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The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates

作者: Leo_DiAngelo
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What is The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates

WebNovel で公開されている、Leo_DiAngelo の作者が書いた The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates の小説を読んでください。In the Desolate world of one piece, a young man finds himself wrapped right in the middle of it all. Follow him as he follows his captain and proclaimed "Father" Whitebeard as they explore the sea, fi...

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In the Desolate world of one piece, a young man finds himself wrapped right in the middle of it all. Follow him as he follows his captain and proclaimed "Father" Whitebeard as they explore the sea, fight pirates, marines and God knows what in this fan fiction web series. DISCLAIMER : I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS FROM THE ONE PIECE ANIME OR MANGA EXCEPT FOR THE OC. THIS IS MY FIRST NOVEL, PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW ON WHETHER I COOKED OR NOT. MUCH LOVE

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Arthur, The progenitor of all living dragons. He is one of the evilest existence in the entire heaven World. Such that even heaven does not tolerate his existence. But what heaven can do he is Strong. Wrong!! Strong will be an insult to him. He is an actual supreme outlaw. But still, he is not satisfied with his foundation. Hence, to achieve complete perfection in all laws he practices in Soul, Body, and Essence Cultivation, he reincarnates thousands of times to achieve absolute perfection. After countless years, he tries all the laws in the existence and trains them to perfection. But in only 2 laws he gets complete perfection, and the last law is left which is Chaos. A law that is hated by everything in heaven. Heaven, itself hates this law to its core. Because the essence of this law is against heaven. Countless years ago he was one the strongest and evilest being in the world but in order to get complete perfection in his cultivation foundation, he reincarnated time and time. Whereas those people who were ant in front of him now have become strong. Some of them have ascended to a higher place. Now some of them have become so powerful that they can crush Arthur. Like an elephant crushing a group of ants. Author Notes: I have shared a reference image in my discord server so you can join there, For better imagination, while reading, Discord: discord.gg/ugvjUNtFQb Patreon: patreon.com/WineRed Ko-fi: ko-fi.com/wine_red

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AlanCee
AlanCeeLv14AlanCee

Only read if you’re bored, I read up to ch.12. Mc starts off stranded on an island at age 9, eats a zoan devil fruit (ghidorah version), and somehow easily awakens all 3 aspects of haki and also awakens his fruit before he’s 15. Whitebeard and Big Mom land on his island and they instantly fight after tiny dialogue, meets Xebec and gets roped into joining the crew. Also the mc doesn’t remember his name just because, (No explanation for that) and then Xebec gives him a name. Word count is too low per chapter, grammar is barely average, paragraphs are thick blocks of text. Author doesn’t differentiate between talking and thinking, characters are super bland, every interaction between people is so basic it hurts to read. Ex: (Whitebeard looks at me funny. “Let’s fight gurarara” laughing just because.) There is so little context and the mc just looks dumb trying to fight whitebeard, big mom, sengoku, etc at the beginning chapters.

Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv13Passerby_Venne

The story is really well written, a great start so far and enjoyable... there's just one major flaw that I recommend that the author fixes. The paragraphs are really long, making it straining for the eyes and hard to read. there are unnecessarily long paragraphs that are like a running text that flows without end. When I started out writing fanfics, that was the first error I committed that I had to learn to fix, and if you the author can correct this, you'll have very popular stories in the future based on what you've written so far. Yes, I did write this review in one long paragraph, running text, to make a point. below, I'll write the exact thing I did do far, but with smaller paragraphs as an example. ------- The story is really well written, a great start so far and enjoyable... There's just one major flaw that I recommend that the author fixes. The paragraphs are really long, making it straining for the eyes, and hard to read. There are unnecessarily long paragraphs, that are like a running text that flows without end. When I started out writing fanfics, that was the first error I committed that I had to learn to fix, and if you the author can correct this, you'll have very popular stories in the future based on what you've written so far. This should have been much easier to read and understand, hopefully, you got my point. 3.9/5 and if you correct the paragraphs, It'll be a 4.3/5.

Bob_Bob_8597
Bob_Bob_8597Lv2Bob_Bob_8597

Interesting novel so far with good grammar and spelling. I like that you didn’t choose Marco and made your own character as whitebeards vice captain

zNoir
zNoirLv2zNoir

I really liked the story, keep it up Mr. Author 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

Rinchan7
Rinchan7Lv3Rinchan7

Just happened to come across this one and I have to say that this was an amazing read so far. Great writing, highly recommended to give it a read.

Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1Jordi_Hardiansyah

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applo43
applo43Lv13applo43

Bro,keep it up your doing great. And I have to say I personally like it

Ozerist
OzeristLv14Ozerist

Not my cup of coffee but maybe u guys might like it Try reading for 5-10 chapters

Noland29
Noland29Lv4Noland29

LET. HIM. COOOOOOK amazing fanfic idea

Sterky67
Sterky67Lv14Sterky67

me gusto espero que no lo abandones ni te quedes sin ideas [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Goce_Delcev
Goce_DelcevLv2Goce_Delcev

very good and interesting story with fast updates.

DaoistEQ1qe7
DaoistEQ1qe7Lv1DaoistEQ1qe7

História interessante,principalmente por começar na época dos monstros antigos mas algo que poderia mudar era a personalidade do MC,tudo bem ele ser dorminhoco e tals isso até vai,mas ele ficar falando desse jeito arrastado é muito estranho dava para sei lá fazer o marco "curar" esse problema do MC ou encontrar um médico para isso pq um cara tão forte falando desse jeito é bizarro e sem graça

Tim_QQQ
Tim_QQQLv1Tim_QQQ

written well. mc acts a little autistic due to merging? with the kaiju devil fruits personality. the story starts at the rocks era which is always fun to read. its a bit of a crack fic as the mc gains strength very fast and dosent focus at all on training. brief mentions of it if anything. if thats your thing this is a fun read .

Obito122
Obito122Lv1Obito122

Name of navol???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????..l,l,,,,,,,,,,,…,.,……………..,…………………………………….,ll,l,.ll.l….,,,,,,,,,…..

kishizawa_Hiiro
kishizawa_HiiroLv3kishizawa_Hiiro

nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!nice...!!!

Void_Overlords
Void_OverlordsLv14Void_Overlords

to me this story is one of the best i read

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