I don't mean to be rude but did you intentionally make those mistakes or did you genuinely not realize you were making mistakes, because how, the punctuation marks are wrong, some sentences are connected with other sentences they shouldn't be connected to and finally a lot of the words in the chapter are spelt wrongly, please fix these issues in your next chapter and try improving the story itself a little more, overall, the chapter didn't do that well.

Am sorry but I think you should improve your writing skills

This is not the correct book

Redo: grimoire system in the apocalypse

The way the fight is orchestrated makes it confusing

A lot of things are confusing about this chapter

What do you mean

If the crystal was red and it touched Darku's hand why was Darko burning. He would have gotten fire resistance as his element would switch to fire due to the crystal being red. Is that a mistake or on purpose.

Why does the enemy name sound so familiar

Great story but the fights are too short

Thanks