Review Detail of MagicPerson1 in Soaring High - Pokemon SI Isekai

Hi there readers, as scummy as I think it is to review your own work, I'm doing it anyways.For now I just want to express a few key points1) The first chapter is bad but the rest are better2) I actually want feedback, feel free to point out mistakes or if something is plain bad and I'll probably change it3) I'm having way more fun writing this than I thought I would, so expect more uploads than promised