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Hero_Of_Charity

Hero_Of_Charity

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Lord of Charity, Fanfic Writer, Desperately Lonely

2021-10-09 入りましたIndonesia
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    発表

    Its good, but at some ch, it too short.....................................................................................................................................................

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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 InLoveWithTheCold

    exactly, just like u said, Yamato have wood style but can't strong as hashirama, Itachi open Mangekyo but his not potent as Sasuke, in the end the reason Hashirama, Madara, Naruto, Sasuke has lot of potent most of because chakra of Ashura and Indra, not because of they bloodline. if bloodline really that strong any Senju can be Hashirama, any Uchiha can be next Madara, bloodline is good but not that overpower

    Ch 19 Ch. 19
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 InLoveWithTheCold

    thanks for suggestion, i realize about situation u said, i try to fix that this whole time, but i really suck on writing about character interpersonal, still learning hard right now, hope can be better on future

    Ch 19 Ch. 19
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Zenron

    no

    Ch 19 Ch. 19
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 timeawayfromstress

    limit here is different than u thought, limit is not talent, i said human limit is '100' but not everyone can reach the limit, or even surpass it. i can said Might Guy had 95 Phy after many hard focus training, Madara have 89, Hashirama has 110 because wood-style, while Kaguya have 150 or even 300... no matter how strong they are, below '100' they still mortal human, they become weaker older they are, but Hashirama and Kaguya not affect by this. bloodline does not that strong, Uchiha bloodline ain't that strong, we can see it from how useless Uchiha Clan except Madara. Hashirama or madara strong because hidden buff from ashura and indra chakra....

    Ch 19 Ch. 19
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Thehighesthol1

    we can calm, like u said, Hiruzen busy peeking at people bathing

    Ch 9 Ch. 09
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Madara1137

    I don't watch Boruto bcz it sucks, so i don't know it, and i too lazy to change it

    Ch 18 Ch. 18
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Iamadegenrate

    No, the prof assistant

    "Okay, first, I would like to welcome you to the ninja academy where you will be studying for six years, seeing that you are so excited. Introducing me, Chunin Sosuke Aizen, will be your teacher for six years if there is no accident," said Aizen in a friendly tone
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 EchoSilence

    Sorry for that, i writing many Bs at the first on this book, gonna made a reason on future ch

    "But do you really like me, Kyo? I heard from Mito's grandmother that only when two people love each other, a proposal is made."
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Random_0P_Being

    i understand every words, but it confusing when comes together, come! tell me softly and gentle, what u really want to typing

    Ch 9 Ch. 09
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 TheShadowMan

    thanks for your help dude, i'll fix it when my cold off

    この段落は削除されました。
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
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    U need to made Naruto Fk haku, while haku have Sx with Tsunade,...........................its gonna be interesting one

    Ch 24 Raikage doesn't believe
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
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    That's too short

    Ch 22 Naruto doesn't obey Tsunade and fucks Sakura
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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    発表

    It's Good, but Quite bored to read......................................................................................................................................

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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
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    Thanks, now i realize my live is not that good------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Orthanos

    I'll add it later

    Ch 17 Ch. 17
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
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    Reading your book is very unhealthy for my mental and morals, but i don't know why i am still here?

    Ch 21 stayed alive by having an erection
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 mygrammarsucks

    no, Mc just doesn't care to much with his restaurant...Mc need no restaurant at konoha when he intent to defect someday

    Kyo also teaches his restaurant employees several other fast food recipes such as hot dogs, fries, kebabs, and the legendary KFC chicken.
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Zenron

    Thank you for reminder, seems i had to describe about system more in next chapter

    Ch 17 Ch. 17
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  • Hero_Of_Charity
    Hero_Of_Charity1yr
    に返信 Gabichu_Yeah

    Mc can't be perfect as me who also not perfect, We can assume Mc is quite stupid at first, thinking he is above all because he was born again, but it's good as the story progresses, Mc will grow and slowly think wiser; books that run too perfect and monotonous are sometimes boring

    Ch 5 Ch. 05
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