My Second Life in Another World

Personally as much as I would love to give this FF five stars in every category from my taste this is the absolute most I can give for this FF. First off the writing quality is great. Better than pretty much every fanfic I’ve read on this site save a select few. Very few grammatical errors and an extremely small amount of spelling errors from what I have saw so all good there Second update stability. I haven’t been reading this for a very long time but from what I have seen and how quickly new chapters have been released it is very consistent so no problems there either Third story development is also very good and have very few complaints there however the few that I have are very broad and generally don’t matter much however from my point of view this FF could be a lot better especially when I comes too how the world around him reacts to most of his actions (by him I mean MC). Many of the reactions do seem genuine but some of them seem far fetched, plausible but in some ways can be seen as such. Fourth character design is great. Many of the characters seem real and alive which personally is very pleasing to read. At first it seemed that that may not be the case but after a few chapters it became the truth and the FF became much more enjoyable after that. The personality types that you chose for certain characters although sometimes annoying are somewhat believable and very likeable. The MC has a pretty realistic and not very idiotic personality an did relatable which I am thankful for because it makes the story so much more enjoyable. Fifth the world background. Since the only background that is being used is solo leveling there isn’t much that in my opinion can be said. The author used the background and plot of SL beautifully and integrated the MC into the world in a cliche way but made it work and didn’t completely disregard it a few chapters later but made it used for character development throughout the story which was pleasing. Now adding that fact may not even be on topic so I’ll add this. He has given me a firm image of what the world looks and acts like not only around the MC but the characters surrounding him as well All in all a very enjoyable FF and I am looking forward to more chapters

una de las mejores historias de viajes dimensionales , tiene buena comedia y me saca una sonrisa con las interacciones entre los personajes , el mc es bastante agradable y mas su historia con los personajes , tiene un buen harem donde muestra su amor por todas y tambien linda historia y un odjetivo claro ... es obvio que recomiendo leerla

I love this work even if it isn't perfect so I'll be biased and give it 5 stars. Things to you'll see: 1. The MC going around Korean Manhwa multiverse (its quite unique since you rarely find these types nowadays. Especially good ones. Most are about anime instead) 2. Harem (Look at the tag) 3. Comedy is quite good 4. Everything is good but at the beginning the romance will make you cringe hard. But the author has improved quite a lot since then. I don't know what else to say. I just like this book and am currently binge reading it cause its holidays. Once college starts, I'll come around occasionally to read the stacked up chapters. Thank you for a delightful read author. This is no where near a masterpiece. You rarely ever find those in the fanfiction section. But the author is steadily improving and its still a good read for me so that's all that matters.

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The romance is ruining the novel Why try to have romance if you dont even know how to insert it properly in the story The level of romance in here is like a child made it or an adult who dont have any experience in romance comeon just days of meeting each other they already know they love each other

well I like Solo leveling very much so I want to find a good fanfiction about it and that's when I found this fanfic and when I see the rating is high so I got a high hopes on this but the story development destroying it. It's just simply a wish fulfilment fanfic and the mc playing to be hero. He got so much power from the beginning without even trying. I don't understand why the rating so High that make people took a bite by it but get destroyed when reading it. Writing - 3🌟,I can understand what the story about but I thought it a bit lacking variety. Story development -1🌟,MC get so much power that can make him a god at the very first chapter and MC can't make good use of that power.simply this story is a wish fulfilment story,The romance is a bit lacking and with highly intelligent I think MC is quite stupid. Character design - 2 🌟,I like Yoriichi tsugikuni character and the other characters from SL but the way you make how they act actually disappointed. Updating stability -4🌟, Cause you updated this story well,4 chapter a week is already good. World background -2 🌟, Although I like SL I don't know why because you put so much power in the mc the world background just simply became a play ground for MC. Well that's it for me,To people who talk about being cruel or rude to this criticism I think you should know what the "Criticism " mean first. I can't make a story doesn't make me don't deserve to giving a criticism cause from criticism that someone can learn and know how the other people thinking work about an something. Keep the stability of updating and improve the story development, don't make it too plain.

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I think it's okay without romance would've been better because it's really garbagé characters are a bit shallow and goofier for some reason it has a cartoony feeling to it with how much unfunny comedy there is i think i am around chapter 80-100 or something i dropped it because of how uninteresting it was Some kind of godly parents or secret ancestors or whatever seems to drop this guy into this anime world and watch him be a edgy teenager that's all OVERALL: 4/10 Readable but uninteresting and poorly developed no reason to read

This is the reason I hate OP characters, they become boring super fast. They can do anything from the get go and don't work to get their powers. Like this MC, he can destroy everything in this world from the get go so we know that there will be no suspense when he fights enemies, no real adventurers, no real story, no nothing . As such this story like all other fanfiction out there where the MC is OP from the get go gets a 1 star from me

okay i am liking the idea and am loving this one. so i hope it will continue to be good.. and i can't wait what will happen with him an anomaly in that universe.. please more more more more chapters... thank you...

Just love this Work And specially the ORV arc

poor writing and history... to the point that someone like me who uses a translator (I'm still learning English, and I alternate between reading normally, and with a translator) find it completely irritating, and all that not to mention the so-called "POVs" that don't work for nothing but disappointment.

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This novel place belongs in the deepest parts of abyss. The author writing is so narcissistic and cringe af

Ok. Characters speeches is very awkward. like it doesn't sounds good at all. it needs a lot of refinery to make it ... well, less cringe. MC powers is kinda random. knowing the world of Solo leveling, all characters focus on one power. like how jinwoo focuses shadow, that spectacles rank s fire guy, etc. MC power should be focused on one kind of 'elements' so to say. MC is seriously OP. not that it's a bad thing, but the way author executed it is quite ... eh. Romance part is ... 1/10. MC is dense kind of protagonist. Author seems really bad at making the romance. i mean because of his looks alone could make all girls blushes. including the s rank girl. not even Gigachad makes people blushes and screams by looks alone. so the harem would probably be executed really bad. not to mock you author, but writing a harem stories requires good romance and character development that would make the mc and the heroines fall in love. if not then the story would be bland. The powerlevel in this fanfic is ... questionable. like an S-rank can't solo an A-Ranked dungeon. or how, with yoriichi talents in swordsmanship, he can't kill 20 orcs with his already OP sword arts and OP physical abilities using his swordsmanship only. What i want to say is the fighting scene is 4/10 . not the best unfortunately. The updating speed is cool though. 9chaps per week. so that's that.

Romance... Is destroying this novel, its too much to have a whole chapter for a date not to mention they act like a rabbit in heat,, if this continues on ill definitely drop this novel

i have been waiting for 9 fking months now, hoping for this novel to end so that he can finally continue his other fics, only to see this development! 2 months of inactivity and signs of author no longer being with us..............this is upsetting.

Meh it's alright. Some stuff doesn't make much sense but it's fine. It's a wish-fulfillment so you can expect the mc to start off with the power to destroy the world. Characters r alright, kinda inconsistent with what they r in cannon. You can give it a try if you have nothing else to read.

Nice story that doesn’t forcefully change mc to keep the main plot of the original story intact. ——————————————————————————————————————————