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MagicPerson13mthコメントCh 11 CHAPTER 11- MagicPerson14mthに返信 Douglas_PilkingtonCh 5 Chapter 5
- MagicPerson14mthに返信 Alvin_Alvarez
that's actually a really good point. I might do this later in the story. Maybe I'll have mc get rotom from the mansion and make it a rotom dex
Although Zane has done plenty of research on his own, the information network from a Professor who has sponsored dozens of successful trainers is not to be underestimated. - MagicPerson14mthに返信 Noble_K1ng
He's a talented researcher, not trainer. A physical therapist might know all about the human body, but that doesn't make them an athlete nessicarily
"No," Rowan said plainly, "I only give my sponsorship to the most talented trainer, you are not one of those. If you want to pursue this crazy scheme, it will be without my support." - MagicPerson14mthに返信 jose_carmonaCh 1 Chapter 1
- MagicPerson14mthに返信 judgmental_duckCh 1 Chapter 1
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why did you have to say it like that. There was no need
As the luminance dimmed, the figure emerged, revealing himself to be, of course, Ajax. Having executed a well-timed Solar Flare, Ajax narrowly dodged Vegeta's indiscriminately fired, very girthy attack. Despite avoiding direct impact, the intense heat from Vegeta's Ki attack had scorched Ajax's chest, leaving him wincing. - MagicPerson15mthに返信 Indra_
Have you ever camped outside with just a sleeping bag on the ground? That's a very bad idea to do most nights since any moisture on the ground will wick through the material of the bag soaking it. Not to mention bugs and such or dew in the morning.
Contemplating where to find rest, the exorbitant prices of most tents forced me to reconsider. A one-person tent, the most affordable option, demanded upwards of $200, far beyond my budget. Instead, I opted for a more budget-friendly solution—a camping hammock and tarp duo, costing $120. Practicality triumphed over comfort in this financial balancing act. - MagicPerson15mthに返信 Tanyaz
My head cannon is that even if larvesta hatches, he will still be too weak to even start training for a couple of weeks. Keep in mind that Rufflet was caught wild, meaning he had some amount of strength even before they started training.Although catching another mon is an option, our mc just can't afford it at this point.I get where you're coming from tho
This puts me at a disadvantage, as even if larvesta hatches before the match he'll still be too weak to participate. This means that Rufflet will have to overcome a 2v1 if we want to win the badge. - MagicPerson15mthに返信 Daoist_437
sorry it took me so long to see your comment, I meant when I am, I fixed it now so thanks for pointing it out!
この段落は削除されました。 - MagicPerson15mthに返信 Rayan_Alzahrani_4430
Royal Road and spacebattles
2)The other platforms I released on got an AI generated image of the 'Boss' but I can't post images here, sorry - MagicPerson15mthに返信 LoserkiduwuCh 5 Ch 5 - Raging Hydreigon 2
- MagicPerson15mth発表
Hi there readers, as scummy as I think it is to review your own work, I'm doing it anyways.For now I just want to express a few key points1) The first chapter is bad but the rest are better2) I actually want feedback, feel free to point out mistakes or if something is plain bad and I'll probably change it3) I'm having way more fun writing this than I thought I would, so expect more uploads than promised
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He's squib born though
All I could say was that each country had its issues. And that it's difficult to know just how I'll be treated since I'm still under the façade of a muggle-born wizard. Either I'll be subjected to intense scorn and distrust, or I'll be ignored and have little interaction with others. It is all up in the air. But if I had to pick one, it would take the latter in an instant. Naturally, I could be generalising this a bit, since even here in England there are families and wizards who like muggles and their magical children, case and point the Weasleys. - MagicPerson16mthコメント
oh no
"It's the goon squad. Let's go!"