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This is really stupid… at first this fic was doing good, until you had the mc constantly let his gfs family get away alive everytime. If you can’t even make this story deviate from the og plot with your own, then that just shows all you know how to do is just copy and paste shit as an author. What’s the point in reading this if you only change like 15% of the story???

This is medieval times bruh, there’s 0 iq in this situation which reflects your intelligence author…

Literally nothing happened in this chapter bruh…

You gotta learn to use different quotations for talking/thinking. Use “ “ for talking, and ‘ ‘ for thinking, it’s not hard.

Yeah… Author you need to be clear in your info summaries. If this is a multiversal fic, then OBVIOUSLY put it in your summary so people aren’t confused. Rn this fic is a letdown, cause you definitely didn’t know how to advance your story, you scrapped it and just reset to 0. Change your shit in the summary so ppl won’t be confused, learn from your mistakes in the og story, and for gods sake google words you’re not sure about.

Meh still seems dumb. You’re effectively killing the story just to start a new one, that doesn’t make any sense. If you ran out of ideas then just say so, this is what happens when authors make their mc op too quickly. You barely even fleshed out the plot and only cared about advancing the mc’s power and getting to the next fight, which ends up with you not knowing what to do with your story because you rushed it so fast. Also your grammar needs work, just use google if you’re not sure how to spell a word, it literally only takes a second to do so.

Young grandmaster Chinese bs again, mixed with strongest only vibes. May I remind everyone that mc killed his own subordinate, and was almost going to kill the hollowfied souls, for no reason other than “he could”.

Why would you kill your subordinates???? Especially the hollowfied captains/lieutenants?? What purpose does that serve, other than making your mc evil? I fell like the author is writing random shit just to be edgy or all Chinese young master style

How about none of the above??? Why don’t you just flesh out the story you have now instead of introducing forced plot drama, there was literally no reason to do this. It seems to me that you just didn’t know what to write next sk you just had him restart in another world just because.

I was fine with everything until chapter 45, the god above all is apparently above chaos and the rest of the trinity gods, and sends mc si hades into a different world where that hades is the one we know from history. His mission now ends up with him being forced to destroy that world to return to his own. It’s such shitty forced plot that I almost want to drop this fic. I’m only reading this because of boredom and the fact this fic was pretty decent, but THAT idea in ch. 45 was such a garbage take. If another shitty forced plot drama happens again I’ll be done with this for good. The crazy thing is that this fic has potential to be great.