Review Detail of Vargr_the_Skald in MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
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It well written, the pacing is relatively consistent. However the plot/storyline is a bit of a mess. It’s almost as if it can’t decide between being a slice of life ‘game dev’ story, an action adventure story, or a romance story. The flow between genres could be polished to allow for a smoother transition between the story’s mood/atmosphere. Still a good story though, lots of nostalgia points and fun moments.
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Liked it!
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It’s relativly common when you’re rushing through stuff and don’t double check your own work. I’ve noticed that I’ve occasionally missed an ‘s’ here and there so instead of ‘she’ I end up typing ‘he’.
CalistormX:I have seen some mistakes with pronouns which makes me confused whether it is translated fanfic rather than what author claims
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