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Sometimes our greatest sources of happiness is also the cages that people have. I have always heard the phrase of building up walls, but from a different perspective are walls not just cages?
Thanks for pointing out this typo, it was suppose to read "Aiden would give his life to save her, but what about his life."
Those are my views on art, I love it. It truly is the window to the soul of the artist if you create your art through the lee of self expression and being true to who you really are.
Thank you! I don't know about truth but I try.
It's not necessarily him, just as if you paint a picture of a swan is it that swan or just an image of a swan? In retrospect I can see how that can be confusing. I am sorry for the confusion.
I am glad you understand! :D
I was going for an open-ended statement to allow others to think from his perspective about what more could mean. Do you think that creates a clarity problem?
I can only delete up to 100 words once a chapter is written. I am attempting to rewrite the chapters that I used this shoddy work in. Please bare with me as I am trying to make these changes.
Thank you for your feedback. My original intention for that was for readers who would wait days between reading to help jog their memory between chapters. For the next 10 chapters I did continue this practice. However, I can tell you that this practice has stopped. Again, thank you for letting me know and I am sorry for this.