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The World of TV and Movies

作者: Shubh_Mittal
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The MC was reborn in a fusion world of TV series and Movies in America.

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BryndenRivers
BryndenRiversLv12BryndenRivers

It's too early to tell where this will really go but it has started well and I will be reading as it continues. Some parts feel ChatGPT-ish but the dialogue is really good so its not a big deal.

Deisy_Marin
Deisy_MarinLv3Deisy_Marin

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Yashwant_Varma_1375
Yashwant_Varma_1375Lv4Yashwant_Varma_1375

The story is well written and entertaining. pls don't drop it

Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15Etiger789

This fanfiction has a lot of potential. unfortunately, the Author is crippling it, and here's why. 1) Chat GPT: I don't mind Authors using 'Chat GPT' to help them write and fix grammar or sentence structure; what I do mind is just letting the machine do all the work and then only changing a single line. You've constantly repeated lines and thoughts of Alex like always being greatful or thanking someone or saying learning this will help me look at a culture completely differently and stuff like that over and over again. We don't need to be told that constantly. 2) Dioluge: It's dry; at some moments, it's okay, but overall, it just hashes and repeats, saying they had a conversation and feeling closer to the person because of said conversation. I don't know if you've watched all the shows you're adding or just read the wiki, but if it's that later, I suggest you do some watching. 3) Missed Opportunity: I'll give an example; in one of the chapters, you said Alex and Harvey helped on a case but then skipped everything and just said hey, they did amazing. Okay...so what did they do that was good? How did they perform, there could have been a chapter dedicated to their first-ever case, but you just skipped past it completely. Those are the three main problems I see with this fanfiction so far. But just because It's not my cup of tea doesn't mean it's not yours. Give it a chance; who knows, you might like it.

John_Addams_2136
John_Addams_2136Lv4John_Addams_2136

V good story plz don’t drop and update as frequently as u can

Cerberus09
Cerberus09Lv1Cerberus09

Está muy bien espero que siga así y que las actualizaciones sean continua .......................................................................................

Pedro_Ricardo_1032
Pedro_Ricardo_1032Lv1Pedro_Ricardo_1032

Muito Bom, so não dou 5 estrelas lor ter achado o desenvolvimento do romance muito apressado. Do resto estou gostando bastante , espero ver mais series envolvidas na história

Romer_Jus
Romer_JusLv2Romer_Jus

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