they are half siblings

The author does really well writing the FL's depression and anxiety. Also, there's really good character design and l felt bad that the FL had such a bad relationship with her mom. Usually l don't read these kinds of werewolf books primarily because of cliches and terrible writing but this book is different. I can confidently say that l will definitely be reading this more and everyone else should too!

Sorry what? She slept with someone who had a gf? Kinda disappointing

Jaw out here looking like a razorblade

So this book is so so different but l like it! There's more dialogue than there is descriptive writing but somehow l still knew who was talking and understood everything clearly. I feel so so bad for Hugo and after reading, l understand why he was forced to make that promise. The writing is really good and flows well. I really want to see how Hugo progresses! Well done!

I already guess that either Silas or this guy are gonna be the ML - it would be interesting if l'm wrong

Ok so when l read the synopsis, l was super excited because it was well written and it made me want to read the book very much. But after reading the book, l was slightly disappointed. The book is written quite well and the world background was the normal mafia city trope. But what made me disappointed was the characterisation of the ML. There's absolutely no way that l can accept the pure and lovely FL getting with a man who kidnapped her and was a stalker. Giving justification for the kidnapping by saying her father sold her was just not enough of a reason to make me like the ML. I feel like he just took advantage of the situation to take the FL. If the ML wasn't like that, l would defo have given a higher rating because he was the only complaint l had.

pervert alert! If this is the ML, that would be really bad. There's no way the FL would have stockholm syndrome right?

The FL is really interesting and unique - it's very amusing to see her find so many things troublesome. I also like the intro for the ML - how can he be so innocent but everyone thinks he's a murderer? The author has set up the scene so well and l can't wait to keep reading more!

I really like how fast-paced the writing is and unlike most system novels, there is so much realism. I thanked God that the ML wasn't some badass secret agent who could just immediately twist people's necks after chapter 1. It's nice to see that the ML is reacting like a normal person would. Anyways, the writing is good and the whole story flows well! I've been on the edge of my seat because of all the mystery so l defo recommend.

Blown away - just blown away by this writing skills. I have nothing to say about criticisms. Everything is well written and the world building is too fantastic. How are we 4 chapters in and its like this? [img=update]

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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I mean not necessarily but it's good to increase chapter length in the future if you can - it draws in more readers. For example a person is more likely to read a novel that has 100 chapters instead of 10. In the same manner, a person is more likely to read more if the chapters are longer.

It's really interesting to see a merged background that's both fantasy and modern day. The writing is really good and fast-paced. From chapter 1, l've been cheering for the FL hoping she can not be with the ML but its romance so l don't know. The only thing that could be changed is just having longer chapters is all which is something that speaks to how high quality the book is. Good job!

This is just so cute - the writing is really lighthearted and funny. I was laughing at all the interactions and it really reminded me of my youth (even though l'm not that old). I really got sucked into the story and the pranks were hilarious. And even though l really don't normally read teen romance or romance in general, this is so well done that l'm adding it to my collection. Everyone else should too >.<

The writing quality is really good - everything is clearly written and l had no problem understanding the writing. The prologue was the best chapter in my opinion. The only thing l would say is that the way Kyle is written as a character doesn't make sense. His parents just died and he immediately started acting cheerful in a new place? There's just a bit of unrealism but that doesn't affect the story much. The other thing is that the prologue and the proceeding chapters don't really match. I was expecting to read more about the struggle that Kyle was going through having to accept a new family and also with trying to train himself and tracking Ultra but instead there's more school interactions. This isn't necessarily bad but it just makes the story a bit more disjointed and disrupts the flow. All in all, the story is well written and l'll definitely be adding this to my collection. Good job so far!

The story is interesting overall - a different concept that l think is very eye catching. But l have to agree with other reviews that the style of writing really needs to be changed. I don't really understand the story and it took me re-reading it several times to finally get the gist of everything. But on the other hand, l can tell that english is not the author's first language so for this level writing, it's already good. Improvements would be just engaging in large scale editing to ensure the flow of writing is better.