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Cosmic_Witcher
Cosmic_WitcherLv59mth
2024-07-05 01:23

The story progresses organically so far. It's a wholesome tale of a lazy introvert protagonist in a world of Wednesday, with some interesting twists. The portrayal of the MC as a lazy introvert is hilarious. I hope the author keeps up the good work! When the story takes a more romantic turn, especially with the introduction of the Wednesday character, I'd love to see some wholesome dramatic tension unfold. A well-written love triangle could add a new layer of comedy situation and excitement.

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Nathe07
Nathe07Author

I'm glad you like the story and Luke's personality. That was the intention to make Luke lazy, introverted and with a certain arrogance because of his powers. So that he can develop with the inclusion of Wednesday's characters.

mohamed_hany
mohamed_hanyLv4

is it a harem

Nathe07:I'm glad you like the story and Luke's personality. That was the intention to make Luke lazy, introverted and with a certain arrogance because of his powers. So that he can develop with the inclusion of Wednesday's characters.
Alex_Gutkovsk
Alex_GutkovskLv3

Yeah, but it isn't a thing even at this point in ch100. But the harem is confirmed, at least 2 girls.

mohamed_hany:is it a harem
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Yuri ntr?

Alex_Gutkovsk:Yeah, but it isn't a thing even at this point in ch100. But the harem is confirmed, at least 2 girls.
Alex_Gutkovsk
Alex_GutkovskLv3

No smut with any of female leads yet. So don't know.

Haku_Ouroboros:Yuri ntr?
LordCampione
LordCampioneLv15

so I read the story but stopped to build up a stock but when I stopped the mc started dating Wednesday and it didn’t look like he was ever going to get with Enid again so my question here is did that change? is he back with Enid and now in a throuple with her and Wednesday?

Alex_Gutkovsk:No smut with any of female leads yet. So don't know.
Alex_Gutkovsk
Alex_GutkovskLv3

I also stopped reading to stockpile the chapters. But I left where MC and Wednesday were an official couple, and Enid showed unwillingness to let go which looks like an obsession. I didn't read further, but you can kinda guess where things are heading, but that's just a guess at this point.

LordCampione:so I read the story but stopped to build up a stock but when I stopped the mc started dating Wednesday and it didn’t look like he was ever going to get with Enid again so my question here is did that change? is he back with Enid and now in a throuple with her and Wednesday?
LordCampione
LordCampioneLv15

damn now I don't even know if I'll get back to reading it cuz I was really looking forward to this throuple situation actually being a thing

Alex_Gutkovsk:I also stopped reading to stockpile the chapters. But I left where MC and Wednesday were an official couple, and Enid showed unwillingness to let go which looks like an obsession. I didn't read further, but you can kinda guess where things are heading, but that's just a guess at this point.
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Alex_Gutkovsk:Yeah, but it isn't a thing even at this point in ch100. But the harem is confirmed, at least 2 girls.
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