"Of all the ghost, the ghost of a past lover are the worst." Raffy closed the book that she was reading. Whether she agrees or not, the fact that the turned pages of her journey cannot be undone remains. But once a person reads past pages over pages, there is the tendency of certain words, passages, and chapters that haunts us even when the book is long closed. And for Raffy, it was Von—the man who rippled the pages she's been trying to rewrite.

"Of all the ghosts, the ghost of a past lover is the worst." Raffy closed the book that she was reading. Regardless of whether she agrees, the fact that the turned pages of her journey cannot be undone remains. But once a person reads past pages over pages, there is the tendency of certain words, passages, and chapters that haunt us even when the book is long closed. And for Raffy, it was Von—the man who kept flipping back the pages she's been trying to close.

Sometimes you don't need 400 pages to convey your feelings, 40 words are enough. I reflect on whatever I have been through and still struggle and pour it on the form of poetries.

"What?!" 

"I am in Harry Potter universe?!" 

"My name is Kent Granger?!" 

"Hermione Granger is my sister?!" 

"I have a System?!" 


[No INCEST or Sexual Content.]

[Update schedule: 2500 words (1 or 2 chapter)/ week.]

[I do not own "Harry Potter".]

"What?!" 

"I am in Harry Potter universe?!" 

"My name is Kent Granger?!" 

"Hermione Granger is my sister?!" 

"I have a System?!" 


[No INCEST or Sexual Content.]

[Update schedule: 3 chapter / week.]

[I do not own "Harry Potter".]

(I do not own the picture if you are the owner and want me to take it down then I will)

Tags: gender-bender, OP, wishes, system, otherworld, R-18, cold MC, Summon, yuri, harem(2-6), reincarnation

1st world - Highschool DxD
2nd world - Naruto 
3rd world - Star Wars
4th world - Demon Slayer
5th world - ???
I Do Not Own any of The Anime/Manga/Movie worlds above they are owned by their respective authors/Owners.

Also this is my first fanfic/novel so just saying Bad Writing Ahead! I plan on making each world be around 60--120 chapters/pages 1500--2500 words long, some parts will take longer than others, if I don't make at least 1500 words than I'll post another to make up for it. Not posting any chapter till January 20 to see if people want this.

Synopsis: 
Died playing video games and watching anime... got wishes from God... living my life to the fullest in different worlds!!!

(I do not own the picture if you are the owner and want me to take it down then I will)
{https://www.pinterest.com/pin/536139530610353058/} credit for picture

(((PAUSED TO WORK ON OTHER NOVEL)))

Tags: gender-bender, OP, wishes, system, otherworld, R-18, cold MC, Summon, yuri, harem, reincarnation, unreliable author, calm MC

1st world - Highschool DxD
2nd world - Naruto 
3rd world - Star Wars
4th world - Demon Slayer
5th world - ???
I Do Not Own any of The Anime/Manga/Movie worlds above they are owned by their respective authors/Owners.

Also this is my first fanfic/novel so just saying Bad Writing Ahead! I plan on making each world be around 60--120 chapters/pages 1500--2500 words long, some parts will take longer than others, if I don't make at least 1500 words than I'll post another to make up for it.

I will not be following canon because I barely know it in the first place. I know the most about Star Wars and Naruto I will will try harder on those.

I'm doing two storys give me time to write chapters for both.

Synopsis: 
Died playing video games and watching anime... got wishes from God... living my life to the fullest in different worlds!!!

The celestial emperor of immortal beasts was reincarnated as a black snake in a desolate era which cultivators, demons and devils fought fiercely to become true immortals and have lived as long as the heavens themselves...
  In this world ruled by mortals wu yu will find a way to ascend the heavens and even transcend them, follow him on his journey as he takes back his throne as a primordial emperor.
  ...
  Ima say this so no one goes crazy- I am not the best writer but I will try to improve however I can, but the more I write the better I will get, if you have any ideas to make the story better plz leave them down in the comments

https://discord.gg/FkrUBg
  Join the discord server to discuss about the novel and the chapters


 Now let's talk a little bit about the character where he finds his characteristic
About the system also Talk a little about my angle of view about the book what I am proposing about it where I want to go and everything else this book will have between 1500 pages to 2500 pages so please like the book I share it add to favorites it helps a lot, I'm not asking us or anything like it is My first book I would like to know your emotions also comment on what you think should happen in the future with the character well tips You are very important for this book to continue thank you thank you for be reading this Livre.
Let's talk about the system first, there will be Shopping, there will be lottery, there will be skills and everything, Of course I will not tell what will happen in the system
now let's talk about the character Daniel has 1.75 light brown eyes light brown hair defined medium body height he played football at school got good grades i had a scholarship in Sport for Harvard, i won't talk much about parents or siblings Because this will succeed in the future not now many are thinking that he is making money very fast, but folks think of me is the stock exchange that is moving up makes money very fast this service money very fast so that's it thanks today comes out a chapter today a chapter comes out at 8 pm and more than one will come out will depend on my possibilities describe but every day it will be from 1 to 5 chapters.
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                                                                    Prefácio (PORTUGUES )
 Vamos agora falar um pouco do personagem onde ele se encontra a característica dele 
Sobre o sistema também Falar um pouco do meu ângulo  de vista sobre o livro o que eu estou propondo  sobre ele aonde eu quero chegar e tudo mais esse livro    terá entre 1500 páginas a 2500 páginas então por favor curte o livro compartilho adicione nos favoritos que ajuda muito, não estou pedindo para gente nem nada como é o  Meu primeiro livro  gostaria de saber as emoções de vocês também comentem o que vocês acham que deve acontecer no futuro com o personagem bem dicas Vocês são muito importante para que este livro continue obrigado agradeço por estar lendo esse  Livre.

Vamos falar do sistema primeiro,  vai ter Shopping vai ter loteria vai ter habilidades e tudo mais, Lógico que eu não vou contar o que vai acontecer no sistema 

agora vamos falar do personagem Daniel tem  1,75   moreno claro olhos castanhos Claros cabelo castanho estatura do corpo mediano definido ele jogava futebol americano na escola tirava boas notas eu tinha bolsa de estudo em Esporte para  Harvard, não irei falar muito dos pais nem dos irmãos Pois isso vai conseguir no futuro não agora muitos estão achando que ele tá ganhando dinheiro muito rápido, mas  pessoal pensa em comigo é bolsa de valores que está mexendo ganha-se dinheiro muito rápido esse service dinheiro muito rápido então é isso obrigado hoje sai um capítulo    hoje sai um capítulo às 20 horas podendo sair mais de um vai depender das minhas possibilidades descrever mas todos os dias será de 1 a 5 capítulos

#Participating in the Webnovel Spirity Spring 2020 awards


New BOOK 

https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-zombie-attack-begins_17494166205159505


A História de um jovem rejeitado por uma menina por ser pobre Nem tudo na vida é dinheiro, mas desse jovem vai ser, estudando numa escola de ricos mesmo não sendo vamos contar a história de Rick que lutou para subir onde está, mas sem machucar ninguém e sem pisar em ninguém isso no começo



The story of a young man rejected by a girl for being poor Not everything in life is money, but this young man will be, studying at a school for the rich even though we are not going to tell the story of Rick who fought to get up where he is, but without hurting anyone and without stepping on anyone this in the beginning

Chapter 221 - World Creation (2)
"Sure enough, it really is this thing. Amazing."
Chen Yu slowly turned the box around and displayed its front to the camera. "It's Hogwarts! A Super Floating Castle!"
[Oooh~~]
[...Lego is awesome.]
[So, the whole box is filled with building blocks?]
[Crazy!]
[A floating castle? Can it really float?]
[I'm selling my house to buy Lego stocks now.]
[Did Lego bribe the host?]
[Isn't this a little too crazy? How large would the castle be once it's pieced together? Can people live on it?]
[The host already said it's a 1:1 scale floating castle.]
"I'm sure everyone is familiar with the Lego Company. It's a world-renowned toy company. The toy building blocks launched by the company are sold all over the world. And t seems the company will be the sponsor for today's livestream."
After giving the audience a 360-degree view of the box, Chen Yu removed the seal and opened the box, revealing the several dozen instruction manuals stored within it.
Grabbing the book labeled with the number '1', Chen Yu flipped to the first page. To his surprise, the Lego logo printed on the page actually jumped out of the paper and hopped between the page and cover.
"This is...a hologram?" Chen Yu couldn't help but be surprised.
When he turned to the second page, numerous images emerged from the book. There was even a virtual avatar of Harry Potter riding around on a magic broom, and this avatar circled above Chen Yu's head while yelling, "Death is but the next great adventure!"
Chen Yu felt as if he had just opened the rumored book of magic...
"A combination of books and holograms..."
Hurriedly, he set the book down on the ground and tried touching the pages. Afterward, he pinched the Harry Potter hovering above him before exclaiming, "Crap! He has a physical body! He's not a hologram! Damn... Is reading such an experience in the future?"
Poof!
Suddenly, the Harry Potter avatar disappeared in a puff of smoke and reappeared standing on the book's page. The avatar then swung his wand at Chen Yu while chanting, "Avada Kedavra!"
Chen Yu: "...If I suddenly die, then this might as well be the product of God."
"What the fuck?" As if he had just witnessed something unbelievable, the Harry Potter avatar stumbled backward. He then flew back into the page and turned into a sticker.
"What the fuck?! Is this something Harry Potter should say?!" Chen Yu ranted.
[I don't need the floating castle. I'm fine with just that book.]
[I don't need the whole book. Just give me one of those pages. It's best if there's a female character on it. I wanna see how realistic it is.]
[I really, really regret being born in this world so soon!]
[Humans of the future really are blessed.]
[When will you review a time machine? Take us to the future for a tour.]
[Looking at the technological content of that book, I bet it's a product from the year 2500 or beyond...]
After experiencing the instruction manual's novelty, Chen Yu turned to the third page. Immediately afterward, bubbles containing texts floated out of the page.
Every bubble represented a language.
(English.)
(한국어.)
(En français.)
(Deutsch.)
(العربية.)
(简体中文...)
Chen Yu naturally chose Chinese without hesitation. The next moment, the words on the page instantly got translated into Chinese.
"That's it for the unboxing session. Once I finish reading the instruction manual, I'll give everyone an introduction and evaluate the product."
Sitting cross-legged, Chen Yu quickly flipped through the pages. After spending 10 minutes listening to music and watching special effects and animations, Chen Yu finished reading the first instruction manual.
Boom.
Tossing the manual back into the box, Chen Yu stood up and faced the camera. "Hogwarts--Super Floating Castle is a part of the Lego Company's Harry Potter series, and it is produced in the year 3172. Those pixel blocks are made out of a material called Type-VV solid aerogel. The building blocks are also integrated with liquid nanoworms. Once the assembly is completed, the user can change the building blocks' shape and texture through the programmed procedures.
"For example, if a part of the completed structure is designated to be water, once the assembly is completed, that designated part will really become water. The same is also true for the parts designated to be clouds.
"As for the magicians inside Hogwarts, they will naturally come to life as well. So, we'll have a chance to 'pinch' a real Harry Potter."
[My world view...]
[Are you sure this is something that exists in 3172?]
[Human technology has already developed into the supernatural in the 32nd century. Is there any difference between this and world creation?]
[Does that mean ordinary people that enter the castle can use magic as well?]
[I doubt even children of the 32nd century can complete such a big project, right?]
[It's obviously sold to playful adults...]
"With my current physics knowledge, I can't even begin to imagine how the form and nature of matter can be changed at will. However, this isn't a crucial matter. What we need to focus on is simply to review and use this product. As for the underlying principles, it has nothing to do with us.
"Right, as a side note..."
Pointing at the protective suit he wore, Chen Yu said, "When I evaluated this armor in the fourth official livestream, I once introduced that the substance that fills this armor is also called solid aerogel. However, the model used in the armor is only Type-VI.
"The Super Floating Castle has a total of 216,000 integrated boxes, which are these things," Chen Yu said as he picked up a 50-meter-long box, the sight looking as if an ant was lifting a car. "Every integrated box contains 125 marker boxes. And inside the marker boxes are Lego's building blocks.
"Every marker box has at least four building blocks. A conservative estimate puts the floating castle at 108 million pieces. Meanwhile, the official figure is 110 million."
Setting down the integrated box, Chen Yu couldn't help but click his tongue and exclaim, "A total of 110 million building blocks. What a scary number. However, if we successfully assemble all the building blocks, we'll get a 1:0.3 Hogwarts Floating Castle.
"There will definitely be someone among the bullet comments asking why it isn't a 1:1 ratio.
"The 1:1 ratio refers to the ratio after the castle expands. During the assembly phase, the castle will just be one-third of the original size. Once the assembly is completed, the building blocks will release the concentrated hydrogen gas stored inside them, expanding the castle and allowing the castle to stay suspended in the sky!
"It is possible to adjust the castle's floating altitude by manipulating the hydrogen ratio in the main control room. The castle can go as low as zero meters off the ground and as high as outside the atmosphere.
"Alright."
Chen Yu clapped his hands and spread his arms before the camera. "That's it for the product's introduction. The next part is to conduct a live test. A bona fide magical floating castle. If it wasn't sitting right before my eyes, I would've never imagined that such a magical toy could exist.
There are 216,000 integrated boxes and 110 million building blocks. Even a fool can tell that I won't be able to finish assembling the castle together with my assistant. Obviously, we must seek the help of the audience. This will be the largest interactive event we have ever held.
"Well then, are you guys ready?
"Together, let's create a real, spectacular, and fantastical floating castle..."


I am merely a reviewer, albeit the products I review are slightly different. For example, I review quantum computers, artificial intelligence, anti-gravity mech armor, planetary engines, sublight colonial ships, stellar detonators, etc... 
Chen Yu: "The technological product I bring to everyone for today's episode is—a dual-vector foil! W-Wait! Everyone, please calm down! Let me explain..."

I often come across fics in my 'collection' on here that are one continuous storyline. They go on hiatus for a few days and within no time at all, because I will read other fics in the meantime, I forget what it was about and the entire new chapter makes almost no sense at all.

This often happens when people take a break in the middle of a mission or adventure for example. That causes all contexts and new names to be lost.

As a result, I often drop the fic because it clearly doesn't interest me anymore, as else I'd have remembered what was going on.

So, let's take a look at how WN goes to work

.... 
What can we do, to get our newly published works noticed?

If I look at my own behaviour, then I notice that all the new fics and novels that I find, are through keyword based searches and sorting on the recently updated ones.

Why is that?
For me, its because the other options make little sense to me. Searching on power stones, collections and trending makes no sense when you are looking for brand new stuff.

However, does that even show up in the updated list?
Frankly, I'm not sure that it does so immediately.

So what can a brand new author do, to be found more easily?
If we look at publishing wise, then I think a good precaution could be to upload 2 chapters. Perhaps 1 is an auxiliary or prologue, and the second the first full chapter or simply your second chapter.

This also has several benefits. If you don't catch the attention and hook your readers interest in the first chapter, then they're likely to move on.

That's why your first chapter should always be made to do just that.

If we look at news articles, you'll notice that they're build up by doing exactly that.

1. Attention grabbing title
2. Summerised introduction paragraph
3. Detailed substance there of.

So how does this look if we translate it to a WN story?
Let's try! 

... 
1. The end of the world as we know it

2. My Harley roared as I gunned it through the deserted streets, the apocalypse right behind me. Thousands of zombies, of the fast and mutating kind right on my heels. I had been a mere factory worker at J&J making medical implants hours ago when something went horribly wrong. 

3. Somewhere something had gotten out, a patient zero, a bioweapon, an experiment. I don't know. All I knew was that my colleagues and I were producing silicone medical implants when suddenly my boss stormed in snarling, jumped across the room and ripped little timmy's throat out with his bare Teeth before charging at Monica, aiming to infect like a rabbit beast on a mission. 

... 
As you can see, this format whilst not the most common one, does actually work. Even when writing, it pulled me in and almost made me forget that this was an random example and not a draft for a new novel. 

This is the format that we read in blogs and the news papers. Sensationalism at its finest, and we swallow it up each day. 

The reason that this works is because we have become impatient. The first 10 seconds we see something, we make a decision whether to continue for a little more or not. 

We judge prematurely in 10 seconds. 

This is why in my country, we aim for 30 second commercials with this same formula. Because after that? No one pays attention. 

This lead to apps like tictoc where in the space of 10 seconds we judge a video. The beauty of tictoc is that we rarely do not watch a video in its entirety if it looks even remotely interesting, and stories are just like it. 
... 
An honorable mention in this, is to NEVER waste chapters on baby and childhood periods if it is not necessary. 

Usually that entire amount of relevant information from that time period to your story can be summerised into a single paragraph with the same level of effect. 

... 
So make use of the update function, and apply 3 step sensationalism to the start of the story. What else? 

Image. 
There are stories on here that I just couldn't bring myself to read because of the cover image they used, and stories that I read that absolute werent worth my time, simply because the cover image was that good. 

Your cover image is like product packaging. Webnovel did a good job of providing a neutral text based cover image for those who do not want to fork out the cash for an original cover and don't have the talent to make one. 

One of the most important lessons I have learned when judging books by their cover is if they show characters on them. 

In fanfics with the original characters, that's not an issue when they feature said characters because you already have that image of them. 

In non visual original works however, I find that not showing a recognisable character, or face goes a long way to make the book look more mysterious and interesting. 

Because the moment you place the face of a character,  you trigger the judging part of the brains. Just like in tinder when you first open it and are picky. You swipe no more often than not. Untill you get so desperate to get a match that you are willing to chance it. 

Thus, no matter how cool you think the cover character is. You want to hide the face or make it unrecognisable. 

A good example to use is the cover used by: The Mech Touch by Exlor here on WN. The cover character looks interesting but since you can't see what they really look like under the Visor, it doesn't trigger judging mode. 

It is for this same reason that I recommend to always choose either Iconic looking images, such as a grungy looking hand in zombie fics, or unrecognisable characters to people going for book covers. 

Learn from your own bookshelve and see what sorts of covers the books you bought have. I am willing to bet, that most do not have a face on them and if they do, it's been stylized to be less confrontational. 

... 
Okay, so:
- 2 posts
- 123 Sensationalism
- Mysterious book cover

What else? 
- Publishing frequency. 
If you write a story, but have too large a spacing in between posts, then you will loose readers.  Even if you post 70 pages worth on the app once a month, you will loose readers. 

The reason is that on WN you're not the exclusive novel or fic people read. You're one of the dozens at a time. 

Thus, it's best to post a chapter of about 1500 - 2500 words (10 - 20 pages on the app ) with a few days in between each update then it is to post infrequently. 

You need to remain in people's minds, and preferably release 2-3 chapters or more a week to do so. If you can't write that often or fast, then don't worry.

You can use timed releases, binge write untill your muse is gone and release each chapter whenever you time it. It's even possible to write now and set up a release schedule for next year! 

In many cases, going about it like that, with a buffer time between you and when your story is due is better as well. It gives you breathing room, your fans won't have too much influence on your drive to write with shitty comments and you get to write the story you had in mind. 

This is both self assurance and protection, a way to remove the stress and just work at your own pace, just the way you want to. No stress. 

Just look at the earlier mentioned Exlor. He has a release rate of 3 chapters per day. That's insane! Yet he's able to do it because he writes ahead. 

All the negativity and distractions are way behind him when he gets them, because he's already at least 40 chapters ahead. He does his own thing, and I wouldn't be surprised if he's further ahead than even that.

Finally, there is the legibility provided by proper formatting.

I'm not a star in that as you see, the Inkstone editor does not seem to corrospond with what my reader displays.

But I have a few simply tricks for you to apply none the less:
1. Small paragraphs of 2-3 sentences tops.
2. White lines before and after each person talking.
3. Never use capslock
4. Look at your favourite WN entry and copy their formatting. 

...
I hope these suggestions and ideas help you get your story out there. I know I'm not perfect and that most of this is based on self assessments and my own experiences both on the app and on my job in the visual creative industry.

Please share your thoughts and opinions, tips and tricks in the comments!

Have fun!

Thoughts and Idea's with regards to fanfictions, builds for characters, weapons and more.

I'm not an author, my interests in a concept don't last long enough to write it and I am admittedly not the strongest in writing a decent dialog.

I'm someone who is Hyper Aware of a lot of things, and one of them is if something severely lacks. Whilst I can do art Inspite of that, I just can't bring myself to write dialog that doesn't feel perfectly natural.

That said, I do often write drafts for stories, sometimes I even manage a chapter worth of dialog that any author would be proud to own, but when it's about the baseline that I achieve for my dialogs, then I prefer not to publish.

However, I do have ideas, so many ideas and thoughts on things that I feel the need to express them. Hopefully, they will be of help for authors, who are feeling stuck or unsure how to develop their story, or want to write one but are unsure about what to write.

So, long story short. What follows are drafts for fics and stories. Ideas on how to build a convincingly strong character without needing all those rediculously overpowered bloodlines and abilities.

Ideas on how to develop abilities and exploit them, that you might not have thought to try.

Because let's face it, a creative mind can make even the simplest of abilities into a versatile master piece.

All of those things, you will find here, sooner or later. So have fun, be inspired or horrified at what you read. ;p

Name : ? Malfoy
Sex : Male
Age : -8 months, 21 days
Species : Human (Wizard)
Strength : 0
Speed : 0
Vitality : 2
Magic : 10
Karma : 621,809,917,559
System experienced a critical error and had to reboot. Options attached to users soul were deemed to be incompatible with users current world and had to be purged.
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The soul had been alone, thinking it was in an empty abyss until that prompt appeared in front of him. He realized that he could understand it, but wondered who he was and how he came to be here.
Though their faces were threatening to fade from his memories, he sensed that he had people that he loved, but even if he could just barely remember their faces, he couldn't remember their names or anything else.
He felt a wrongness here, like this was not supposed to happen, he thought he should have remembered.
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New message
Sender : Sun Wukong
Greetings Mortal! How grateful must you be that I, the Monkey King, have discovered your soul. This whole system thing was quite fascinating! Whoever thought of it was pretty great, don't you think?
Well, leaving that aside, when you reincarnate you are supposed to lose your memories of your previous life, but I'll do you a serving. You see, you raked up a whole lot of Karma in your previous life, so I'll let you use it to buy things in the shop.
Giving things for free is just broken, don't you think? I certainly do! That was the largest flaw I found with the original system you were given. The second problem was keeping your memories in tact, which goes against the normal requirements for reincarnation, though.
I'll tell you what, though. If you entertain me in this life, I'll see you when you pass and I'll think about granting you an exception and returning your memories to you. Don't come too soon, though, as that would be boring.
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Received Newbie Pack. Would you like to open it?
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The soul was not really sure what to make of the message he'd just received from this Sun Wukong guy, but there was nothing he could do about it. It appeared that whatever he thought was supposed to happen had been hijacked by this Sun guy and all he could do was deal with it "Yes, open the Newbie Pack" the soul thought
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Received :
Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets
Harry Potter and the Prisoner of AzKaban
Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire
Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix
Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Items have been added to your inventory.
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"Show me my inventory." the soul thought, and sighed when all he saw was just the seven items he'd received.
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New Quest Notification : Read all 7 Harry Potter books before you are born.Reward : Random Wand VoucherNote : Depending on how quickly the quest is completed, you may get better or additional rewards.
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The soul sighed. He wasn't sure what this wand thing was about but it was probably important, so he willed the first book to open and started reading immediately.
It ended up taking the soul 4 days to read all 7 books since he didn't need to eat or sleep or anything, then :
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Quest Complete Notification : Read all 7 Harry Potter books before you are born.Reward : Random Wand Voucher
You completed the quest within one month.Bonus Reward 1 : Beginning Wandmaking Guide
You completed the quest within one week.Bonus Reward 2 : Advanced Wandmaking Guide
You did not complete the quest with one day. Bonus Reward 3 is not obtained.
New Quest Notification : Make your first wand before you are born.
Reward : Secret
Note : You can only make one wand using the system, then wandcrafting feature will be removed
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"No additional rewards for being fast this time? Alright, I'll take my time then." the soul thought "System, open Basic Wandcrafting"
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Basic Wandcrafing was nearly 1200 pages long, Advanced Wandcrafting was just over 2300 pages and after the soul finished both of those, he accessed the shop and bought Mythical Wandcrafting, which ws nearly 3000 pages long.
Needless to saym studying all of that took a very long time, hut once he finished he was notified that he had additional wandcrafting options.
Draco did not mind that the Mythical Wandcrafting book cost him half a billion Karma once he say the new options.
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Wandcrafting:
Wood : Yggdrasil Heartwood
Core : Seraphim Feather, Nemian Lion Whisker, Hydra's Heartstring
Orb : Philosopher's Stone
Yggdrasil Heartwood costs 10,000,000,000 Karma
Seraphim Feather costs 5,000,000,000 Karma
Nemian Lion Whisker costs 7,500,000,000 Karma
Hydra's Heartstring Costs 4,000,000,000 Karma
Philosopher's Stone Costs 100,000,000,000 Karma
Do you want your wand to have these Specifications?
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"Yes." the soul answered.
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Do you want a Staff, Wand, or Soul Wand?
Staff : Costs 1,000,000,000 Karma, Magic Growth Rate +50%, Magic Power +10%
Wand : Free, no bonuses
Soul Wand : Costs 150,000,000,000 Karma, Magic Growth Rate +1000%, Magic Power +100%
A soul wand is a wand that exists within the soul. The user can manifest it in a physical form as needed, but it is always a part of them, and is indestructible
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"SOUL WAND!!!" the soul said excitedly. That was not an option he'd read about in the Wandcrafting books, but it looked amazing! "I want it! Accept, ACCEPT!"
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Transaction Complete.
Name : ? Malfoy
Sex : Male
Age : -15 days
Species : Human (Wizard)
Strength : 0
Speed : 0
Vitality : 3
Magic : 16
Karma : 344,809,917,559
Wand Analysis : SSS
Quest Complete 
Notification : Make your first wand before you are born.
Reward : SSS Reward will be added to your inventory after you are born.
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The soul was very excited to see that, understanding that SSS was a very good result and thinking that he'd get something amazing
Not wanting to waste what time he had left, he got into the shop and bought a set of occlumency books, Basic and advanced, for 10000 Karma, saving 2500 Karma since he bought them at the same time. There was sadly no mythical Occlumency book like there was for wandcrafting, at least not yet.
"Open Basic Occlumency." he thought.

His name is Draco Malfoy, at least it is now.  He started out as a soul before the System he possessed rebooted, apparently after suffering a critical error.  Apparently, features he had from the system were incompatible with where he was to be reincarnated, but our MC couldn't remember why.

After receiving a mysterious message through his system from a god or something, someone calling him Sun Wukong, the Monkey King, the soul who would become Draco Malfoy, was left to experiment with his Mysterious System.

Fortunately, his Newbie Pack gave him all seven Harry Potter books to help him prepare to enter his new world, and with that he was able to begin preparing for the eventual conflicts to come.

While his memories of his previous life, or perhaps lives, appear to be missing, he sometimes finds himself just understanding things mysteriously, and he's uncertain why.

He decides that after seeing all the Karma he had previously accumulated, that he must have been a good guy in his previous life or lives, so he decides to live his new life his own way and to hell with the script/story he read.

He'll rise to the top of the world, exploit every advantage his system gives him, and surpass both Moldybutt and Dumbledore!

Note : I do not own the picture, I just found it online and thought that it was appropriate.  I hope everyone likes the story.

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