Nico_Leztier
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- Nico_Leztier23 days ago発表
The story is great! yet leaves something to be desired. The format is structured in a way where it feels more like a skeleton than a final product. everything is there, but it's more of a latter than a slide. idk if that makes sense. i was very impressed with everything else, again you don't have to follow my advice everyone has thier own unique way of writing. keep doing your best!
- Nico_Leztiera month agoに返信 Seth_Rune
I love when people interact with my stories! thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy.
- Nico_Leztiera month ago発表
First, I'd like to say how the opener reminded me of Interstallar or 2001: Space Odessy. that was something I didn't expect. Second, I'd like if there were more actions in between the characters talking, so it is more natural and not just a back and forth. actions are a good way to show emotions. Third, I loved the descriptions they have a lot of care behind them, but I think the descriptions took away from my previous point. but each author has their style. overall, I enjoyed this sort entry into this new world and hope to read more. Good luck to the author, and thank you for reading this. keep up the hard work!
- Nico_Leztier3 months ago発表
Definitely one of the better books on this platform but I would appreciate if you published the chapters in full. otherwise good job! I enjoyed the beginning.
この本は削除されました。 - Nico_Leztier3 months ago発表
the story is good overall, if you want something classic I highly recommend it. the author put a lot of time into this book, and it's clear. Just needs more substance in the world building department. 10/10 will continue to read, and good luck to the author.
- Nico_Leztier3 months ago発表
The characters and story are very well put together, shout out to the great author of this story. 10/10 best story I've read in a while.
- Nico_Leztier3 months ago発表
I love how descriptive and vivid the story is. You can really tell the author put a lot of work into it. I hope the Author continues this amazing story, I will continue to support it.
- Nico_Leztier4 months ago発表
let's be honest, this story is made by a great author! I may be a bit biased because I am Nico, I'm very honored to be the inspiration behind this character. keep working hard toward your dream! I'll keep supporting you all the way!
- Nico_Leztier4 months agoコメント
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
- Nico_Leztier4 months agoコメント
keep up all the hard Work Inos, great job on becoming a wonderful Author!
