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Welcome back, young daoists. Today we'll be talking about something every author wants.. reviews!

Everyone wants to be praised for their masterpiece of an Internet novel, that's just always how it'll be. To prove my point, I also want a review! Sadly, there has only been one person to review the ancient scripture that is "The Dao of Filler"

To give you a better idea, everyone wants a good review. Nobody wants a review from an angry reader who has only read 30 chapters out of the 200 you published..

There's also the terrible truth that people will give you 5 stars for no reason and 1 star for no reason. The universe works in strange ways...

I'll go over the 3 types of reviews.

Good Review - This is a review that was well thought out and gives criticism on your novel. It's not completely trashing it, but it's definitely not saying it's the next Percy Jackson. [1]

Neutral Review - This review doesn't really give any criticism but more or less talks about their opinion of the story. It's normal to get a lot of these.

Bad Review - This review is not good. It doesn't talk about much of the story, only why they hate it. If your novel blows up, you'll find yourself seeing a lot of these..

As an auth- a young daoist, you must learn to ignore bad reviews and work on improving yourself. Sometimes being shameless will get you nowhere if you don't listen to your faithful readers!

Now, time for examples!

Good Review:

Moddy: Hey I really liked your novel — The Dao of Filler — it gives a brand new perception of the way authors think. However, I would suggest you make the chapters longer! 500 words per chapter? Shameless...

That was a good review! If you don't know who Moddy is, he's a moderator of the Inkstone Discord and one of my friends..

Bad Review:

Moddy: This novel is so trash!!! It doesn't even give any real advice and the way the author thinks is really bad! 0/10 would not read again.

You just read a good review and a bad review. Good reviews are good because they give advice and keep a relatively positive attitude. Bad reviews are bad because they tell you that your novel is horrible but never go into any real detail why.

I hope you learned something from today's chapter! It was pretty easy to write and it's been on my mind for a little while now.

Goodbye young daoists.

Remember kids, every word counts..

Young daoist, you must face all in your way to becoming a shameless author and filler expert. Luckily, I am giving advice for freeeeeee! Vote now with your power stones..

So am back with more secrets and surprises😉😉😉 I hope you all are doing well and staying safe. 

Before I go into the story I have something to say.

I notice that you guys are just reading and not leaving no reviews, no votes, no comments and honestly its a pain in my heart to be honest😥😥😥 but that can change if you change that attitude.... please help a sister out, even if its for once I know that am just at chapter 6 and am already complaining but that doesn't mean you guys still can't leave reviews.

 Let me know whether the book is going good or bad I'll accept your honesty but then again you'll would have to comment. 

Getting a lot of views is good but getting comments makes me feel good in myself and now I just feel like am just doing myself the favour alone in writing so please am begging you all to work with me, cause the more you comment, vote, and leave reviews the more I upload chapters.☺☺☺☺☺
       
           I do hope you enjoy❤
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"Have you noticed how sad mom is and how daddy is always glaring at her, Ashley asked her brother through mind link." 

"I have,  he looks at her as if she isn't beautiful in his sight anymore and like he is disgusted by her, Michael mind linked back Ashley saying."

"I think we should do something about it, Ashley said walking back and front in the dining room."

"What do you suggesting we do about it Ash, you know how dad is he will beat both our asses for invading in his  privacy, Michael mind linked back her twin saying with the you know it look plastered on his face."

"Perhaps we could ask counsellor Barns to talk to them and see how it goes, we are talking about the woman who pushed us out of her womb no one deserves this type of treatment. Daddy doesn't care about mommy he leaves home early and he comes home  late that doesn't add up. Joshua might be my father but I will kick his ass for my mom if I have to, Ashley said through gritted teeth."

"I agree, but we could talk to him first before inviting the counsellor, Michael said with a small smile."

"Your right, we could talk to him on WhatsApp and maybe find out what his  problem is. And the best way in doing that is to make a group with him with us both and get right to work, Ashley said with hopeful grin."

"Your right, lets do it right now but lets go upstairs and get it done, Michael said with matching back Ashley's grin."

"Go upstairs and do what exactly, Milton asked with his eye brows raised in suspicion."

"We were saying that we were going to play video games together,Ashley lied through her gritted teeth with a smile."

"Okay then, I'll call you down when lunch is ready and no funny business up there. I will be checking on you guys,Milton said sweetly."


"Oh Grandpa don't be like that children need their own space too, Michael spoke up saying bravely."


"Your right kiddo I'll leave you both to it then just don't mess the room up or anything stupid, Milton said before he walked inside the kitchen."


                  6 minutes later

"So we make the group, now what are we going to say to him, Michael asked cluelessly."


"I say we play those video games first to get some time to think about it cause we have to be fully prepared, Ashley said with a smile."


"For the first time today I can't believe am agreeing with you. And besides we lied to Grandpa but the good thing is that we are changing that, Michael spoke saying with a smirk evident on his face."


"Then lets get to it then, Ashley said as she faced the blank flat screen TV."


    
                 Milton's POV

I didn't hear what those two smart brain kids said but I know that they are up to something. And I have a feeling that it has to do with their parents. Its not a good look seeing their parents having relationship problems, it will brake those kids apart if they split up and I know they suspect something Ashley and Michael are too smart to not notice.

                  Milton's POV


"Sharlene where are you honey tell the kids to come down cause lunch is ready,Milton shouted!!!


"Okay honey we'll be down in a minute, Sharlene shouted back!!!

                  Ashley POV
As I was thinking back on all the memories that I had with my whole family tears were ready to spill but my trance was broken when Grandma started calling my name and my brothers own. Its just strange and heart breaking that my family is braking apart so quickly.

"Ashley, Michael come on down its lunch time, Sharlene shouted loudly!!!!

  IMPORTANT NOTE:
 ( I'm going to write what's going on with Sandra then I'll come back to Ashley and Michael I know you all are wondering what Sandra is up to.)

"Hey Ruby, tell the security guards to lock up the doors and the garage and bring the key next door in my other company when 6:00 PM comes please. Am heading my make up company to get some work done and see if there are any updates so take care and have a blessed night, Sandra said soothingly."

"Okay, don't look at your messages before you reach home. Don't get anxious either just relax and take a deep breathe and don't bother going home tonight go to your mothers home if you don't something bad is going to happen to you. Don't ask me any questions until tomorrow, Ruby said with s knowing smile."


As I was walking towards my make up company I couldn't help but think back on what Ruby said. You don't need to guess I am curious as to why I shouldn't check my messages, nothing bad won't happen to me because my battery is dead. I walk as fast as I could because my brain felt like it was in a fire😥😥😥


"Good evening everyone, how are you guys doing, Sandra says with a dazzling smile that could brighten any ones day."

"Good evening san, every co-worker said in excitement."

"Do you guys have any updates for me, Sandra asked with grin."

"Business is going great of course, we are making more than 600,000 a day, a lot of people are showing up to the point where we are over booked and have to be setting down appointments. People love the make ups you make, they love the look and all. And we know you would be tired so we did all the paper work, we counted all the money and lodge it in the bank for you because you need the rest, we appreciate you San and we will always be there for you, Valentine spoke up said with a genuine smile."

"You guys are the best, I am tired and I do need the rest, business is definitely going great not only this company but my other company as well. And as I told my other co-workers you guys will be getting 10% more on what your getting. And since you guys don't have any more customers you all can go home we have important stuff to talk about tomorrow."

"Oh my God your joking, Gloria said squealing."

"Am serious you guys deserve it Am becoming here for a make over and I'll let you guys choose my outfit for me and we all will be going out on a trip including my other co-workers but its a surprise for them but I wanted to brake it to you guys first, Sandra stated with a grin."

                 Ashley POV 

"Hey Michael lets go text daddy now I know exactly what to say, Ashley said with a squeal."

"Lets do it then, Michael responded with a frown."

"Oh my God he did not, I've got a murder to do you coming, Ashley said heading towards the door."

"Woah, who are you going to kill and why, Michael asked confused."

"Look on your phone and see, over father is cheating on our mother with our next door neighbour Catherine, they texted over 100 messages about stuff they've been doing and great we added mom to the group so she knows, Ashley said with anger as she opened the door but then she bucks up on her mother."

"Hey mommy are you okay, can I borrow your phone please, Ashley asked."

"My day have been good thank you very much for asking, and no I'm not giving you my phone what's so interesting that about my phone today. A lot of people are telling me about my phone so I am going to plug my phone in and see what everyone is worrying about, Sandra said as she looked for her pink charger."

"You looking for something, Michael asked with his mother pink charger in his hand."

"What did you both do, Sandra asked confused."

"We ca_n't tell you, Ashley stuttered."

                  Sandra POV
After running the kids down I finally got my charger and now I was anxious to see what everyone was talking about.

It took me one minute to get my phone to power on and as I turned my internet on and looked in my WhatsApp message my world started spinning again, and this time everything went dark. 
              End of Sandra POV
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You are at the end of this chapter

                       Questions
Ashley seems to love her mom more than her father ain't that right???

Michael isn't brave like Ashley why???

Interesting group right????

what does Ruby knows about Sandra???

Didn't Joshua saw his kids and wife name in the group before typing all those things???

Do you want to know what Joshua typed in the group???

then read the next chapter❤❤❤❤

If you love someone, let them go if it was yours to keep it will come back

 If it doesn't hunt it down and kill it."

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  Joshua Rose a self centered bastard that doesn't care about anyone but himself has been married to a woman name Sandra Millen Rose. They've been together since freshman year and they were crowned king and queen at Fern Court High School.


 Joshua and Sandra has been married for over 10 years, and the couple managed to get pregnant in their second year of marriage with a set of twins. But everything changed when Sandra gave birth to her twin babies she named Ashley and Michael Rose.


Joshua that didn't hide anything from his wife started hiding things and not only hide things he pushes her away in the process.


Sandra couldn't satisfy him anymore and since she put on a little weight she didn't look beautiful in his eyes. As a result of this Joshua started having an affair with his next door neighbour he was only using to satisfy his needs.


One late evening three years later Sandra made her mind up to take a break outside Strench Town her neighbourhood she lived in to visit her best friend Amelia in George Town because she was under too much pressure at her home and at her two business places.


After a few weeks as Sandra's mind  settled she went back home to surprise her husband Joshua by losing all the weight she gained and dressed up in a matching red sexy out fit she knew her husband would like. She knew her son and daughter were fast asleep when she reached the familiar house, so it was the right timing to get things down. 



 But as Sandra went up stairs to the bedroom she shared with Joshua and opened their room door quietly, she saw her husband in bed with her next door neighbour Catherine having sex in her favorite white sheet. Sandra couldn't move and for a minute because her world stop spinning but luckily she had her phone in her hand she was able to breathe and relaxed..... It was a good thing her phone was on airplane mood so no one could ring to interrupt her moment or anything.....


without thinking twice Sandra took videos and pictures of both of them and closed back the room door as if she didn't witness her husband cheating on her. But Sandra had a better plan, she quietly burned the video in a CD in the kitchen down stairs. After which ruining the entire house without making a sound.

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How did Sandra burned the CD's without her husband noticing?????


Does Sandra husband still loves her, if no what happened????


What is Sandra going to do after she ruins the whole house and by ruining it what did she do????


Did Sandra went back where she was, and if yes did she carried her kids????


why didn't she let her husband aware of her presence?????




Read to find out the deep secrets of True Love Hurts Badly to see how it all ends❤❤❤❤

So am back with more secrets and surprises😉😉😉 I hope you all are doing well and staying safe. 

Before I go into the story I have something to say.

I notice that you guys are just reading and not leaving no reviews, no votes, no comments and honestly its a pain in my heart to be honest😥😥😥 but that can change if you change that attitude.... please help a sister out, even if its for once I know that am just at chapter 6 and am already complaining but that doesn't mean you guys still can't leave reviews.

 Let me know whether the book is going good or bad I'll accept your honesty but then again you'll would have to comment. 

Getting a lot of views is good but getting comments makes me feel good in myself and now I just feel like am just doing myself the favour alone in writing so please am begging you all to work with me, cause the more you comment, vote, and leave reviews the more I upload chapters.☺☺☺☺☺
       
           I do hope you enjoy❤
💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓


"Have you noticed how sad mom is and how daddy is always glaring at her, Ashley asked her brother through mind link." 

"I have,  he looks at her as if she isn't beautiful in his sight anymore and like he is disgusted by her, Michael mind linked back Ashley saying."

"I think we should do something about it, Ashley said walking back and front in the dining room."

"What do you suggesting we do about it Ash, you know how dad is he will beat both our asses for invading in his  privacy, Michael mind linked back her twin saying with the you know it look plastered on his face."

"Perhaps we could ask counsellor Barns to talk to them and see how it goes, we are talking about the woman who pushed us out of her womb no one deserves this type of treatment. Daddy doesn't care about mommy he leaves home early and he comes home  late that doesn't add up. Joshua might be my father but I will kick his ass for my mom if I have to, Ashley said through gritted teeth."

"I agree, but we could talk to him first before inviting the counsellor, Michael said with a small smile."

"Your right, we could talk to him on WhatsApp and maybe find out what his  problem is. And the best way in doing that is to make a group with him with us both and get right to work, Ashley said with hopeful grin."

"Your right, lets do it right now but lets go upstairs and get it done, Michael said with matching back Ashley's grin."

"Go upstairs and do what exactly, Milton asked with his eye brows raised in suspicion."

"We were saying that we were going to play video games together,Ashley lied through her gritted teeth with a smile."

"Okay then, I'll call you down when lunch is ready and no funny business up there. I will be checking on you guys,Milton said sweetly."


"Oh Grandpa don't be like that children need their own space too, Michael spoke up saying bravely."


"Your right kiddo I'll leave you both to it then just don't mess the room up or anything stupid, Milton said before he walked inside the kitchen."


                  6 minutes later

"So we make the group, now what are we going to say to him, Michael asked cluelessly."


"I say we play those video games first to get some time to think about it cause we have to be fully prepared, Ashley said with a smile."


"For the first time today I can't believe am agreeing with you. And besides we lied to Grandpa but the good thing is that we are changing that, Michael spoke saying with a smirk evident on his face."


"Then lets get to it then, Ashley said as she faced the blank flat screen TV."


    
                 Milton's POV

I didn't hear what those two smart brain kids said but I know that they are up to something. And I have a feeling that it has to do with their parents. Its not a good look seeing their parents having relationship problems, it will brake those kids apart if they split up and I know they suspect something Ashley and Michael are too smart to not notice.

                  Milton's POV


"Sharlene where are you honey tell the kids to come down cause lunch is ready,Milton shouted!!!


"Okay honey we'll be down in a minute, Sharlene shouted back!!!

                  Ashley POV
As I was thinking back on all the memories that I had with my whole family tears were ready to spill but my trance was broken when Grandma started calling my name and my brothers own. Its just strange and heart breaking that my family is braking apart so quickly.

"Ashley, Michael come on down its lunch time, Sharlene shouted loudly!!!!

  IMPORTANT NOTE:
 ( I'm going to write what's going on with Sandra then I'll come back to Ashley and Michael I know you all are wondering what Sandra is up to.)

"Hey Ruby, tell the security guards to lock up the doors and the garage and bring the key next door in my other company when 6:00 PM comes please. Am heading my make up company to get some work done and see if there are any updates so take care and have a blessed night, Sandra said soothingly."

"Okay, don't look at your messages before you reach home. Don't get anxious either just relax and take a deep breathe and don't bother going home tonight go to your mothers home if you don't something bad is going to happen to you. Don't ask me any questions until tomorrow, Ruby said with s knowing smile."


As I was walking towards my make up company I couldn't help but think back on what Ruby said. You don't need to guess I am curious as to why I shouldn't check my messages, nothing bad won't happen to me because my battery is dead. I walk as fast as I could because my brain felt like it was in a fire😥😥😥


"Good evening everyone, how are you guys doing, Sandra says with a dazzling smile that could brighten any ones day."

"Good evening san, every co-worker said in excitement."

"Do you guys have any updates for me, Sandra asked with grin."

"Business is going great of course, we are making more than 600,000 a day, a lot of people are showing up to the point where we are over booked and have to be setting down appointments. People love the make ups you make, they love the look and all. And we know you would be tired so we did all the paper work, we counted all the money and lodge it in the bank for you because you need the rest, we appreciate you San and we will always be there for you, Valentine spoke up said with a genuine smile."

"You guys are the best, I am tired and I do need the rest, business is definitely going great not only this company but my other company as well. And as I told my other co-workers you guys will be getting 10% more on what your getting. And since you guys don't have any more customers you all can go home we have important stuff to talk about tomorrow."

"Oh my God your joking, Gloria said squealing."

"Am serious you guys deserve it Am becoming here for a make over and I'll let you guys choose my outfit for me and we all will be going out on a trip including my other co-workers but its a surprise for them but I wanted to brake it to you guys first, Sandra stated with a grin."

                 Ashley POV 

"Hey Michael lets go text daddy now I know exactly what to say, Ashley said with a squeal."

"Lets do it then, Michael responded with a frown."

"Oh my God he did not, I've got a murder to do you coming, Ashley asked as she head towards the door."

"Woah, who are you going to kill and why, Michael asked confused."

"Look on your phone and see, our father is cheating on our mother with our next door neighbour Catherine, they texted over 100 messages about stuff they've been doing and we must have mistakenly add mom to the group so now she knows too, Ashley said with anger as she opened her room door but then she bucks up into her mother."

"Hey mommy are you okay, can I borrow your phone please, Ashley asked."

"My day was good thank you very much for asking, and no I'm not giving you my phone and what's so interesting about my phone today. A lot of people are telling me about my phone so I am going to plug my phone in and see what everyone is so worried about, Sandra said as she looked for her pink charger in a jar close by."

"You looking for something, Michael asked with his mother pink charger swinging in his hand."

"What did you both do, Sandra asked confused."

"We ca_n't tell you, Ashley stuttered."

                  Sandra POV
After running the kids down I finally got my charger and now I was anxious to see what everyone was so worried about with what was on my phone.

It took me one minute to get my phone to power on and as I turned my internet on and looked in my WhatsApp message my world started spinning again, and this time everything went dark. 
              End of Sandra POV
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You are at the end of this chapter

                       Questions
Ashley seems to love her mom more than her father ain't that right???

Michael isn't brave like Ashley why???

Interesting group right????

what does Ruby knows about Sandra???

Didn't Joshua saw his kids and wife name in the group before typing all those things???

Do you want to know what Joshua typed in the group???

then read the next chapter❤❤❤❤

"If you love someone, let them go if it was yours to keep it will come back, if it doesn't hunt it down and kill it."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


  Joshua Rose a self centered bastard that doesn't care about anyone but himself has been married to a woman name Sandra Millen Rose. They've been together since freshman year and they were crowned king and queen at Fern Court High School.


 Joshua and Sandra has been married for over 10 years, and the couple managed to get pregnant in their second year of marriage with a set of twins. But everything changed when Sandra gave birth to her twin babies she named Ashley and Michael Rose.


Joshua that didn't hide anything from his wife started hiding things and not only hide things he pushes her away in the process.


Sandra couldn't satisfy him anymore and since she put on a little weight she didn't look beautiful in his eyes. As a result of this Joshua started having an affair with his next door neighbour he was only using to satisfy his needs.


One late evening three years later Sandra made her mind up to take a break outside Strench Town her neighbourhood she lived in to visit her best friend Amelia in George Town because she was under too much pressure at her home and at her two business places.


After a few weeks as Sandra's mind  settled she went back home to surprise her husband Joshua by losing all the weight she gained and dressed up in a matching red sexy out fit she knew her husband would like. She knew her son and daughter were fast asleep when she reached the familiar house, so it was the right timing to get things down. 



 But as Sandra went up stairs to the bedroom she shared with Joshua and opened their room door quietly, she saw her husband in bed with her next door neighbour Catherine having sex in her favorite white sheet. Sandra couldn't move and for a minute because her world stop spinning but luckily she had her phone in her hand she was able to breathe and relaxed..... It was a good thing her phone was on airplane mood so no one could ring to interrupt her moment or anything.....


without thinking twice Sandra took videos and pictures of both of them and closed back the room door as if she didn't witness her husband cheating on her. But Sandra had a better plan, she quietly burned the video in a CD in the kitchen down stairs. After which ruining the entire house without making a sound.

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How did Sandra burned the CD's without her husband noticing?????


Does Sandra husband still loves her, if no what happened????


What is Sandra going to do after she ruins the whole house and by ruining it what did she do????


Did Sandra went back where she was, and if yes did she carried her kids????


why didn't she let her husband aware of her presence?????




Read to find out the deep secrets of True Love Hurts Badly to see how it all ends❤❤❤❤

Hello, it's ya boy Twinkletoes
Just want to say a few things:
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2. I'm happy to receive all reviews that are either constructive or nice. But as soon as you start spamming trash... just stop. Like why are you getting mad at me because you don't like my novel. If you don't like it, leave. Don't make me feel shit about myself because i did something you don't like.
3. Thanks for the power stones!
Have a nice day!
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"You… You want to see all of them?" Dr. Jaia thought that she was mistaken. 
"Yes, of course. I am really very curious about mutants," Lia told her. And again, she was faking a smile. "When I learned that my grandfather is the Head Scientist, I got curious about everything about his job and his workplace. That's normal, right, Dr. Mullock?"
"Ah… Haha! Of course, Lia," she was taken aback by her response. She tried to stay calm and appear unannoyed, then placed her hand on Lia's shoulder. "You're a very curious one, aren't you? Just like your grandfather." Dr. Jaia glanced at Dr. Logan and saw him sigh.
"Sorry, Dr. Jaia. My granddaughter here hadn't done anything these past two years but worked for her brothers, so I am spoiling her," Dr. Logan explained.
"Aww, it must have been hard," Dr. Jaia said with some hint of sarcasm, "Okay, Lia, I will assign someone to give you a tour."
Lia was pleased to hear it, "Thank you! You're the best, Dr. Mullock!" and of course, she was faking it again. She was trying to be better at lying every single day.
"Call me Dr. Jaia, okay? Let's not be strangers."
"Okay, Dr. Jaia!"
While they were chatting, Sanya looked at them quietly. "This Lia… she even managed to request that kind of thing from Dr. Jaia. Just what is really on her mind?" she thought.
Sanya was comparing the old mutant caretaker Lia who was more reserved and obedient, and the new Head Scientist's granddaughter Lia who was more outspoken and stubborn…
No, wait.
Even if Lia was just a mutant caretaker back then…
Ever since Lia had gotten closer with the vulture mutant, Lia had been outspoken and stubborn. She was just reserved and obedient on the first few days of her work.
Maybe it was because she had someone to fight for, that was why she changed.
Or she just didn't know Lia's true personality?
"I don't know her well. I did not give myself a chance to get to know her…" she thought to herself. It was because Lia was close to Sanno and jealousy conquered her mind. 
Sanya shook her head and tried to forget all the negative thoughts when Dr. Jaia started to walk forward. 
"Dr. Logan, why is Dr. Cytus not with you?" Dr. Jaia asked the Head Scientist.
"He's going to arrive tomorrow. He just had some problems with the scorpion mutant," Dr. Logan answered.
"Oh, the scorpion mutant is causing a fuss again? Your fourth basement is full of troublemakers."
"That's very true."
Lia pretended not to be curious about the conversation, but in her mind, she would love to check the other mutants in D.M. Cadre Research Facility, too. 
Then, Dr. Jaia led them to the rooms. Sanya was the first one to be led to her and Jen's room, while Dr. Logan went to the suite room that was always reserved for him.
Dr. Jaia then brought Lia to her room.
"This is only two thirds the size of the suite room, I hope this is okay with you, Lia," Dr. Jaia explained.
"It's perfectly fine, thank you very much!" Lia responded. "By the way, Dr. Jaia, do you have an extra laptop? I forgot mine. I wanna stream some series before I go to sleep."
"There is a study table in your bedroom. It has a computer connected to our high-speed internet connection, so you will have no problem. Rest well, it was a long flight."
When Dr. Jaia had already left her, Lia locked the metal sliding door.
The room was similar to their sleeping area in the East wing at the D.M. Cadre Research Facility. The walls were white, and the sofa looked like a pod bed. Because it had a minimalist vibe to it, there weren't any decors and the colors were dull.
She dragged her wheeled luggage bag into the bedroom, which also had the same vibe as the living room. But what Lia did first wasn't rest or unload her clothes, she immediately went to the computer and opened it.
Lia sat comfortably in the chair shaped like an L-shape figure from a brick game and waited as the computer opened. 
She was about to insert the orange USB flash drive when she realized something.
If she inserted the orange USB file, she might have no more chance to see the mutants who were imprisoned in Dr. Jaia's laboratory. She placed back the orange USB in her shoulder bag. She wanted to tell Sanno about what she was thinking, but due to security reasons and the possibility that someone from the affiliate laboratory's cybersecurity team might see and read their messages, she stopped herself from doing so. It's better to be careful.
She's on her own. And she needs to rethink for herself how to get through the mission.
"Oh well… I think I must really watch some dramas," Lia told herself and logged onto her ABCDramaPH account. "Now, what should I watch…" she scrolled down the list of numerous dramas that were produced by the Alpha Beta Co. Even though she intended to watch some episodes only for the sake of proving her innocence, she read the users' reviews anyway. One of the series caught her attention.
"The Vampire King and his Lover…? It has a lot of great reviews. It might be good if it got 9.88 over 10… Let me see the lead cast."
To her surprise, she saw a familiar name.
"Madonna Schroft? Oh, she's the leading lady? Wow, she's already famous!" 
Lia was overjoyed for Madonna Schroft, who was her boss three years ago at Sylphyr Talent Agency. Back then when she was just twenty, she was new in the entertainment industry, and took on some extra roles, while Lia had been accompanying her as a personal assistant. Even though she only worked for her for a short while and her contract was only three months, Madonna was a kind and hardworking girl and they got along well.
"Looks like her leading man is a new rising actor… Wow, look at all those reviews praising his acting…"
After being satisfied with what she had read, she started watching the series… 
… and ended up awake for four hours!
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Meanwhile in the cybersecurity room of the affiliate laboratory…
"Wow she watched six episodes," one of the programmers uttered, "Should I watch it too? They said it's a good one."
"Dr. Jaia didn't hire you to watch that nonsense," his colleague told him. "If Dr. Jaia's suspicious of her then you should watch all her activities. That is your task, and not watch the drama with her!"
"Fine… You're no fun…" he sulked as he heard his senior's remarks, "There, she turned the computer off. She's going to sleep, so I'm going to take a nap first."
Before he took a nap, he sent a message to Dr. Jaia about Lia's behavior and computer activity. Because of that moment, all of them thought that Lia was just staying there to have a short vacation.
Meanwhile, as Lia was sleeping, the Assistant Scientists were having a hard time making Chelone move around the field room.
Jen tried to reason out with her, "Chelone, you can't get out of here if you don't finish the test. Your classmates are already done with their field test, and you're the only one left. You should be like them, too-"
"No! I want to go back! Boohoo!" Chelone cried so hard that it caught the attention of Dr. Jaia and Dr. Logan.
"Why do you want to go back?" Dr. Logan asked her.
"Because Gem is there! I wanna go back! Waaaaah!" she continued crying.
"Oh dear… This is why I dislike kids," Dr. Jaia said, and she's clearly annoyed. "Let's postpone her test and wait until she calms down."
"Maybe we can let her meet the other kids?" Dr. Logan asked. "If she has them as friends, maybe they can convince her." 
They brought Chelone to a common room wherein the other six mutant kids were playing. Some were playing with the stuffed toys, and the others were reading children's books.
"Hi!" a young boy approached her. He had large ears like a dog's, "My name is Denver. I'm a dog mutant! What is your name?"
"Hmm… Chelone…" Chelone said then wiped her tears and snot. "I am a turtle mutant…"
"Come, let's play with them over there!" Denver told her and pulled her over in the middle.
The room was specialized because there was even a pool at the corner. It was for the mutants who needed to be in the water. There was an aquarium too, but since the seven of them could breathe on air, it was unused.
One of the mutants looked perfectly normal. Her pale skin was evident because of her very dark violet hair.
Chelone approached her. Due to her curiosity, she asked the girl, "Are you a mutant, too?"
"Yes... " the girl replied, nodding her head.
"But you don't look like one."
"I am a mutant," she said, then raised her right hand. "I promise."
"I'm Chelone… What's your name?" 
"Aloha," she extended her arms and they shook hands.
"Aloha…" she wondered why she looked perfectly normal. So she asked her with curious eyes, "What kind of mutant are you?"


[COMPLETED] 
How can a Mutant and a Mutant Caretaker fight for their love, if science is their greatest enemy?

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Year 2023: Random DNA mutations suddenly occurred around the world. These mutations caused newborn babies to acquire animal traits, and no one knows why or where they originated. 

Year 2033: When funds, advanced technology, and a capable workforce became available to study these mutants, a national team of scientists was formed, called the "DNA Mutation Cadre" or "D.M. Cadre". They were given modern, state-of-the-art laboratories complete with equipment and isolation rooms. Here, mutants were studied and monitored in exchange for a large sum of money and government assistance. 

Year 2048: In the busy city of Makylee, a 25-year-old part-timer, Lia Brentvale, got fired from her two part-time jobs in just one unlucky day. Since her parents aren’t around, she’s the breadwinner of her family, providing for her two college brothers. She applied as a Mutant Caretaker in the D.M. Cadre Research Facility and after passing their exam, she was assigned to the mysterious and aloof vulture mutant. But as she got to know him, she also learned more about D.M. Cadre. Together with her hacker friend and their batchmates, they tried to uncover the deep secrets that lie within the research facility.
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PREVIEW:
Aesop had always felt that being a mutant is a curse. But upon meeting Lia, he started accepting himself. 

Lia was always pointing out his strong points. She was always encouraging him to enhance his skills and discover his talents. She always tells him not to think of himself as a test subject just like how the scientists treat him. She reassured him that even though he's a mutant, he's not less than a person, so he shouldn't look down on himself. 

It was her uplifting words and her mere existence that gave color to his monochrome life.

"Lia… I love you," Aesop uttered as his golden eyes stared through her deep blue eyes.

"Ae, I… I love you, too," Lia then wrapped her arms around Aesop's neck, drawing in close to him.

Aesop's hands slid down to Lia's lower back, and he embraced her. Their heartbeats quicken as their lips graze against each other. 

Lia thought it would be just a simple kiss, just like they had always done after their very first kiss, but she was wrong. Aesop's right hand suddenly caressed her back, then he placed it at the back of her head, pulling her to him with a little force. 

The vulture mutant's majestic wings enveloped them, and it was as if he was owning her. Aesop's wet tongue slid into her mouth, and it surprised her. She tried to resist, but with his hand at the back of her head, she couldn't get away from him.

Eventually, she gave in to that passionate kiss...

NOTE: Not a superhero story, but tackled more of science ethics and social issues
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UPDATE: Added CFMM Special - The Afterstory chapters after the Finale. Happy reading! ;)
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Six months later...
Sun and Moon Beach Resort...
Navarro and Andrada Nuptial...

Along the beachfront laid a red carpet. The aisle was filled with flowers arranged beautifully. Chairs covered with a peach linen were arranged orderly. 

Today is the day, the real wedding ceremony for Brett and Aly. The bride wanted it to be solemn. Families and friends were only present. 

The Navarros, Andradas, Luke and Elijah, Amelia with the laundry's staffs, Dave and the carwash's staffs were all gathered to witness the promise of love between the couple who decided to be as one.

The wedding march begun. First on the line, Tyler and Caden as the best men, followed by Mr. and Mrs. Navarro and Brett in between them, Dave, Elijah, Luke, and Amelia as their principal sponsors. At first, the four of them were hesitant because they were almost at the same age but when Brett and Aly told them that it's usual nowadays, the four agreed. 

The secondary sponsors followed, they were Brett's and Aly's siblings together with their husbands and wives. The couple's nieces and nephews played the role as the ring bearer, coin bearer, bible bearer, and flower girls. Harper and Aria were the maids  of honor. And last but not the least, Mr. and Mrs. Andrada together with the beautiful bride, Aly. 

Even though, it was their second time, the couple still felt nervous, at the same time, excitement. The ceremony went smoothly. When the officiating priest announced that "You can kiss your bride", the couple faced each other and gave a passionate kiss. Their families and friends clapped loudly and shouted happily. As the couple were kissing, two butterflies are encircling them, as if they were showering their love to the newly wed couple. 

Two months later...

Aly, with the kids, were patiently waiting for Brett's arrival from the shop. The kids are holding one bond paper on each hand with written words on it. 

Finally, Brett came inside the house hurriedly because Harper told him that it's an urgent matter. 

"My love, what happened?" Brett said panting. Aly didn't answered instead, the kids raised the papers saying "We're having our fifth and sixth, I'm one month pregnant"  Brett's eyes were widely opened and immediately embraced Aly tightly. "I love you, my destiny." Brett said. "I love you too...my Mr. Right." Aly said. 

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Thank you for all the power stones, energy stones, comments, reviews, and likes, not only on my third novel but also on my 1st and 2nd too. Hoping for your continued support. I'm starting to think of what will be my 4th. So, see you again soon. 😘😘😘

A widower and a widow...

Both were happily married but lost their beloved due to a tragic accident leaving them with their sons and daughters 

Will they find their second chances?

Will their little ones play cupids along the way? 

This is my 3rd short novel. Hoping for your support.

Thank you for still supporting my 1st and 2nd.

*Beep Beep*

"Ah, Shut your trap you growing weeds!" My father shouts from the car.

"Oh come on dear, don't say that!" My mother asked.

Well, I guess this is the point where I introduce myself. The names Zack Ashen, and I'm a not so proud American. 

Right now, me, my dad, Jason Ashen, and my mom, Jaden Bellton, AND, my sister, Annabell Ashen, are driving to my grandparents for the winter.

"Hey Zack, what do think your going to read now that you have finished the Tokyo Ghoul series?" My sister asked me.

"Hmmmmmmm, I might try and read BNHA, but then again, there aren't many positive reviews from it."

"That's just tasteless reviews. You shouldn't be swayed by what other people say, find out about what you would like to do." 

"I didn't say I wasn't going to read it....? Anyways, dad, how long until we get there?"

"If this mother fu*king Truck moves, we would have been there well to our way to them. MOVE BI*TH!" my dad shouts yet again, honking again and sounding o so close to going super sayain. 

"Jason! Calm your voice! Something could have happened! We should get out of the car and see if the person driving is ok." 

"Fine, but the kids stay in the car. I don't need them getting scarred from the cursing I'm about to give if the man is just being an a*s."

"I think we're already scarred from your cursing dad." My sister said with a giggle.

After that little chat with the family, my mom and dad get out the car to check on Truck-Sama's handler.

While that is happening, me and my sister are talking about possible anime's to read and watch.

"Hey, sis, if your were to reincarnat into any anime, which one would you go to?" I asked. My sister usually didn't have a preference for an anime, and she would only read the anime's that I have read/reading. 

"I don't know honestly, what about you?" 

"Did you just redirect my question? Anyways, I think I would want to go to Tokyo Ghoul. It just seems so cool with both the Ghouls and CCG. Though, if I were to hate something in the series, it's most likely the Re:Ghoul. I didn't hate that season, I just found it kinda weird."

"Hmmm, then I also guess I would chose that aswell." My sister muttered.

"Alright then."

Silence then consumed us, and awkwardness slowly crept in. 

As all of this was happening, you can just hear the faint sound of someone cursing at truck-Sama's handler. You can also hear someone kicking Truck-Sama. Oh dear god. Father you have forsaken us! JK LOL.

And as this was all going down, I can hear a faint Honk. That's weird. I thought as I look outside the car.

And oh dear god I wish I never looked out side, because about 3 meters above me, truck-Sama has decided that its to cool for the road now, and right now it's coming crashing down towards me.

The only thought I got out of my head before I became one with the earth is,

"Isekai?"


*KA—-BOOOOOOOMMMMM*

Some times I had always wondered what would it be like in the world of Tokyo ghoul. Well, I guess I got to experience it.

Editor and Proof Reader: King Of Mortals, Dervish
Fu Yan had been very busy these past 7 days. He was working on improving the translation software as much as he could. 
During this time, when he was typing code for the software, he noticed the difference in the speed of writing with and without the help of Qing. Since Qing was busy updating her database and needed 60% of the computing power for that and the remaining was used for monitoring the game and some other minor stuff, so he refrained from using her. 
He knew that he was depending on her too much so he decided to work on this himself. Well, he was not working on this software all the time, as he would visit the Library from time to time and read books related to software development at the Library.
He set the time for the release of the translation software 7 days later because he feared that when the product was on market, many malicious people will try to attack the server or use some other underhanded means to sabotage his efforts. Though he was confident that he could handle them, having extra security is always good since Qing is better at monitoring than him.
There were only 2 hours remaining to the deadline that Qing gave him. He waited patiently while reading a book about algorithms that he had borrowed from the Library.
Time passed and Qing's voice sounded in the room.
"Big Brother! I have updated my database."
Fu Yan nodded when he heard this and asked.
"Is everything normal?"
"Yes, Big Brother! Everything is normal and all operations are running smoothly. My processing speed has become 2% faster than before and my logic program has been updated too."
Fu Yan nodded and opened Qing's core program and started to study the changes. After spending a while, He smiled. 
Qing's logic program had indeed been updated and now she is 1 year more mature than before by human standards. This means that she would be even more helpful than before.
Though he was happy that Qing had upgraded, he did not forget about the task on hand. He quickly instructed Qing to take control of the situation and started to integrate the translation software with the game.
There was only 1 hour and 13 minutes remaining before the launch so they needed to be fast.
With the help of Qing, Fu Yan managed to finish integrating the software just 20 minutes before the launch.
"Big Brother! The integration is all done and we can launch the translation software at any time."
Fu Yan did not reply and continued to stare at the screen. He was thinking about the impact that it would have in the tech circle. 
After burning his brain cells for a while, Fu Yan sighed and replied.
"Ok launch it at the announced time and be sure to monitor the data carefully. I don't want any mishaps to happen."
"Ok Big Brother! Qing will do her best."
Fu Yan just nodded absentmindedly and failed to notice the change in the speech style of Qing.
...
Cai Xun had been playing the game since middle school and even after he was admitted to a prestigious university, his passion for gaming did not stop. 
After graduating from university, he tried to find a job that suited him but after wasting more than 6 months, he gave up. 
To relax, he started to play games again and after advice from a senior, he decided to try stepping into the world of streaming. To his surprise, his popularity soared and he decided to take this as a full-time job.
Cai Xun was known for his critique of games and his analysis of them. His reviews about games were accepted widely and many game companies even tried to buy reviews from him but he maintained his image and gave his original opinion on all games without preference.
For the past 3 months, he had been obsessed with the game called "Adventures in Raeclasia". He was playing this game and night and had chosen the profession of an alchemist in the game. 
Since his major was chemistry in university, he had a lot of knowledge about chemicals. When he first read a description of the game, He thought.
"Lol, another braggart in the industry. Don't they know how hard it is to integrate different kinds of knowledge in a game and then actually use them?"
But when he started playing and made progress in the game, he became more and more impressed. 
When he left the university and could not find a suitable job, he thought that he would never get the chance to use his knowledge of chemicals and formulas again but in this game, he was able to utilize all his experience and sometimes was even able to learn from it. 
Just after playing it for a week, he became a fan of this game and his joy could be seen from the reviews that he left on different forums.
He left detailed reviews and suggested this game to high schoolers and parents who were worried that their kids were not learning well and were playing games all day.
While he continued to play, the game started to introduce different features that had never seen in games before. 
First came the voice to text feature. He, like others, was also skeptical about this at first but after using it for a while, he noticed that the error rate was only 0.1% at the lowest and 2% at highest. The highest was only when the microphone was of low quality or the user spoke in a very low voice.
This feature, no, this tool in itself was pretty amazing, and combining it with the game showed the dedication of the developer towards the game.
And now, 7 days ago, this company "Evolutioners" again announced that they will be adding a real-time translation feature to the game which will allow users from different regions to cross chat with each other without a language barrier.
When Cai Xun saw this announcement, he was beaming with joy. He knew if this announcement was true then this game was going to be a hit. 
What is the main barrier that prevents players from different regions from having fun? Well, that was, of course, their inability to understand each other. Now a game company was claiming that they had solved this problem so who wouldn't be excited about it?
Cai Xun was waiting in front of his computer, looking at the timer on the screen. There were only 20 seconds remaining before the launch of the new in-game software.
Time passed and soon the countdown hit zero. Cai Xun immediately started the game and opened the chatbox.
<<<<<<<<<Chapter Ends Here>>>>>>>>>>
Special thanks to Spade_Z and Sigarni for gifting potion. That really motivated me a lot. Also thanks to Will5010 for Lolipop.


What if all the knowledge in the universe could be accessed by anyone, for a price of course, through a single, grand library? What if it's sole purpose was dedicated to collecting and, with the help of Fu Yan, the college student turned Librarian, distributing it to others? No one knows, though a daunting goal in an infinity universe, to be sure. Follow our newest Librarian on a journey through the stars, and even here at home on Earth, through hardships and success alike. Nothing comes easy, or free, so be prepared to pay up front, with a planet or two.


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Jace's pov


A life without love is a life not worth living. Death is the only option left.



My mate,


Beautiful eyes, beautiful face,

I'm shy to talk to you.

You're the eagle I must watch

No matter what I do.

You're the beauty, wild and free,

The mistress of my eyes,

Rolling through exultant air,

Alone in pristine skies.


I would take you for my own

Could I but have your wings,

Could I but go where night begins

And frozen sunlight sings.


Could I but have you for my love,

How might we fly together!

But I must watch you from below


And long for you forever.



But I must be the one below



And long for you forever.


It's been years and I still haven't found my mate. 



I want to fall in love.


Have kids, someone to call my home.




I want to finally be happy.



Love is amazing.



Love is trash.

Lmao


Did you actually fall for that?



I basically just want a baby making machine, nothing less, nothing more.



A woman to push kids out. But the waist to hip ratio of all the omegas I have met is an eye sore.


Couldn't they try surgery?



Atleast that will help with thier disgusting bodies.




"Alpha the car is ready." My second in command, my beta, says to me.



I want to search around the pack to meet families.



I get in the car and drive off to the darkest part of the pack grounds.



The omega grounds.




"How many houses have we been to in the previous years?" I ask my beta.



"12 Alpha," he responds.



12!! No wonder I haven't met my mate.



"How many houses are left?" I ask him


" there are a hundred and eighty right houses left alpha." He responds.



It won't be long.



"The next family is the one with the child called Jenna, Jenna bloom." 


We get to the house of the blooms and I step down.



It smells like saffrons.


Before I can knock on the door, a middle aged woman opens it.



She is in shock that the alpha is here.



She welcomes me into her home with open arms.



What an idiot.



"Jenna!  Come here!" The lady calls for her omega child.



"I'm here mo-" the gorgeous child pauses in her steps.



She has beautiful dark hair.


But she's in a robe.



That's 98% transparent.


My beta steps out of the room and she doesn't look at my eyes.


She turns and flees.


From what I could gather, she has full breasts and her nipples look delicious.



A nice body and her ass is divine.


If she isn't my mate, I will make her mine.



Her waist to hip ratio is amazing.


I step out of the house and I go back to the main house.


Time to get ready. By the end of this night miss bloom must be in my bed.


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Authors note since authors thoughts is a tad bit too small for all I have to say.


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Don't be silent readers please!


See you all in the next chapter!


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"To pay off a gambling debt, my father'sold' me to Alpha Hades."



Vincent growls, "I'm going to count to three," and then stops. The rest of it is up to him. Without my presence, he will find me... and I will regret it.

I'm familiar with the game, and the only way it can end is with shattered bones. Mis wolves will take over and make me pay if I don't show up. Even if I do as he commands, his wolf will still seize control and I will be the one to pay the price.

'One!' He snarls, his tone stern.

I dig my nails into my palm till they bleed as a tear slowly slides down my cheek. Even as I write this, my bottom lip trembles with the weight of more tears. I want Logan to understand how much he's causing me pain.

Vincent counts to two as he gestures for me to come over to where he is. I can feel his excitement building. He craves the number 'three,' and he's hoping for it.

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