AURA_X_Legend
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A very interesting take on this story. If author does not mess up and go with heat or make the MC rabbit and take every girl in site then this story can become very solid. Story has very high potential . But plz author make sure don't make the story wish fulfillment . All the best author.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🥸
yup I am with @badzingan
This name seems interesting and you can use this name to add some jokes later too .
Hey author just a few tip take it or not is upto you , so you know that the original story didn't show the Hindu and other mythology fully and the was very rush at the you can feel it . So take your time building the world and uncover the story that original author didn't get to do ✌🏻✌🏻😁