you mean by that?" Alter ego asked with a confused face. "Aren't you going to save him, then why are you killing him?" Reader asked with a stern voice. Suddenly Alter ego started laughing, "He can't die as he has something no other can have, something that others always want but can never get." The Alter ego started his monologue. "Huh, what does he have?" Reader asked with an excited face. "Well, he has the plot armor." Alter ego said and continued the story.

Suddenly, Karol body started glowing, and his every wound was healed. He then looked into William's eyes and said, "Die." and he died. Karol looked at himself and realized he gained immense power and was able to kill anybody with his word. Suddenly he looked towards Ellie.

Ellie then bowed Infront of Karol and said, "Oh! My master, I am sorry I did not realize your greatness and wanted you to forgive me." Karol being a generous guy forgive her and then married her. Then Karol travels every place in the universe, killing everyone that annoys him with his plot armor and no could kill him as he had the plot armor. He also married every beautiful girl and have kids with them.

"Wait, Haven't you just make the worst story." Reader asked as he started to get a headache. "Heh, I never say that I am writing a story and that sadistic bastard is writing it, I am trying to save the character of the novel." Alter ego replied. "But haven't you only saved Karol." Reader asked. "Well, in the novel, only the main character is a character, and everyone else is.." Before he could finish his sentence, he falls unconscious.

"I am sorry about this person, and I will not upload the chapter." The author said after hitting on the alter ego's head. Then he picked up alter ego and take him to the basement and chained him in the chair in the basement.

A few hours later.

"Huh, where am I?" Alter ego asked. "You are chained in the basement by the author, and he also stopped the upload of that chapter." Reader replied. "Heh, like he can do that as I have scheduled it so it is going to be uploaded and guys give the novel five stars and follow it." Alter ego replied, laughing maniacally. "Aren't you ashamed by your self-promotion." Reader asked. "None not at all ahhhhh!" Alter ego suddenly shouted as the light was gone. "Hehe, I was not scared ahhhhh not at ahhhh all." Alter ego keeps shouting as the light keep going and coming.

What will happen next? Will, the author, will realize about the scheduled release? Will alter ego be able to release himself? Will alter ego admits his fear? See all of it in the next episode.

"Wait, but who are you?" Reader asked with a confused face. "Me, I am the mysterious man, hehe." The man then disappears in the shadow while laughing creepily. "What the heck is going on today?" Reader thought, shaking his head.

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