The story seems good, it just seems like it, it's tiring and the protagonist's talent never seems to increase, speaking of talent, the protagonist has none of that, seriously, he depends entirely on the system, I don't even know how the talent system is calculated here, the protagonist has a sharingan, but it's useless, it takes months to learn a low-level jutsu, for high-level jutsus like shunshin no jutsu, they are entire simulations, it simply doesn't make sense, the protagonist (with sharingan) is worse than Obito before the sharingan. The translators are screwing themselves over to translate this, lol. Conclusion: unlike other fanfics in the webnovel, the system is not a crutch for the protagonist, it's his arms and legs.
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LIKEI kind of hate it when a system protag suddenly becomes a genius on top of having a system. The system lets them keep up with geniuses. If they spontaneously gain similar talent on top of that then the story collapses. It also feels disingenuous that they weren't portrayed as talented from the start.