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Twilight: Rebirth

作者: DumbedDown
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Death is a constant, but what happens when you get a chance at a second life? Gabriel was given a second chance in a world of supernaturals. Being gifted with powers beyond his comprehension. All he wants to do is find the meaning to a happy life, with friends, family and possibly some love? ********** (Beginning chapters are a bit rough, but the pacing and writing do get better a little after chapter 10. I was worried about my novel not being interesting, so I used overly complex words that really weren't needed. I'll try and go back at a later point and fix any glaring issues. If I mess up with the lore, please understand that I'm writing this novel for fun. I'm not getting paid for anything, this isn't locked behind some paywall. So please be kind.) #Romance #Reincarnation #R18 #Overpowered #SliceOfLife #Twilight

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DumbedDown
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In my opinion, the novel is a 5 Star! But everything is subjective, so please take your time to read the novel. As mentioned in the synopsis, this novel is more slice of life orientated, so the pacing won't be fast, quite a slow burn actually. The story will initially follow the movie storyline, but the MC's actions will make it deviate from canon. The MC is absurdly OP for the world's setting, but it also gives me access for more play-around. Please don't go commenting that you dislike the novel, solely because the FML is not your preference. It's not my fault you dislike them, sorry.

VonBritannia
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bro theres a reason why this is number 1 on popular rankings rn. the main issue with twillight fanfics is that they always do crossovers or make an oc the female lead or make the story super depressing and crindge. this ends up runing the story easily. you good sir do not have this issue. keep it up.

DaoistXlSNQT
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I love this story so much I would love to hear some hellsing abridged sayings in this fic would be funny to hear the mc say words what alucard said while fighting other vamps keep up the good work

Lucius_SS
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This is the only twilight fan fiction I've read that's any good and continuing to post more. May you continue to bless us with chapter after chapter.

Crow_Myth
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Read the first chapter and I'm already hooked good job

Trickyreadz
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Hamtaro_
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The story is pretty darn good buddy! Can you change the synopsis though? People are gonna think it's AI-generated (I did.) especially with the cover being what it is. Keep up the good work!

Sergio_Navarrete
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So far so good. Keep it up author!

SimpForGoodNovels
SimpForGoodNovelsLv11SimpForGoodNovels

Overall, liking the story so far! It’s well written, story seems intersting. Characters actually interact with one another and don’t feel like NPCs. Too early to say more!

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

The_Facts
The_FactsLv13The_Facts

Great story so far, however the author is a bit whiny about the loud minority and their hate comments.

Insert_Here
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This is actually really good I do not know why the author is getting hate in the comments, One thing I can say to the author is that there will always be people who hate what you do you, have got to learn to not let it affect you.

Justindemigod
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it's always nice to see a new Twilight fanfic release keep up the great work.

sapient
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this novel is more awkward than twilight itself.

Kaxharu_Ryuzaki
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los capítulos fueron muy buenos, las interacciones entre personajes estuvieron bien hechas, espero que continúes esta historia hasta el final, le veo mucho potencial, lo que mas disfrute fue la parte de la vida diaria del protagonista, creo que concentrarse en ello principalmente es lo que hace que este fanfic no se vea arruinando con los poderes que le diste a tu protagonista. (solo sus poderes de vampiro ya anulan por completo cualquier problema que pueda presentar Crepúsculo, la única manera en que tenga dificultades, requeriría crossover y esto destruiría la trama de Crepúsculo)

NeaCambelt
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Une nouvelle fic twilight cool continue comme ça auteur [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

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Dovah_Destroyer
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please do not drop your novel I've been waiting for a good Twilight it doesn't get dropped after like 30 to 40 chapters

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