ThighLover
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ThighLover1yr発表My opinion will definitely be different from others, but from what I've seen so far...this is by far one of THE best dammachi fics I've read on this site so far. Even if it has 7 chapters so far. The world background is a bit slow, not overly so, but that is understandable since the story has only just begun. However, that could also mean the story won't end up short, which is definitely a plus in my book. (4.3/5 stars.) Updating stability is pretty solid. A decent 4-5 chapters is released per week, from what I've seen so far, and imo that's pretty neat. (4.5/5 stars.) Character Design. Now this is by far one of my favourites in this fanfic. The characters so far, Bell, Hestia, Freya - and the spirit, feel so fleshed out. Their reasons, and actions for the way they've been acting is delved deeper on. It is mostly in 3rd person perspective, but when it changes to 1st person, oh man, all I can say is the man has a knack for writing emotionally. Especially the chapter 'Interlude: Hestia'. You should definitely read it from the beginning to feel the build up, and emotions Hestia feels due to guilt from hiding the skills from Bell. (5/5 stars!) Story development, so far its been a great ride. First 2 chapters were a bit similar to the original, but the writer had said he wanted the story to be for those who have never read or watched danmachi so that's justifiable. After chapter 2, things really start to go down. Bell gets stronger, and is not as naive anymore. He gets guidance, and really starts to act somewhat like a 'hero'. However, its only been 7 chapters so I can't really be to sure about the story development but currently its a solid 4 in my opinion. Until more chapters get released. (4.3/5 stars.) Finally, writing quality. In my opinion, it's definitely better than most in this site. Grammar could be mildly improved, but the flow, feel and impact of the story hits like a truck. Therefore, all I can say is that its 5 stars! (5/5 stars.) This is all my opinion, so don't get your hopes up too high. All I can say is that I'm looking forward to what the story has in the future, and how it will develop. Please keep up the great work, Author!
- ThighLover2yrに返信 MakimaChan
I've played Genshin since the first time it came out and grinded to AR 27-30 before taking a break and re-starting my whole account. Right now I'm on AR 19 on my new account
"The gacha hell… Genshin Impact." - ThighLover2yrに返信 MakimaChan
Pulled 5 star Ereshkigal on my 2nd 11 pulls🚬
"The gacha hell… Genshin Impact." - ThighLover2yrコメントCh 14 ...
- ThighLover2yrに返信 unknown_daoist
toradora
I may have fucked up. - ThighLover2yrに返信 Djabilong
OCD?😭😭
この本は削除されました。 - ThighLover2yrに返信 egg_tart
fr bro picked up a sword for the first time and beat an experienced sword master with ease
Tsugikuni Yoriichi - ThighLover2yrコメント
remember when I gave you my pen
10,000,000,000$ ] - ThighLover2yrコメント
reminds me of Shang-Chi now
"What kind of artefacts are we talking about? Like the ten rings?" I could hear how on edge she was when the topic of the ten rings came up. - ThighLover2yrに返信 Dragon_FRUITs
MTL is a shortened version of machine translation I think
Yo! This is the editor, just letting you know that this is my first time editing an MTL novel, so please bear with me! - ThighLover2yrに返信 Whtvr
Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years
"That can't be right, Master!" Linglong shook her head. "The talented seniors are all showy. Only if you show off will the sect value you and nurture you. Isn't quicker and safer for me to grow stronger?"detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start東方 · Li Baijin - ThighLover2yrコメント
doesn't this mean that Naruto can't learn rasengan, rasenshuriken, massive rasengan etc because he doesn't have wind affinity?
Two hours of constant running and strength building without chakra, combined with going through the correct Taijutsu katas, while my clones worked on both Lightning and Water release. - ThighLover2yrコメント
I haven't gotten a single 5 star to this day...to this day😔
"The gacha hell… Genshin Impact." - ThighLover2yrコメント
he turned ginger
'Haycien von Saharan?' thought Mathias when he heard that name, before he carefully observed his surroundings, where he noticed that his hair was no longer jet-black, his natural color, instead, it was of a crimson color. - ThighLover2yrコメント
why did you have to stop it on a cliffhanger💔
'A platinum knight now sat on that spot!' - ThighLover2yrコメント
oh my great heavens...
"Bathwater..." - ThighLover2yrコメント
nah this dude a professional at this shi
This bastard lied to Xiao Rongyu again. - ThighLover2yrに返信 Rune_God
lightnovel pub
I was waiting for when I could be alone with Yoshiwa. And as soon as the bell rang for lunch, I noticed Yoshiwa carefully. Ever since that argument, Yoshiwa and Sakura haven't been spending much time with Tomose and Kana.