Sry dood this is not even a fanfic its copy-paste from the original with different name. ðððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððððð
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ãããanonymous_life60:What is the name of the original from where I copied, please tell?
I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
Malcolm_Massey:How often will you be releasing chapters?
I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
Malcolm_Massey:How often will you be releasing chapters?
anonymous_life60:I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
Sir/Madam, please try to fix the dialogue. The dialogue is terrible in the 2 chapters that I have read. I'm a professional at knowing what is good and bad in novels. The dialogue and how the characters say things in the first few chapters are terrible.
anonymous_life60:I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
Lol youâre a professional? You saying that makes me think otherwise, please do not try to flex. All of us read novels and it doesnât take a professional to know what crappy dialogue looks like. It takes common sense.
BlakkStan:Sir/Madam, please try to fix the dialogue. The dialogue is terrible in the 2 chapters that I have read. I'm a professional at knowing what is good and bad in novels. The dialogue and how the characters say things in the first few chapters are terrible.
Seud:Lol youâre a professional? You saying that makes me think otherwise, please do not try to flex. All of us read novels and it doesnât take a professional to know what crappy dialogue looks like. It takes common sense.
BlakkStan:I was younger then so i had no idea what i was saying. I apologize for my rudeness.