webnovel

Review Detail of LunaKindred in I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.

レビュー詳細

LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv37mthLunaKindred

This story have potential, but dayum.. too many info dump like dahell, you need 8 chapters to describe his starter when you can describe it in 1 chp. I just want to know when the plot started, if it's still like this till chps 12 then I'll say goodbye to this fics

I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.

Chaotic_Sovereign

45の人に「いいね!」しました

いいね

返信13

BrazillianFox
BrazillianFoxLv4BrazillianFox

The guy is very confused, apparently he doesn't understand why the reviews section exists, who usually comment and post here are mostly wanting to help the author improve the work..., or trying to prevent others from reading horrible works here (yes, there are a lot), but the guy above is literally being childish for... nothing?!

Brutality:I'm curious about what your question was. Asking who I was seemed kind of random and unrelated, hence why I put the question mark.
Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4Dissapointed_One

The lack of answer is very telling.

MASSI
MASSILv4MASSI

in chapter 8 he met tang san for the first time

KasiCair
KasiCairLv1KasiCair

I read a bit further now and I gotta say it is getting worse and worse. The author is still over-explaining everything as if his readers were 6 yo like his protagonist. Also, the amount of 'cheats' he is freely throwing at his MC is still increasing and it is starting to be ridiculous. Every single one of these cheats has the potential to make a good story. But all of them together? It's just too much to be really enjoyable. On top of that, the Dimensional Chat Group hasn't even appeared yet and probably won't until this story is at least at ch200 or something with this pacing. The pacing is really atrocious. This is the kind of story that would need 1000 chapters to get somewhere. The author truly embraced the Chinese Dao of Cultivation Writing and ascended to the realm of Writing without Substance. It's kinda disappointing to see all the potential in this idea wasted like this. But oh, well, it is what it is.

コンテンツが削除されました
Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4Naruto_uzumaki_7792

Who understands people, if it's too much, they complain, but if it's too short, also read something and if you're not going to read, leave and that's it.

BrazillianFox
BrazillianFoxLv4BrazillianFox

Dude, that's exactly what opinion comments are for, evaluating and criticizing the work... what are you, 8 years old, that you don't understand that?

Naruto_uzumaki_7792:Who understands people, if it's too much, they complain, but if it's too short, also read something and if you're not going to read, leave and that's it.
Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4Naruto_uzumaki_7792

Here the one who is 8 years old is you believing that your opinion matters to the creator or something like that and even worse believing that you have the right to criticize something when you don't believe anything

BrazillianFox:Dude, that's exactly what opinion comments are for, evaluating and criticizing the work... what are you, 8 years old, that you don't understand that?
Brutality
BrutalityLv4Brutality

Can you reword this? I nearly had a stroke trying to understand this grammer. On another note, if the author doesn't care about the reader's opinion, then he simply won't check the comments where readers are meant to leave their opinion. Just because you apparently don't like their opinion doesn't mean they don't have a right to leave it nor does it mean the Author won't care to read it. Some people actually like getting criticized since it helps them grow, and aren't so childish as to be insulted by it, so don't assume everyone is like you.

Naruto_uzumaki_7792:Here the one who is 8 years old is you believing that your opinion matters to the creator or something like that and even worse believing that you have the right to criticize something when you don't believe anything
Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4Naruto_uzumaki_7792

And who are you? By the way, I don't know English, I only know Spanish.

Brutality:Can you reword this? I nearly had a stroke trying to understand this grammer. On another note, if the author doesn't care about the reader's opinion, then he simply won't check the comments where readers are meant to leave their opinion. Just because you apparently don't like their opinion doesn't mean they don't have a right to leave it nor does it mean the Author won't care to read it. Some people actually like getting criticized since it helps them grow, and aren't so childish as to be insulted by it, so don't assume everyone is like you.
Brutality
BrutalityLv4Brutality

?

Naruto_uzumaki_7792:And who are you? By the way, I don't know English, I only know Spanish.
Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4Naruto_uzumaki_7792

That question mark, what is it for? Is English very bad or you don't know who I am? Remember that you wrote to me first.

Brutality:?
Brutality
BrutalityLv4Brutality

I'm curious about what your question was. Asking who I was seemed kind of random and unrelated, hence why I put the question mark.

Naruto_uzumaki_7792:That question mark, what is it for? Is English very bad or you don't know who I am? Remember that you wrote to me first.
pakahi7952
pakahi7952Lv1pakahi7952

We invite you to trade crypto with leverage of up to 100x. With $100, if the coin increases by 1%, you would gain 100%, or $100, effectively doubling your capital to $200 in a single trade. most coins typically moves up or down by 1% more than 50 times a day on average. On regular days, you have more than 50 opportunities to double your money. On trending days, like August 5, 2024, when many crypto coins dropped by 20%, trading with 100x leverage could yield a profit of 2000%, or 20 times your capital. No registration is needed. No identity verification or KYC is required. Just trade. This decentralized exchange has processed over $200 billion in trading volume. Let’s trade and make your dreams come true. dub.sh/trading