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Training Pokemon

For a while I have read over all the cut and paste concepts on the Pokemon world trying to make the host strong as well as his Pokemon using the gamer system. I understand it's a dangerous world and you want to give the MC extra plot Armour. I thought about this and realized that the host would rarely fight in matters that needed strength except in situations that dealt with Legendaries. If that becomes par for course though in the story. What's the point of making this a long term novel that deals with the growth of a character. I would've set this as a short novel that deals with an overpowered MC that one shots all situations that need it. Also I wish to point out that Pokémon have sentience. The world also has abundant food with berries being around and the things that happen in Pokedex's in the games, I'm gonna try to stay partially away from as this is rated at a rating lower than 18+. (That's mostly because I find cursing unnecessarily to be just plain bad etiquette. I can understand if it happens when something bad occurs and you can't control your mouth. But flippant use of them just to annoy people is just that. Annoying...) The original story is also about friendship, journeying, and finding a purpose in the world they're in with their friends. Sabrina, Dawn, and May deal with contests. While Ash, and Iris love battling. Brock even finds a purpose on his journey as a breeder fully going into the field instead of just pursuing it as a side hobby like before when he had to take care of his brothers. As such I find it, while not useless for writing. A complete disappointment and withdrawal from the nature of what this world represents. What with hope and friendship being these main parts, and if you're fighting every creature you meet into submission. How is it possible for you to truly bond beyond servant and subject. Another thing is inside this story I will not limit the host to having 6 Pokemon on his being. No this would only apply to gyms or competitions as these kinds of things would require a more formal structure. I have decided on a new idea for this system that instead focuses on the Pokemon themselves. This includes knowledge, buffs, items and so on. The system will be less of a RPG stat layout directly as this still exists. But the stats come from training with the other stuff like others would train in a real world. The exception being Buffs. He can also use the system to build a utopia for his Pokemon. He can even slow down the time inside to gain larger training time later on for specific species which grow slower like Ninetails or various Ghost Pokemon. Enough of this Synopsis and rant though and on to the story. Ps. It's obvious, but I don't own this image. So I take no credit for it. And if someone eventually would like to make an image for this story I will thank you. Sincerely. PPS: Comments help me keep my want to write. When I notice there's not a lot of comments. I second guess my writing, like a lot. Probably for a good reason as I know I like to over analyze things, and I KNOW that's gonna influence my writing. I can see it deeply ingrained. So if you guys like my style please comment.

KingIceReaper · ゲーム
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Chapter 7-Bing You Got A House

Thanks for the title 2 and 3 names. Hope we can get some more soon. Also to anyone wondering where I went, I have school I focus on most of the time. I usually do my writing during my own free time during the weekends or possible breaks/holidays. Anyway's back to the next chapter.

As I walked to the store I noticed something interesting in the corner of my vision. It was a Dojo of sorts, so me being the person I was walked up curiously to check it out instead of the store next to it which I had come for. Walking around the outer walls I finally managed to get to the gate where I noticed a sign on it.

"For sale by the previous owner."

Walking up to the sign I felt something deep within me resonate as I got closer to the notice. Putting my hand on it I felt burning pain go straight into my hand. It was almost as if it had been seared into my hand. Looking at the notice I saw a bloody hand slowly fade from it's surface where just moments ago I had put my palm at. In that moment I heard another system announcement. Interrupting the thoughts of me being potentially cursed.

"First Pokemon Facility gained. Only the First Building will be bought for free. All payments involving taxes and such will be handled by the system for the host's convenience. Pokemon Dojo is the first facility. The Dojo can be used as a portal to all of the owner's Pokemon as a place to train if they so wish. Pokemon that are the Host's will gain the ability to go here whenever they want. By reporting the building to officer Jenny you may redeem this building to work this way through the Code 5005004040. All Pokemon have gained the ability to live in the Over-Pokeworld. The Over-Pokeworld itself is seperate from the Pokeworld. You can also teleport here whenever you wish.

This Space is currently only ten by ten meters wide. All that is in the space currently is only dirt, the most fertile dirt. The dirt has the ability to enhance a ground Pokemon's Attack if it is carried within a bottle that is completely filled with the dirt. You are currently allowed to only create 10 bottle's of this every day. Which can later be increased through certain means."

Gasping in amazement at all the prizes in this moment I forgot about the bloody print that was previously on the paper.

Looking around I went inside the gate secretly before my Pokedex started to ring. Grabbing my Pokedex I started to worry about the unknown number as even in my past life I didn't know any, or even ask for one until I realized that this was probably the Professor. Answering it I suddenly heard a large bang on the other side as well as someone screaming "My Leg."

Wondering briefly if I had done something wrong in my past life; I wondered just what I should be doing at that moment. Deciding to wait so that everything on the other side could settle I sat on the ground knowing in my heart this would take a while. After about five minutes I finally got someone on the other side of the phone. "Hello is this the one who recently bought my old Dojo?" Realizing just what was going on now it made me realize further that my power could effect the reality of this world. I had wondered how the system would pay for this. It appears that the system could just will these things into reality. Well at least money could be. Probably through some troublesome paperwork involving the government somehow.

Answering the person and hinting for them to introduce themselves I stated "Yes I am, and who might I be talking to." After what seemed like an eternity, or at least one on the phone/Pokedex thingy I waited for the other to reply "I am know by many.....No I can't do it, I am known as Jacob but that's not to important. All I want to know is what you plan to do with that old building of mine."

Thinking about it I decided to answer truthfully with what I had planned on the spot with it, as I had been waiting here for the past few minutes. "I just plan to use it as a place to train my Pokemon sir." Seemingly satisfied with my answer which he probably was I finally heard a few weak words "Thank You." Waiting for a second the phone cut off, and I wondered about the way the man acted.

He didn't seem suspicious not at all in fact. He seemed nice, or was I becoming less paranoid about people. That could be a bad thing I told myself trying to prevent any easy feelings of trust from forming around other people. Putting off these thoughts for later I got up and walked further into this new home of mine. As I got closer I noticed that the building looked strangely new and old at the same time.

"The System automatically repairs all damages done to all buildings by dismantling the particles of the damaged parts and reassembling them again once more whole. If any part's cease to exist than the system will create some. Once more to remind the Host a Dojo is used to train people or Pokemon, and as such it will help speed up the process of training of those who train within. At least compared to normal training plans."

Once more sighing in contentment at the message I fully explored all four floors. The Basement counted as one as well and this was why there was four floors. On each floor there was at least 50 rooms total. It was larger than most hotels I knew of. I wonder if this is the advantage of using Pokemon for construction working.

Over all however I was impressed with the building I had gotten from the system, and the yard that was around it. Such as the walled in mini forests of fruits, the Ponds out and around as well as the grasses that grew tall to hide Pokemon I was pleased. "Thanks System," I couldn't help but praise deciding to stay here for a few seconds.

There was some major revisions on this one that may foreshadow the future a bit. 1040 Words

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