so far this novel has an exact plot and scenarios of another novel that i have read , but that one is probably dropped already , mc of that novel is named Noah if i remember correctly regardless , dont really care if it is copied so long as the story is good and wont get dropped

yep , but sadly u just gotta bear with it as its kinda much better than other trash out there.

apparently mc is black so some that like to self insert would probably not find this one to their liking, just leaving it here for those who are still deciding if they want to read this. and before u flame me for being offended and shitt , idc , im just leaving a note to those that are concerned.

Well your certainly arent trying really hard.

Sigh, bro your the embodiment of the sentence "being a drag" honestly bro the amount of cursing i did while reading this chapter full of repetitive BS cant be counted. Mannnn, guess it wont be long till i lose my interest in this work if this goes on. Hope your future readers would be more patient and understanding towards ur work , otherwise they will find themselves dropping this work immediately

Bro this chapter length definitely could be reduced if it wasnt overly repeating BS , it felt like a drag , hope this doesnt happen too often.

I hope mc will fully make use of his future knowledge , i hope the author wont make the mistake of nerfing him just to give us some BS reasons .

I like it, i hope that vivian and some other babes of mc , will influence him a little to change a little , becoming overly obessed with what is HIS to only be his , at the same time would serve as a character development , since in his first world he hadnt experienced genuine care , so maybe he would learn to treassure those while still being true to himself which is being a villain.

Great chap, love it , dont care about romance but it definitely should be a harem, gotta catch em all , particularly the main heroines.

Very very nice mindset of the MC. Good chap author

Wouldnt , edeitic memory type of people the be too op in this world since they can just memorize symbols and use environment mana for their spells?

Whats the point of immortality then? Why does he want to achieve it , it might be a spoiler if you answer it, but i just dont get the point of reading this, you mentioned it wont have a harem, and with that statement i can already predict a little bit of whats gonna happen, It will be a weak to strong type , with constant looking down scenarios , proving wrong shits, then rinse and repeat , at some point some female characters will be introduced but they are irrellevant since they will be used by the author for shipping or baiting , maybe pair them up with someone else other than mc , and you will write romance for those characters while the mc will remain the same cause of 'reasons', which in turn will frustrate readers, probably dropping it, then it will get stale and become something that is not worth reading and then you'll drop the story cause , there are not enough readers , if any will remain at all. Anyways this is just my question as well as rant , cause i run out of interesting stories to read, and im currently browsing stuff here and there, I encounter some stories with good premises but they are all the same , they might be good in the beggining but u can tell that they will eventually degrade. Ill suggest thou that maybe you could try making it a harem but a planned one so it wont be bad, just a suggestion.

This author is definitely a c*ck in real life bro , making 2 mc just so he could visualize himself to be the so called villain one , while the other mc is the personification of all the other men the author wants to get cucked by with , what a disguting thing you are author , our world will definitely be better if you KYS , less bet@, c*ck retard for for the world.

Hey man could you please explain if the mc here is competent, scheming, cunning, manipulative and not a skirt chaser, i like harem but if this mc prioritize collecting pokemons rather than accumulating strenght for the eventuality of a fight with fang yuan then , i would rather not waste my time with it.

Bro atleast , hint at where you are leaning at, harem or not. It would be very frustrating to some if it turns out not the kind they want to read.

sads , anyway thanks for the reply man, all the best for your work.

amen to that brother.

harem?

is gene seed technology? , im really not that familiar with it , i just come across warhammer tidbits so i kinda know little about it, but i think youre right , authir might nit go that path , but in my opinion technology power is kind of inferior to inherent ones, cause its like its borrowed power or something not actually yours, anyway ill just continue to enjoy the story and see where it goes.

Author Bro since , you wont give magic how about giving force like in starwars or maybe make him a psyker as well , that would be a cool concept , him turning up in front of an empire and out of nowhere lifting the while empire and crushing it in a blink , terrorizing his enemies , hahha that would be cool