Malcolm_Massey

hopefully you don't wait 100+ chapters before adding her to the story and i really hope you don't drag the romance out for too long.

he said he isn't prone to losing his temper. i think that situation qualifies. he attacked them over words. he could have at least got his revenge after they knew it wouldn't bite them in the butt. they literally just got to town and didn't know the rules of the land or anything like that.

"inro" is not correct...

why? this story sounds more interesting than the other one. oh and the other story has yuri. so it's going to drive away a lot of potential readers.

mc that has mushrooms growing out of his head? I don't think i can ignore something like that. so unfortunately this isn't the story for me.

that doesn't really make sense. water is supposed to conduct electricity pretty well.

thank you for letting me know.

he isn't permanently blocked from the other 4 elemental runes, right?

I'm pretty sure mist has something to do with the water in the air cooling down rapidly. so you would need a frost rune or something like that.