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KoryuHotshot
KoryuHotshotLv54yrKoryuHotshot

Sry dood this is not even a fanfic its copy-paste from the original with different name. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

Anime King

anonymous_life60

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Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

What is the original named?

anonymous_life60
anonymous_life60䜜者anonymous_life60

What is the name of the original from where I copied, please tell?

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14Malcolm_Massey

How often will you be releasing chapters?

anonymous_life60:What is the name of the original from where I copied, please tell?
anonymous_life60
anonymous_life60䜜者anonymous_life60

I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel

Malcolm_Massey:How often will you be releasing chapters?
anonymous_life60
anonymous_life60䜜者anonymous_life60

I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel

Malcolm_Massey:How often will you be releasing chapters?
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14Malcolm_Massey

It's fine I understand. Just release chapters when you can and I will be here to read them.

anonymous_life60:I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
BlakkStan
BlakkStanLv4BlakkStan

Sir/Madam, please try to fix the dialogue. The dialogue is terrible in the 2 chapters that I have read. I'm a professional at knowing what is good and bad in novels. The dialogue and how the characters say things in the first few chapters are terrible.

anonymous_life60:I will try to publish more as soon as possible. I just joined my new job, so by the time I come back is late. I will try my best. I promise I will not drop it. Hope you will support me and the novel
Seud
SeudLv4Seud

Lol you’re a professional? You saying that makes me think otherwise, please do not try to flex. All of us read novels and it doesn’t take a professional to know what crappy dialogue looks like. It takes common sense.

BlakkStan:Sir/Madam, please try to fix the dialogue. The dialogue is terrible in the 2 chapters that I have read. I'm a professional at knowing what is good and bad in novels. The dialogue and how the characters say things in the first few chapters are terrible.
BlakkStan
BlakkStanLv4BlakkStan

I was younger then so i had no idea what i was saying. I apologize for my rudeness.

Seud:Lol you’re a professional? You saying that makes me think otherwise, please do not try to flex. All of us read novels and it doesn’t take a professional to know what crappy dialogue looks like. It takes common sense.
Seud
SeudLv4Seud

Dude, your comment was only a month ago.

BlakkStan:I was younger then so i had no idea what i was saying. I apologize for my rudeness.
SageSatoru
SageSatoruLv1SageSatoru

lol

Seud:Dude, your comment was only a month ago.