The story is great very little to no racism everyone gets some character development it is not too unrealistic and the fact your other stories mc is part Indian like me makes me give you a 5 star

Finally a marvel gamer fanfiction with more than 50 chapters all hail the cornbringer ............................... ..........................................................

Your making me cry man

All hail THE CONQUEROR, USURPER OF OLYMPUS, HARBINGER OF THE ELDRITCH, THE VOID WHICH CONSUMES ALL, THE AVENGER ADAMASSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!

My expectations were high and my disappointment immeasurable

Call 911 there's a swordnapping going on

The king of the eldritch has been set free to feast Though the white fang guys are really pitiful they keep interfering with Nyx's life and get rekt again and again I fear there won't be enough left for a terrorist organization if they continue like this

He could also get a power where his wound are healed by the eldritch where instead of blood coming out of wounds they could be healed by a black something replacing the damage dealt to the body like kakuzu from naruto, the jiongu which heals and regenerates his body through black threads just forgoing the stitch Mark's

Yeah that would be awesome as well

Have stars for being honest you have no idea how many I have seen plagiarize novels off as their own without any credits to the author And the story is a great one as well and if you can pls try to improve the grammar as the translation on that website has slightly bad grammar

Would be awesome if he summoned or used powers from something like pride or fake van hohenhein in shadow form from full metal alchemist He could even do alchemy or things like the schnee glyphs since his hands can create magic circles

Her daughter is going to eat a lot these people providing practically buffets to her

Hope naruto and Isabella are paired up would be great to see how that goes and will hiro ever return to complete the quests in one piece world such as saving Roger's son ace and so on

The truth ,the heaven ,the soul all can be found in 2 words Nin - Nin Excited towards naruto world and how hiro will react if Isabella ever started dating or has a crush

All praise the all mighty tasty delicious orgasmic succulent RAAAMMMMMEENNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dont dis the moustache they are a sign of strength and pride just look at these guy's Edward newgate/Whitebeard an gol D. Roger/Pirate king Those beautiful moustaches

If you ever get around to Dbz u should give them fusion with 2 forms like vegeto and gogeta Male and female would be awesome and even better if the dance was removed

Kratos is in DA HOUSE HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Father photo

Pls update more