robert_8164

bots are getting worse somehow. even with ai you still manage to be this retarded

its boring. nothing happens. he teaches muggle studies poorly, and once every 20 chapters or so he uses a spell, usually for something meaningless to the story. the necromancy part of the story is basically just his weird skeleton cat that has fur and his pet wraith chicken. literally nothing happens ever.

-reveals his power ch1-2 -retarded plot development -the mc hates that edward saves bella from the truck even though 2 seconds ago his ability told him that they are soulmates. maxed out int btw -seems to hold no resentment for the people who kidnapped and forced him to turn into a creature while being tortured by the process for 3 days -mc has no personality outside of whining (he literally turns off his emotions at like chapter 20 or something and makes it even worse)

i just cant stand the bug clan, dont even remember how to type it out. its just weird. in the first chapter, u max how looks, but whats the point if he has an ant nest inside his body or fights with bugs. who would want to reincarnate as a bug person. and use bugs to fight, its so fucking lame.

im sorry but whats the point of this? theres way too many characters for this to be interesting, you just hop from one side story to the next. in the 40 chapters i read, you introduced at least 10 female characters from slice of life animes. assuming the trend, there will probably be way more. it feels as though the character is never doing anything important. just cheating through life while interacting with anime girls, al the while being proud of ill-gotten"achievements".

some borderline pedo stuff and also the author has a fetish for cucking other men which is always pathetic to see. god knows why you would bother editing this chinese trash.

in the first 10 chapters, i had to seriously question what the fuck i was reading at least 20 times. seriously what the fuck was that? . . . .

you took a terrible chinese novel, and just replaced the name of the mc to an indian name. thats it. why even bother bro? are indians down that bad

the writing quality is dogshit.. theres no logic to anything (the author literally puts footnotes telling the reader to "turn off their iq"). theres no real story either, its just whatever shit the author makes up each chapter, seemingly disconnected from a overarching story. its just all round terrible/.

clones have to be the worst power i see in almost every fic. its like autistic people just want to be like naruto and spam clones for everything