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"Here in the dark, I have come to take you with me."

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The life of young Nicki Raymonds, took a drastic turn, when both her parent suddenly died in an unfortunate car accident. Then, as if terrible events sworn to devour her, she lost her best friend a week later. 

Her aunty, Mrs Potter, decided she needed to vanish from her home, where the immerse heartbreak had happen, thinking her mindset on the world would change and become less bitter and acrimonious. However, to Nicki, life was already meaningless since the day she lost her parent. She struggled day to day, trying to fight back the torture and torment of the phobia of being alone, constantly blaming herself for her loss. 


Six years passed, and Nicki decided she needed to go back to the place where it all began. She needed to return back home, since there was nothing more to loose. After all hell broke lose, Mrs Potter finally agreed to her proposal. Then she moved back to her home in Newyork, with a bunch of new friends she'd managed to keep over the years. Unfortunately for her, after some strange incidents began to occur, she realized that coming back home might just had been the greatest mistake of her life, and her worst nightmare would have to be relived all over again.

Would the wave of distress finally come to take her away, with the tides, pulling her under? Join in on this mysterious journey, and uncover the horror that lays hidden beneath the intriguing story of Nicki Raymonds.

"Here in the dark, I have come to take you with me."

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The life of young Nicki Raymonds, took a drastic turn, when both her parent suddenly died in an unfortunate car accident. Then, as if terrible events sworn to devour her, she lost her best friend a week later. 

Her aunty, Mrs Potter, decided she needed to vanish from her home, where the immerse heartbreak had happen, thinking her mindset on the world would change and become less bitter and acrimonious. However, to Nicki, life was already meaningless since the day she lost her parent. She struggled day to day, trying to fight back the torture and torment of the phobia of being alone, constantly blaming herself for her loss. 


Six years passed, and Nicki decided she needed to go back to the place where it all began. She needed to return back home, since there was nothing more to loose. After all hell broke lose, Mrs Potter finally agreed to her proposal. Then she moved back to her home in Newyork, with a bunch of new friends she'd managed to keep over the years. Unfortunately for her, after some strange incidents began to occur, she realized that coming back home might just had been the greatest mistake of her life, and her worst nightmare would have to be relived all over again.

Would the wave of distress finally come to take her away, with the tides, pulling her under? Join in on this mysterious journey, and uncover the horror that lays hidden beneath the intriguing story of Nicki Raymonds.

"It's not the demon that scares you, it's the anticipation of the demon."

A mother bakes cookies for her daughter, but s"oon realizes that the cookies she ate weren't normal.

Loosely based on the creepypasta short story "A Mother's Call", the story concerns a young teenage girl and her mother living in an apartment in Winston Salem, NC. One day, her mother told her daughter that she baked cookies in the kitchen. When the daughter runs downstairs, she ate her mother's cookies and went back upstairs. When she begins to notice a strange occurrence, her mother forced her to eat more cookies but noticed something unsettling. What kind of cookies did her mother baked?

Mother Knows Best is a supernatural horror story that was inspired by the short creepypasta A Mother's Call. Its story concern the themes of fear and the horror of the anticipation of a malevolent spirit.

Every good second chance story starts with protagonist dying right?

How about living in hell surrounded by beautiful demons?

Ok, ok, but I devinetly think turning into an angel isin't the best option in hell?

Join Richard as he starts his second life in another world.
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The cover is drawn by me and I will draw more art for the novel when I have time.

Please comment so I know I'm not alone in this world.

Be warned there will be Gore and horror.

Tags 
-horror -romance -action -school life -fantasy

It is horror which is chipped in human beings and takes human away from doing the tasks. Horror of death and horror of defeat in life e.g losing employment, losing life, losing family, losing friends, losing business are all horrifying attitude and it is what makes man to be out of way. People are fundamentally chipped with these mentioned features. Craze can do what fear can't let you do. Craze of anything is not a bad thing to me but it opens gates for those who dare to take no action towards anything good for human beings. It is fundamental passion which buries with fear. Only brave people dare to change the history with effective actions and in positive direction.
The course of action only destined to brave people. Unfortunately, humanity dying in the hands of powerful people and those are not friendly to make kind.
It is upto the majority of people to go through studies and most importantly is to listen your hearts which gives indications and signals towards best of the best. 
Wisdom is a deceptive attitude which stops men to go beyond as compared to  unbridled men. Unbridled with positive frame of mind can open new horizons to those who fear or put less efforts. 


A fearless and courageous father with four sons Whom He brought up with care and love but that love and more caring and provision of all facilities made Sons fearful and scared.

After driving for a minute the boys started to worry, four minutes away from a supposed robotic serial killer who preyed on men, and no sign of their male best friend. "Boys, any sign of him?" Mr. Geraldi worried, "No" said Freddy, not taking his eyes off the window. "Nope" said John, his voice shaking. "It'll be okay John, he probably is just standing outside the mansion, he wouldn't actually go in!" Mr. Geraldi said, trying to cheer John up.

After driving for two minutes the boys started to worry, three minutes away from a supposed robotic serial killer who preyed on men, and no sign of their male best friend. "Freddy?" John looked at Freddy with fearful eyes, "Yeah John?" Freddy said comfortingly
"Do you think Adria exists?" John said with his voice filled with fear, "there's no way to tell John, I'm sorry" Freddy said sadly.   

After driving for three minutes the boys started to worry, two minutes away from a supposed robotic serial killer who preyed on men, and no sign of their male best friend. "Well if she does exist, and we are actually heading to our appending doom, I have something to tell you" John said, looking down at his shoes.

After driving for four minutes the boys started to panic more than ever before, one minute away from a supposed robotic serial killer who preyed on men, and no sign of their male best friend. "What is it John? Keep looking outside, we may see him" Freddy said. "Freddy, I really li-" John was going to say something but got cut off, The car stopped, They were there.

"Alright boys, we're here, make sure to be very careful, we don't know if anyone is actually inside" Mr. Geraldi said with his voice low, it wasn't clear if he was worried about Matthew, John and Freddy or just scared. "The Mansion is up here, follow me" Mr. Geraldi signaled, "how does he know that it's up here?" John whispered to Freddy. "Maybe he's fascinated by Adria's story" Freddy whispered back.

As Mr. Geraldi, Freddy and John crept up the hill, the wind became cold, the atmosphere around the mansion felt heavy and Freddy and John felt a sense of dread fall over them, this is the exact moment the horror would start, but the horror started long before now. "How much longer?" John whispered to Mr. Geraldi, "My feet hurt and I want to go home", "almost there John" Mr. Geraldi said back.

As they climbed higher and higher up the hill, the more dread they felt, they still haven't seen any sign of Matthew. Freddy, John and Mr. Geraldi crept carefully up the hill, they started hearing noises coming from the mansion. After creeping up the hill for twenty more seconds, they arrived at the mansions front door. To their horror,








                                                                 The door was open

I know it's pretty scummy of me to not even try reviewing some content to figure out how to write this blog but I'm dealing with newbies to writing like Nimu here. Even if Nimu DID request this, I'm going to keep this simple and easy to understand.

Why would I do that? Well, I'm pretty sure that even if I bring up tropes like the 'Uncanny Valley', no one will actually understand what I'm talking about and would only nod their heads like chickens because I said some big words or something like that...

That's why I'm choosing to keep this real. Now, let's start off with: How do does horror be 'scary'?

In movies, showing images that either poke at our emotions of unease or disgust is one way to go, or just throw a bunch of jump scares and call it a horror movie... Director's choice. Similarly, you are also the 'director' of any 'horror story' you choose to write.

Most horror writers have the wrong assumption when they think about writing 'horror'. They become trapped in unease themselves because 'fear' stops them from writing. Well, if you really DO feel that way, then just channel that into your horror story.

And no, I'm not playing with ya.

There's a reason horror's start off in a simple premise with easy-to-understand people, after all.

Have you never experienced a horrifying event or nightmare before? Fine, I'll give you an example.

There was a time when I was a kid that I suddenly started looking for my older brother who went out of the room that afternoon. As a kid, darkness made me feel uneasy, so I didn't like the feeling of going into the kitchen in the other room which was pitch-black at the time. And that's when it happened!

The older brother I was looking for jumped out of the darkness and scared the life out of me...

Now, from that short memory. What have we found that made this memory so impressionable?

The answer is that there was a 'sudden set-up' of unease before the jump scare, making it scary.

If my brother had jumped in front of me at any other time, I would only be mildly surprised. However, the transition between 'set-up' and 'payoff' made it more worthwhile. This is what you must remember.

Remember, before setting up a scary scene in a horror story, you yourself must first evaluate how much 'set-up' you are willing to make for the end payoff and if that payoff is even worth it.

The reason I got scared by my brother was because of the 'suddenness' of the event. If I had time to properly analyse the situation and realise that my brother was playing a prank, the effect of him jumping out of the darkness wouldn't surprise me.

Likewise, if there was fast or literally no set-up and the payoff was that an brain-like alien actually existed in my kitchen. I would be scared, I would be struck dumb because my suspension of disbelief would be broken. I wouldn't even know how to internalise that event if it actually happened. The only thing I would do is stare at the thing blankly.

Blankness is not fear, it's just your brain not being able to comprehend what you're seeing.

If there is less set-up to big events, the payoff would be low. This is the same for ten chapters of set-up just to reveal someone doing a prank. You yourself must balance 'set-up' with the intended 'payoff'.

However, that's not to say scary story's need surprising moments where something or someone jumps out from the dark. Even that show called 'Goosebumps' knew the best way to scare someone is to manipulate the emotions of a reader.

When something good is happening but there is subtly a small scene of watching the main character through the window, the reader's heart is gripped tightly. If THEY don't want anything to happen to your relatable and kind character, then they will feel unease even if your character is clueless.

Then when the payoff happens, the reader will be assaulted with a sense of grief and sympathy.

Horror story's are just like that. They aren't meant to scare the reader through flashing images or jump scares but cause them to feel deeply. Though this is also a reason horrors are rarely read by people who are looking for something lighthearted and bright.

You must know this target audience and prepare your story well to become a good horror. If mixed with mystery, then you must also make sure to keep what I said in my 'Mystery Genre Analysis' in mind as everything there is also essential in this blend.

(My other Analysis Blogs are in my Saved Posts.)

There are plenty of ways to make horrors not need mysteries by blending it with tragedy. However, it isn't something you can write with a bright heart free of ill-will towards others. After all, you must understand what makes people 'uneasy and disgusted' with something whenever you write something of this genre. As it is needed to bring out the best experience for those reading your work.

Some think Horror and Tragedy are two sides of the same coin. However, there is a reason these two are split up into separate genres. Tragedies might invoke sympathy in those who read it, but Horror strike the readers with true fears even if they are irrational.

Ghost stories make us fear the Supernatural, Stories about technology progressing beyond humans can control makes us fear Science Fiction, and even story about a mystical world which only curse its inhabitants with grief make us fear Fantasy.

We are rational creatures after all. We take each step carefully and are always uneasy about the unpredictable future, that is our mundane form of horror. We fear, and therefore we feel alive.

Thank you for reading~! Comment any more Analysis Blog requests to your leisure! 😆

(Cover by Darkstar Dust)

This is a story I worked on ages ago that has been refined and edited by adding foreshadowing to events while also simplifying the power system better than before. This story can be considered a prequel to An Adventure Beyond Greatness as it takes place years prior to the events of that story.

Short Synopsis:
After retiring from the battlefield, my life became empty and lifeless. The regrets of my past haunt me in my sleep. Then a change occurred, a King from another world summoned me to fight for his kingdom, but I died even before I could give him my answer. Now, after a fake God allowed me to reincarnate (albeit imperfectly) with my memories intact, into a world filled with magic and swords.

Long Synopsis:
This is about a flawed protagonist who only knew to rely on others and not socialise who gets a second chance to change himself in order to live the life he aimed for in his past life. The narrator isn’t exactly trustworthy since it is purely in his bias perspective while other perspectives given by others fill in the blanks that he either leaves out or twists to suit the situation.

The story itself can be considered a parody of Isekai’s classic tropes which are given a sense of reality as time goes by. As there exists no ‘Demon Lord’, there is also no black and white, only characters opinions and counter-opinions throughout the story.

Hmm… where were we…? That's right, Sans fell off the couch. "Killer? You alright buddy?" A voice ask, it was a pretty deep voice but not really that deep, it has a bit of… how should I say this… ah, that's right. You don't need to describe the voice when you could just say their name, this is Dust, Dust sans from Dusttale. Dust is one of Sans's close friends. Wait, Sans? We shouldn't call him Sans anymore, he had changed his name after all. His name is now Killer, Killer sans from Killertale. "Yeah… I'm okay" Killer replied to Dust as he rub his skull from the impact. "You sure? You've never napped for this long, boss was worried when he couldn't enter your mind" Dust informed him. Killer's boss, Corrupted. A skeleton who seem to be covered in tar, has four (hentai) tentacles coming from his back. He has one glowing cyan eye. "Huh…? That's weird" Killer mumbled before he stood up and went to the kitchen, then he saw his food lover eating friend, Horror. The cute food loving cannibal skeleton look at his close friend. "Oh hey Killer, you feeling better? Did you get a good nap?" Horror ask him as Killer sits in front of him with a small snack. "I'm better and I did get a good nap. The dream was weird tho…" Killer mumbled the last part. "What did you say?" Horror ask, Killer shook his head saying 'nothing'. Horror nodded a bit uneasy with the answer but he didn't push him. Soon after a few minutes, Killer finish his snack. He went to throw away the rubbish before heading to the throne room. There on the throne is his boss, Corrupted. He seem to be just staring into space. "Uh, boss" Killer start as he walk closer to Corrupted.

Corrupted blink and look down at Killer, "What?" His voice was deep and smooth. "Is it alright for me to go back to my au?" Killer ask with a bit of confidence. Corrupted was confused on why Killer wanted to go to his au when it's empty. "I guess there's no harm." With that, Killer thank his boss before walking to his best friend, Error, to ask him to open a portal for him to go to his au. "Error! There you are!" Killer found Error in the sewing room. "Huh, oh hi Killer" Error look at his best friend.( I see Error as a soft kind bean when he's with the bad guys) "What do you need?" He ask and place the puppet that he was making. "Well, I want-" Killer started but stopped when he look at the puppet. It was similar to the girl that was in his dreams. Y/n was it? "Killer? You alright?" Error touch Killer's shoulder, the reason why Error wouldn't glitch out when contact was done, is because he trust the gang a lot. "Who is this…?" Killer's words were a bit shaky and had the feeling of fear inside. "Oh, this is a girl name y/n. I found her in an au code, so I kept her because she was special, she didn't die from her code being destroyed and we became friends" Error explained while smiling at the memory. "Do you remember what au she was from?" Killer as and look at Error. "I think she was from your au" Error says before standing up, "So, you wanna see her?" He ask looking up at the taller skeleton.

Killer look down at the shorter skeleton before nodding. Error smile before he take Killer's hands and open a portal to his anti void where he kept y/n. The two walk in and of course the girl would hear because the anti-void was empty after all. "Error? Who do you have with you?" She ask. "Yeah, it's me. Killer's with me, he's your sans from your au" Error sat down in front of y/n while Killer stood, it's awkward for him after all. "Oh, hello Killer, pleasure to see you, again" She greeted him with a smile. "Yeah, same y/n" Killer replied to her. "So, how are you?" She ask and look up at him. "I'm okay… what about you?" He ask, a bit nervous to meet her after what had happened. Y/n giggled while she covers her mouth. "Sorry, it's just you're so cute when you're nervous around me. I don't blame you after what happened 10 years ago. And I'm doing fine" Y/n answered. Error smile at their close friendship. "G-Good to know" Killer's face was almost like a cherry. Y/n nod then ask him how he meet Error and Killer explained everything. Y/n nods while be explains, not stopping him anytime. After Killer had explained everything, he was even more nervous about being in the same room as y/n. Error noticed that and place his hand on his shoulder.

"Killer, it's alright. She'll forgive you, I just know" Error whisper to Killer and Killer nodded. Y/n didn't hear this as she was a bit distracted with her own thoughts about Killer on the other end. "So, um, y/n, would you like to go to the castle? Where we could stay together like old times?" Killer ask her and he look at her right in her eyes and that took a lot of confidence. "Sure, I see no harm" She answered and hold Killer's right hand .( Friend way, I do that to my friends-) Killer's blush increased more, you could almost used it as a lamp. "Alright lov- you two, let's go back" Error stand up and open up a portal. Y/n nods as her hand held Killer's hand as if they were couples. "Y-Y/n?" Killer started. "Yeah?" Y/n turn to look at him. "W-Why are you holding my hand?" He ask. "Don't you wanna do things like the old times?" She ask and started dragging him to the portal and enter the portal. She's now at the castle, in the sewing room. "Wow, is this your place Error?" She ask. "This is the sewing room" He told her, "You can explore the castle, don't worry, they won't attack you 'cause Killer's with you" Error said before he sits down and starts to work on another puppet, maybe his boyfriend-I mean boss. Killer and Y/n walk out of the sewing room, they both start heading down the hallway to the living room from Killer's directions. Y/n open the door and saw Dust, Horror, Cross and Corrupted.

"Kil- Who's that?" Horror stop mid-sentence when he saw y/n, the others also turn to look. Wow, they're really calm about a human being inside their castle, I mean, they could kill them later if they do anything wrong. "Hi! I'm y/n! Killer's best friend!" She said and Killer walk from behind her and he was still a cherry. "Kills? You okay? You're blushing pretty hard" Dust stated. "Y-Yeah I'm okay!" He didn't mean to shout. Corrupted look down at his hand and saw why he was blushing. "I didn't know you had a girlfriend" Corrupted then look at Killer's eyes. "N-N- S-She's not my girlfriend!! W-We're just friends!" Killer shouted and he snatch his hand away from y/n's hand. "Girlfriend… Girlfriend…" Y/n was confused before looking at Killer. "You have a girlfriend?!" She said with excitement. "W-What?!" Killer was kinda mad that his own crush was convinced by that. "Tell me everything!" She say. "Hehe, I see. So, I'm Dust" Dust introduces himself to Y/n. "Horror" Horror held his hand out for her to shake it. Y/n took it and luckily Horror didn't put anything in his palm/hand. "C-Cross…" Cross mumbled then look away, he just wants to be with Dream. "I see you're like the shy type" Y/n smile before looking at Corrupted. "I go by Corrupted" He says. "So you're Error's boyfriend?" She ask. Corrupted nods while the other three was shock. "Boss. Why didn't you tell any of us?" Dust say. "What? Tell you what?" Corrupted ask. "You dating Error" Horror said as he took out his phone and called someone? "ARE YOU CALLING LUST?!" Corrupted yelled before he grab Horror's phone with his tentacle. "Horror? Horror? You okay?" Corrupted was correct, it was Lust. "Listen here Lust, I don't want to want you to be at my god damn castle" Corrupted said with a lot of poison. "Aww~ why?" Lust ask but the call of ended by Corrupted before he threw the phone at Horror which hit his face.

A portal open beside Corrupted and came out a skeleton. He wore a crop top shirt- it's your one and only Lust. The skeleton who has haters who loves him now and need new haters- Anyways, Lust stood beside Corrupted with a smirk. "Here I am~ and what are you gonna do?" Lust ask and Corrupted turn around to grab him with a tentacle, Error walk though the door. "Corrupted…can I get cuddles?" Error ask and tears were threatening to fall. Corrupted jumped and ran to Error and immediately hug him before teleporting to his room or Error's room. "That went well" Lust smile and went to sit beside Horror. "So, who's this beautiful lady?" Lust ask as he looks at y/n with interest. "I'm Y/n" She smile and Lust. "Lust, nice to meet you" Lust laughed, "So you're the girl that Killer use to talk about before he forgot about you" Lust said. "Forgot about me? Talk a lot about me?" Y/n ask and sit down on the couch that was free with Killer. "He forgotten about you about 5-6 years ago because you were distracting him a little, he keeps on feeling butterflies in his imagery stomach when he think about you. He talks about how good of a friend you are and how you're sec-" Lust was cut off by Killer's shouting. "DON'T TELL HER THAT!" He shouted and cover his face with his hands. "Alright, alright" Lust laughed.

(So, this is what I can do so far- I have a lot of Christmas things to do like, an edit for my roleplaying friends, my sister's birthday is on 23 December which is tomorrow as I am writing on 22 December and I wanted to write a new story which is a Nightmare x reader- So, I may or may not be writing or drawing to keep me busy. Anyways, have a nice Christmas!

With that, merry Christmas and a happy new year!

-Moon
)

As Horror saw what it was he yelled, " No please tell me I'm wrong"?!

As Horror looked up in well, horror, he saw someone he never expected.

Looking up at him with a smile was none other than Davis!

"D-Davis what are you doing here?!"

His grin grew larger.

"No wait you must be here to save me oh thank goodness!" Horror said with relief.

"Oh of course I saved you, you're so amazing!" Davis said with a look of relief

"Ok then let me out of these restraints." Horror said in an urgent tone.

Davis walked behind him and started to hurriedly fig-ited with the restraints.

The groups POV-

"Ugh guys I can't find anything out here either!" Lia said frustrated.

"Come on let's search just a little more ok?" Alex said in a sympathetic tone.

"Fine whatever." Lia stated with a sigh.


Time skip after around 30 minutes-

"Ok let's just leave we've been here for hours." Xavier said finally.

"Fine I guess we won't find anything here let's go." Alex said with a defeated sigh.

"What do you think happened to him?" Venus stated in a worried tone.

"Well whatever happened he's not here so-" Lia said as she was cut off.

"Oh crap I left my bag inside- sorry guys I'm gonna go get it" Xavier said rushing to the door.

"Wait we'll go with you we still don't know if it's safe in there!" Alex said running after him as the others followed.

They walked up the stairs all the way to the attic and opened the door. Then they heard a voice that sounded like Horrors.

Shared POV-

"I'm so happy you came to save me Davis some psycho kidnapped me, I was so scared."

Davis gave Horror a sweet smile.

"Ow what the- Davis what are you doing your tightening the restraints!"

"Sorry sweetheart it's for the best really." Davis said still keeping that sickly sweet smile.

"What the heck- Someone help me!!!" Horror yelled violently!

The group in the room stopped and turned to the wall.

"Guys this time someone actually screamed! But there's nothing here?!" Venus said scared.

Lia started feeling the wall, "Guys I think I just found a hidden door!"

They all ran over to see behind the chest was a knob on the wall.

"We're coming to help you hold on!" Alex screamed, "let's go guys!" They said determined.



“OMG HoRrOr HoLiDaY just uploaded!!!” Alex yelled!! What happens when a group of youths decide to follow the leader and explore a haunted house? What will happen in that house? What will become of them?
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