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2024-08-26 07:33

I think its a fun crack fic, but of all the powers why the eight gates. the MC is only 7 years old and can open 7 gates? the entire point of the eight gates is to build a body that can withstand it, something a 7 year old wouldn't be able to do no matter how talented, even for the first few gates. rock lee didnt even have the 7th gate in Shippuden.

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Emik01
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This novel is a fanfiction where anything is possible, and the protagonist has a system that acts as a cheat, allowing him to obtain anything effortlessly, even if it defies logic. How many years of simulation did it take him to get it?

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if you pause a 7 year olds childs growth, and let them live out 1000 years to train in weight lifting, if they still have the body of a child, they wont be beating world records, its a meaningless concept. its the same for this, no matter how much time you give him to train in simulations it doesn't matter, there's no way his body should be able to withstand the 3rd gate, let alone the 8th.

Emik01:This novel is a fanfiction where anything is possible, and the protagonist has a system that acts as a cheat, allowing him to obtain anything effortlessly, even if it defies logic. How many years of simulation did it take him to get it?
Emik01
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I get why you’re concerned—it does seem a bit strange for a 7-year-old to handle the Eight Gates. Normally, those techniques are super tough and require a lot of physical maturity. But in this fanfiction, Akira has a special life simulator that changes the game. It’s like having a cheat code that lets them skip past normal limits and achieve things that wouldn’t normally be possible. The simulator can make them train in ways that go beyond regular training, allowing him to handle the Eight Gates early on. Fanfiction often plays with these kinds of wild ideas to explore fun 'what if' scenarios. So even if it seems unrealistic, it’s part of the creative twist the story is going for.

robert_8164:if you pause a 7 year olds childs growth, and let them live out 1000 years to train in weight lifting, if they still have the body of a child, they wont be beating world records, its a meaningless concept. its the same for this, no matter how much time you give him to train in simulations it doesn't matter, there's no way his body should be able to withstand the 3rd gate, let alone the 8th.
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