Welcome to my great book. I'm taking a different route with this one and pray it does well...If you have any questions, drop them hereð€
Killix_Kreed
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ãããWhats the point of immortality then? Why does he want to achieve it , it might be a spoiler if you answer it, but i just dont get the point of reading this, you mentioned it wont have a harem, and with that statement i can already predict a little bit of whats gonna happen, It will be a weak to strong type , with constant looking down scenarios , proving wrong shits, then rinse and repeat , at some point some female characters will be introduced but they are irrellevant since they will be used by the author for shipping or baiting , maybe pair them up with someone else other than mc , and you will write romance for those characters while the mc will remain the same cause of 'reasons', which in turn will frustrate readers, probably dropping it, then it will get stale and become something that is not worth reading and then you'll drop the story cause , there are not enough readers , if any will remain at all. Anyways this is just my question as well as rant , cause i run out of interesting stories to read, and im currently browsing stuff here and there, I encounter some stories with good premises but they are all the same , they might be good in the beggining but u can tell that they will eventually degrade. Ill suggest thou that maybe you could try making it a harem but a planned one so it wont be bad, just a suggestion.
Answering will be dropping a spoiler, so I'll just give you this. The relationship will depend on how you interpret it.
KING_RIP_is1:always been a true seeker of path of immortality, though I must ask, in this treacherous n loneliest path,do fellow mc will have any dao companion?
Killix_Kreed:Answering will be dropping a spoiler, so I'll just give you this. The relationship will depend on how you interpret it.
It's not a cultivation book though. I guess it's similar, but it's not your typical cultivation book
Romance_guy:You didnât add tge cultivation tag
Thieving:Please tell me this is a proper villain â the calm, logical and calculated not the soft, irrational type. Also, for the love of true villains, please no romance.
KING_RIP_is1:always been a true seeker of path of immortality, though I must ask, in this treacherous n loneliest path,do fellow mc will have any dao companion?
I have never seen someone so desperate for harem, lol, it is probably the worst thing that destroys a novel. Plz donât disguise your love for harem as criticism
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Author I see a lot of undertone out of place comedy does it get fixed in later chapters or remains the same currently at chapter 15
Killix_Kreed:No, not at all, this novel will be completed
I unfortunately have a poor sense of humor, so I abandon it completely. I think I tried again in one chapter, but I saw why I left it quicklyðª
FoodReviewSnake:Author I see a lot of undertone out of place comedy does it get fixed in later chapters or remains the same currently at chapter 15
that's a good decision comedy should be forbidden in dark novels ruins the entire atmosphere the more depressing the environment the better
Killix_Kreed:I unfortunately have a poor sense of humor, so I abandon it completely. I think I tried again in one chapter, but I saw why I left it quicklyðª
Killix_Kreed:I unfortunately have a poor sense of humor, so I abandon it completely. I think I tried again in one chapter, but I saw why I left it quicklyðª
FoodReviewSnake:that's a good decision comedy should be forbidden in dark novels ruins the entire atmosphere the more depressing the environment the better
Thank you very muchðªðª. Worry not, I'll finish this novel, and I'll definitely not rush it unnecessarily
FoodReviewSnake:Congrats on 100K I see you reach a million easily if your bound completing the novel
Iâm sorry but this is a poor imitation of a Naruto fanfic. The idea is soooo unoriginal and stupidððð I love evil protagonist but this is not it brother.
Killix_Kreed:Thank you very muchðªðª. Worry not, I'll finish this novel, and I'll definitely not rush it unnecessarily
Just read a few chapter and you will know. Itâs literally a Naruto fanfic but different names. Itâs like reading those chinese Naruto fanfic but a lot worse.
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