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King_Noran

King_Noran

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Just a filipino guy who writes for fun, started to write last year and loved it ever since. I'm still not good but I hope you teach me the ropes along the way. Let's hang out! Discord: Ken Ken#2675

2021-04-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Posted

    Shameless review by your boy King Noran here. So, this is a story I've been wanting to work on for a while now. I really like supernatural and fantasy stuff (the tragedy and dark fantasy part is nothing, I just find them more interesting and... realistic? Whatever). I will not abandon my other novel [Adam: The Vagabond]. I'll just repeat it here, I will be splitting time.

  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Posted

    The words are poetic and lovely as a Shakespeare original. There's this hint of longing as you read the characters and the events, plus the subtle but important details make the story beautiful and seamless. Would recommend, definitely worth a try.

  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Andry_Reyes

    thanks for reading my stuff mate. my stomach's not doing well so forgive me for not updating a chapter

  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Posted

    Okay, first the good points. Images are vivid because of the clear and detailed narrative. The story is somewhat interesting, and author is playful with words. However, the bad points lie in the synopsis. The author was 'lazy', which is not a word you want to use since it's an X for most, a turn off. There's also stuff like the narrative breaking the fourth wall on the first chapter, not a fan. Well, you might think that its a bad novel, its not. Its good actually, and the points I pointed out are rather minor. Good work author!

  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Posted

    It's a fun to read book with a lot of good humor. There's... unique, elements at play like a god, well, just read it i cant explain hahaha. Its a good book.

  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Andry_Reyes

    fixed, brother.

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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Clone_v2

    {This bracket} for onomatopoeia is now minimalized and in the later chapters, completely vanished. tnx for the insight!

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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Clone_v2

    trying to fix it now. tnx!

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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Clone_v2

    the [brackets like this] actually is conversation with the nymph, and (brackets like this are Adam's reply to them.) I have decided to use 'Parenthesis' for the other's thoughts or simply narrate theirs but yeah I'm keeping them because it will get even more confusing without them (for me, I think).

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  • King_Noran
    King_Noran3 years ago
    Replied to Clone_v2

    yeah, it was supposed to be "what a weird lady." fixed it. thanks for the insight

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Blood and Metal! (PAUSED)

Humans have been at the top of the food chain for thousands of years, abusing the environment, wasting resources, laying waste to the entire world. Global warming, a phenomenon caused by human waste. Because of this, countless of species are going extinct and the glaciers of the antarctic are starting to melt. Nature has had enough. It brings out it's best weapon yet, and it's clad in full metal! The Twister Virus is a virus that's been rumored to produce Twisters, a man-eating human. Information about it have spread through a website in the net made by James Dober, the one who claims the virus has spread and that it's real. However, his websites and articles were flagged for spreading false data. Still, constant updates and some footages were also presented as evidence for the matter, and as a result, started an internet war. More than half of the world believes that the virus is real, most particularly Philippines (where the story is set). Joseph Brylle, a young, care-free high-schooler thinks the entire thing is just a "well though-out fiction" and found it interesting, so he read and took notes of all the James Dober articles and videos for the sole reason of 'it would make a good fanfic'. One day, on a shitty day, he accidentally comes across a twister (a person infected by the virus) and got bitten by it, successfully infecting him. Will he live the rest of his life as a twister? Or will he retain his sanity? Eitherway, he needs to choose a side very soon...

King_Noran · Sci-fi
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